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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Wordgoddess,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I can see this as a children's picture book! Good job. The rhyme is perfect, and the flow is great!

Suggestions: Punctuation......you use it in part of the piece, and not in the rest.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Reveille  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear AmokTheClown,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Well-written short story. Good character development and plot. Thank you for sharing.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Fyn,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Great piece! Informative and entertaining.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Switch  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear SoCalScribe,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good short story! Believable characters, good plot development!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Born in May  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear iamfrank,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I did indeed enjoy reading your piece, Born in May! Your rhyme scheme is wonderful, and the poem flows smoothly. Good job! If you haven't already, you need to enter this in Countrymom's Senior Center Contest. The prompt for this month was "in the merry month of May", and it is open until the 31st , so you still have a few more days to do so. As you stated in your description, you did paint a lovely picture of your birth month. The imagery brings to life your "story".

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Tiny New Star  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear sueBsue,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute piece! It flows smoothly.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Untitled  
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Dear Drunken Anecdotes,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: This could be a good beginning for a longer piece. I would like to see you expand it, and see where it takes you.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of My Rock Has Gone  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Gosha,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good imagery in your free-verse piece. You paint a vivid picture of "loss".

Errors:In the first stanza, line 4, "i've" should be capitalized. *Smile*

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear nikki,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good free-verse piece about loss of love. Rhythm flows smoothly.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Last Stand  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Damien Fury,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good rhyme scheme and rhythm to your poem. Intense subject but you handled it well!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Joy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Informative piece! Thank you for sharing and for the great information.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear robert pearle,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Nice short story told from the perspective of "Dave the Hummingbird". Your personification of Dave made him much more realistic. How human-like he was not to ever declare that he had "found" his ultimate objective. So many of us drift from one thing to another never deciding that we are truly satisfied and at peace with ourselves. Dave enjoyed himself, but was never quite ready to relinquish his search for the perfect flower.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of The First Blows  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear highhopes,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A good short piece about the pitfalls of an abusive marriage. And, you are very correct, sometimes the "blows" that hurt the most are the mental and emotional ones. The physical ones heal much more rapidly.

Suggestions: In the first paragraph, next to last sentence, I think you have a typo. You wrote, "with marriage on my mine"....I believe it should read "with marriage on my mind".

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Emily's Room  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Ken,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* A charming, whimisical piece! Good flow.

Errors/Suggestions:*Flowerp*

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Daizy,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* A lovely concise piece describing the peace and tranquility that you find in music.

Errors/Suggestions:*Flowerp*None noticed.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Harry,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* Lovely iimagery graces this free-verse piece. While there are rhyming components within the poem, they are not consistent, but this does not distract from the flow. It paints a beautiful picture of springtime!

Errors/Suggestions:{ /c}*Flowerp* None noticed.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Old Warrior,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Excellent beginning to what I am sure will be a great novel! I will be back to read more! Just had a few to review this "start" of your book. It really caught my interest, and I can tell that it is a book that I would like to purchase!

Errors:In paragraph 9, you refer to Bishop Malcapina (throughout the rest of the prologue) as Bishop Malsapina. There are 3 references in that paragraph, but the spelling is changed then for the remainder. I am sure that this is a "typo".

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of One Belief Away  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear LdyPhoenix,

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Hello, I’m Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece, as part of the Rising Stars Member to Member Reviewing Forum. Please remember that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard it as you see fit. I do not claim to be an expert at this! I am simply a member of WDC like you, who enjoys reading the work of other members here.

Overall Impression: An interesting piece touting the faith vs. religion argument! I really enjoyed reading this piece! Without faith there would be no religion. Thank you for reminding us that our belief in things unseen is the basis on which we "believe".

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None that would improve the piece!

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Girlie2010,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute story written from a child's perspective! I remember those days of "surprises". Some of the were wonderful, and some were less than "wonderful", but all were given with love from my children!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!



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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear infinitelycreative,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: An impressive "to do" list! Your reasons match the list well!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!



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Review of James  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Blue Note,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Interesting story! I think I would like to see it expanded a little to explain the why, and the where, and other details that have my mind racing wanting to read more.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Innocence's Blood  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Dahlia,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good story! Sadly, children often are made to feel "different" and unwanted by the thoughtless actions of adults, resulting in horrible outcomes like the one you described. A sad testimony to our society!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Dear Megan,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum for Senior Mods. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: This is a lovely story in poetic form. The heroine goes from an unhappy existence to finding happiness. Sometimes in an effort to please others, we make ourselves miserable, which was the case here. She wanted to please her ailing father by marrying his friend, but her life was lacking emotional fulfillment. She found the happiness she lacked only through the sadness of losing her first husband. It was a nice touch to remember her first husband on their anniversary and birthday with her piano. It shows that she still was able to express her choice/her freedom to choose the way she remembered this time of her life. Obviously she had spent her young married life in misery with the piano and her music as her escape. The first husband treated her like a possession, and didn't like the only thing that brought her pleasure in their marriage. I liked this twist!
Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: I noticed a typo in the third stanza, first line. You wrote: "...A marriage of convience..." It should be "...A marriage of convenience.." *Smile* It seems no matter how many times I proof a piece, I overlook these! *Smile*

I always enjoy reading your work and visiting your port! I look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to share your beautiful work and please "write on"!!

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Review of The Coming Storm  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Peppermint Patty,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: An interesting take on the Genisis tale from the perspective of the serpent. What a fitting title! This aptly described the aftermath of Adam and Eve's downfall. Great job!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Old Warrior,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A very moving piece to honor those who have gone on before us, whether in peace (as the father in this piece) or in war (as the son and "his" flock). The flow and rhyme were superb! You have certainly mastered "this poetry thing", Old Warrior (no surprise there!)! It was a great read.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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