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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Desperate situations deserve desperate measures!!! I thought that your "letter of eviction" was humorous and showed the irritation you felt at having the Raccoon Family and their inconsiderate habits in your shed. Oh, if getting rid of pests were that easy!!!! (LOL)

Errors:None

Suggestions:None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!
Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Ren,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Forum. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good flow and word choice. I think it would be a great C & W song!

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None that would improve the piece.

WDC is a wonderful community for those of us who share the bond of writing. Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and to continue to share.
Regards,
Nani
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Review of Divergence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear SoCalScribe,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Forum. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good story telling! It is short, but packs a "punch". The main characters found that their chosing the path less taken saved their lives, even though they had been in danger themselves.

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None that would improve the piece.

WDC is a wonderful community for those of us who share the bond of writing. Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and to continue to share.
Regards,
Nani
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Forum. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good story-telling. Your piece is concise, but tells a good tale from beginning to end. It flows good, and has believeable circumstances. Your character development is good, also.

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None that would improve your storoem.

WDC is a wonderful community for those of us who share the bond of writing. Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and to continue to share.
Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Mac,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Nightmares always haunt our waking hours! Though there is often no reason for them, they still torture us with images!

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Symfani,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Children are wonderful! This was a charming piece about the love you feel/felt looking at your son.

Suggestions: In line 11, I think you should use the possessive pronoun "your" instead of the contraction "you're" (you are).

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Callie,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Surreal tale of discovery. You may have a great beginning to a longer piece. It certainly catches one's attention.

Suggestions: In line one first paragraph, I think there is a "typo"....you wrote "I see the red of my eyelids against he sunlight. I think it should be the.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Kaydee,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Your poem is sort of like life....we go through each day, hoping for the best, hoping that the "ills" in our lives will all of a sudden "cure" themselves....hoping for the scenery to change. When everything remains the same, we optimistically do it all over again the next day.

Suggestions: None

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Eyz,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Nice job. Wasn't sure what a "gothku" was, but now I see it is a gothic haiku. Flow is smooth, and the subject is certainly timely with all of the emphasis on vampires that the Twilight series has generated.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear InksDepth,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Dream or premonition? Those brief moments between sleep and consciousness can be most confusing and unnerving. Good short tale.

Suggestions: None

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear sonal,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Good imagery in this free-verse piece.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Aditya Josha,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Thoughts of soldiers in war must be very confusing and sometimes desperate. I feel that you did a good job of conveying this.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Fon Zamcho,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Interesting style with good flow. I felt that your word choice told a good story in rhyme.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Erere,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: It is difficult for me to review a piece that I am not sure that I understand. *Blush* I wasn't sure if it was impressionistic from the view of one drowning in water, society or a drug-induced stupor. I apologize. I am afraid that my reviewing skills are not very sophisticated. It seems that the thoughts are disjointed. I am sure that this is for emphasis in the situation that your are conveying.

Suggestions: I think it may help to have some consistency in punctuation....maybe either not use any, or use it as it should be. But, please remember this is only a suggestion from a reader, and not from one who is an expert in the usage of punctuation, nor grammar.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Erika,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Emotion-filled piece about the strong feelings the writer has for his/her lover. You convey the message of urgency to possess the very essence of the object of affection well.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Loti,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A good story of remorse from an accused's point of view. I think you have captured the feelings of someone who has learned from his/her mistakes. Sadly, this is not always the outcome.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Malisdead,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed your Nonet! I thought you did an excellent job with the form, and your word choice was very good. And, you rhymed! *Smile* Good job!!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear andrew,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Love is all of this and more! Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

Suggestions: I think your piece could benefit from an "in line" review. While I am not qualified to provide this service for you, there are others here at WDC who can do this for you. *Smile*

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Crucis,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Interesting and descriptive. Leaves the reader wanting more. Good traits to find in a short piece.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Natalia,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Lovely imagery and comparisons!

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Bikerider,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Interesting piece. I couldn't help but wonder if it were true--it certainly was convincing. Good job!
Suggestions:

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Ren,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A sad tale told in poetic form. Good word choice.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear sha,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good use of limerick form. Tells a nice story with good word choice.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Webbie,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute! Nice take on the "horror" theme. I am sure that you did well in Acme's challenge.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Miss Giggles,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Why do we feel the need to know "why"? Maybe one day in the future our questions will be answered. I am reminded as I read your piece of my three year old grand-daughter who always is asking "Why?" to everything that happens. We are not so different than she!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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