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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Davy Kraken,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A lovely piece! Your imagery painted such a vivid picture that I felt as if I were standing there observing the things that the author was seeing. Good job!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear winklett,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Lovely imagery graces the lines of your poem. The rhyme scheme and flow is great. Word choice is excellent.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Dear Megan,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A charming and eloquent tale! I loved your story that entwines characters of books of these great authors with their imagined conversation. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Kate,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A nice love story about lovers being separated only to be reunited at another time in their lives. Thank you for sharing!

Suggestions: None

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Fontaine,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Good imagery in your piece. Stanzas 2 and 3 have definite rhyme scheme (abab), while Stanza 1 has a different flow.

Suggestions: None

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Sway,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A sad free-verse piece reflecting the hurt that you felt during this time in your life. It is always very hard to lose someone that you love.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear KT,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Dark and disturbing "take" on "Hush, Little Baby", but rhyme scheme is good and the piece does flow smoothly. It would nicely fit into the horror/gothic genre.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sum1,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I think you did a good job in utilizing the prompt. I have found it difficult to write from the perspective of the opposite sex! Your verses flow smoothly, and the rhyme scheme is good.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Legerdemain,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I wholeheartedly agree! Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Lexi,Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I don't know if this is truth or fiction, but I do know it is well-written. Thanks for sharing!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Kittiara,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A cute story!!! I can hear one of my grandson's explaining his brother's disappearance now! Good job with the dialogue only requirement.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear writerchuck,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: There are many truths within your free-verse poem. Each of us as writers strive to achieve expressions of "art". Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Suggestions: None.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Amy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A sad love story! Your character development was good, as was your imagery. The poignant tale touched my heart.

Suggestions: None.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Bob,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Guess your piece points out that opposites do attract! This free-verse poem about friends that are so very different stresses that anything is possible if you use your talents to their optimum potential.

Suggestions: I noticed several spelling errors/typos.....I am so guilty of this myself when I am rushing to post a piece. *Smile* Let me say, that these are suggestions, only. I am not an editor nor a professional at reviewing. In the second stanza, line 1, suffisticated should be sophisticated; same stanza, line 3 usefull should be useful; in stanza 4, line 3 usefull should be useful; and in stanza 7, line 4, insead should be instead. Finally, in stanzas 9 & 10 eachother should be each other. Hope this helps!

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Jess,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Flow is smooth in this free-verse piece. Good word choice.

Suggestions: None

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear ConfusionFusion,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Thank you for taking me on an insightful trip! It would be quite a shock to someone to have lucid moments within the sea of insanity and wonder who, what, when, and where they were. Nice job!

Suggestions: None

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of A Day in the Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Acendence:

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Nice period short tale. Good character development. Sad piece.

Suggestions: None.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear July!,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Good job! I have found that life can be a continuous contrast each day! Good flow, very smooth and very descriptive.

Suggestions: None noticed.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Mairu,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Deceit can be painful. Emotionally charged piece.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Thaddeus,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Lovely imagery! Good rhyme scheme and flow.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Tammy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A great description of a nightmare! Good imagery!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Dear hiryuu,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good story line. I think it might be a good piece to expand.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Bwitchd3,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: It is always hardest to say goodbye to the things that we love! Your abcb style is good. The rhyme scheme and choice of words flows smoothly.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear dawson,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Such an heart-wrenching decision that no one, especially a mother should have to make! Your poem has a good fluid style and flow.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear dawson,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: The choice that you write of is a heart wrenching one! However, your style is good and the piece has a good flow.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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