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Review of Me, Myself, and I  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Destiny Kae,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good style and flow! I enjoyed reading your concise piece. It expressed a great message...."to thine own self be true."

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Hallways  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sofei Monet,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A short free-verse piece with a good flow. It expresses the feelings of youth trying to fit in. This is a difficult stage in our lives....but, it does pass! (Thanks be to God!)

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Naykd Poet,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good job! I enjoyed reading your piece. It shows the deep feelings that you have for your parent(s).

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)
Dear Jedi Moose,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Nice job! I enjoyed the flow of the piece. The repetition added an extra charm of the observance of the pair sitting on the bench.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear ShiShad,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Very well-written piece. Your free-verse flows very smoothly and tells a charming love story.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Leger,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I loved the "dialog" between the ventriloquist and his"dummy". A cute idea that worked well for the contest! I hope that you did well in it!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Malcolm Mandela,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I found this to be an interesting perspective on life. Your poem flowed well, and the rhyme scheme was perfect.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of From East to West  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear PoeticMisconceptions,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed reading your piece. Though the rhyme scheme was inconsistent, it didn't impede the flow, nor the meaning conveyed.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of As the River Goes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear AshleyR,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A short piece that speaks volumes about friendship! The free-verse style flows well.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Dear TB,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Sad to believe that a person can be in such despair! I thought your piece shed a light into the feelings that one who was contemplating suicide experience.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Sinead,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute, concise and to the point!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: Perhaps you should consider a period after the third line. If you tend to run on from line to line, it seems that "not meeting you"
go together, and that changes the meaning of the piece. (only a suggestion, though)

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear WistyOne,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Original! Nice acrostic describing the "beginning" of something!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Dakota,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good flow to this free-verse piece. Interesting and different!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of The Fish Tale  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Daizy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute & concise! A wonderful entry for the contest.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Jake and Bagheera  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Diane,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Charming story! Well-written. Good character development.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear LauraM,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Excellent imagery. Your description of physical abuse is riveting. Abuse is a very real and very serious problem in today's society. Thank you for making us more aware of this tragedy.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear infinitelycreative,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: The lyrics of your song flowed well, and gave us vivid imagery of the incident about which you write. I can certainly imagine it becoming one that I hear on the radio.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Free_RIP,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Well written story with a smooth flow. Interesting character development. Could this be the beginning of a longer piece?

Errors:In the second segment, eighth paragraph, next to last sentence, you have a typo. There is an extra space between the hyphen following gentle and seeming. *Smile*

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear butterfli,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: It is always tragic to lose a loved one or a friend. Your imagery was lovely in this free-style piece and expressed quite well your feelings of personal loss.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: Did you choose to use the spelling of "butterfly" as in your handle? At first, I thought it might be a typo, but after noticing your handle, I felt that it might be a choice.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Sena,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good job! Your poem conveyed a story of love and loss. The stanzas flowed smoothly, and your rhyme was consistent.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Kira,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I am sure that you were thrilled to receive such a birthday tribute from people who care about you! The piece speaks of their love and adoration for you. The rhyme scheme is very good, and the piece flows beautifully.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Nom D. Guerre,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Nice job! Flow is smooth. Characters are believable. I like the way that you started and ended the story with a connected thought.

Errors:In paragraph 15, you wrote, "...the purple beads scattering a rolling off the table..." I think there is a typo there. Did you mean "...the purple beads scattering and rolling off the table..."? I sometimes do this when editing my own piece....*Smile*

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear D. C. Kennedy,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Nice piece. Good rhyme scheme and good flow. The message is as timely as it is to be heeded.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Kathleen,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good free-verse style. Flow of piece is smooth.
Errors:In the first stanza, line 3, did you mean icicles? *Smile*

Suggestions: None..

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Civy-Je,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good free-verse poem that has a good flow!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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