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Review of The First Blows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear highhopes,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A good short piece about the pitfalls of an abusive marriage. And, you are very correct, sometimes the "blows" that hurt the most are the mental and emotional ones. The physical ones heal much more rapidly.

Suggestions: In the first paragraph, next to last sentence, I think you have a typo. You wrote, "with marriage on my mine"....I believe it should read "with marriage on my mind".

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Ken,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* A charming, whimisical piece! Good flow.

Errors/Suggestions:*Flowerp*

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Daizy,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* A lovely concise piece describing the peace and tranquility that you find in music.

Errors/Suggestions:*Flowerp*None noticed.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Harry,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* Lovely iimagery graces this free-verse piece. While there are rhyming components within the poem, they are not consistent, but this does not distract from the flow. It paints a beautiful picture of springtime!

Errors/Suggestions:{ /c}*Flowerp* None noticed.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Old Warrior,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Excellent beginning to what I am sure will be a great novel! I will be back to read more! Just had a few to review this "start" of your book. It really caught my interest, and I can tell that it is a book that I would like to purchase!

Errors:In paragraph 9, you refer to Bishop Malcapina (throughout the rest of the prologue) as Bishop Malsapina. There are 3 references in that paragraph, but the spelling is changed then for the remainder. I am sure that this is a "typo".

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of One Belief Away  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear LdyPhoenix,

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Hello, I’m Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece, as part of the Rising Stars Member to Member Reviewing Forum. Please remember that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard it as you see fit. I do not claim to be an expert at this! I am simply a member of WDC like you, who enjoys reading the work of other members here.

Overall Impression: An interesting piece touting the faith vs. religion argument! I really enjoyed reading this piece! Without faith there would be no religion. Thank you for reminding us that our belief in things unseen is the basis on which we "believe".

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None that would improve the piece!

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Girlie2010,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute story written from a child's perspective! I remember those days of "surprises". Some of the were wonderful, and some were less than "wonderful", but all were given with love from my children!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!



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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear infinitelycreative,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: An impressive "to do" list! Your reasons match the list well!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!



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Review of James  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Blue Note,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Interesting story! I think I would like to see it expanded a little to explain the why, and the where, and other details that have my mind racing wanting to read more.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Innocence's Blood  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Dahlia,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good story! Sadly, children often are made to feel "different" and unwanted by the thoughtless actions of adults, resulting in horrible outcomes like the one you described. A sad testimony to our society!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Dear Megan,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum for Senior Mods. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: This is a lovely story in poetic form. The heroine goes from an unhappy existence to finding happiness. Sometimes in an effort to please others, we make ourselves miserable, which was the case here. She wanted to please her ailing father by marrying his friend, but her life was lacking emotional fulfillment. She found the happiness she lacked only through the sadness of losing her first husband. It was a nice touch to remember her first husband on their anniversary and birthday with her piano. It shows that she still was able to express her choice/her freedom to choose the way she remembered this time of her life. Obviously she had spent her young married life in misery with the piano and her music as her escape. The first husband treated her like a possession, and didn't like the only thing that brought her pleasure in their marriage. I liked this twist!
Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: I noticed a typo in the third stanza, first line. You wrote: "...A marriage of convience..." It should be "...A marriage of convenience.." *Smile* It seems no matter how many times I proof a piece, I overlook these! *Smile*

I always enjoy reading your work and visiting your port! I look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to share your beautiful work and please "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Old Warrior,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A very moving piece to honor those who have gone on before us, whether in peace (as the father in this piece) or in war (as the son and "his" flock). The flow and rhyme were superb! You have certainly mastered "this poetry thing", Old Warrior (no surprise there!)! It was a great read.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Friends  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear iva mae,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group Challenge for April. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* This is a lovely tribute to friendship! It has an interesting rhyme scheme. The flow is good, as is the word choice.

Errors/Suggestions:{ /c}*Flowerp* None noticed.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Review of A Sister Lost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Nicki,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group Challenge for April. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv*Full of heart-felt emotion, this piece flows in free form, using the acrostic style perfectly. Good job! Sometimes, our family hurts us more than the "rest of the world".

Errors/Suggestions:{ /c}*Flowerp*None.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear Crissy,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group Challenge for April. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* The words of your poem paint a very sad picture about how we are teaching our sons by example to believe that women are disposable, and very easily replaced only to used and disposed of once again. It is a sad testament to the society in which we live. Our morals are truly decaying! The piece has a good flow and rhyme scheme.

Errors/Suggestions:{ /c}*Flowerp* None.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Review of All Better Fits  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Ida_Matilda_Wright,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group Challenge for April. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv*Good piece. Nice rhyme scheme. Flows smoothly.

Errors/Suggestions:{ /c}*Flowerp*You have a small type in the second line of the first stanza. "Pavro" should be "Parvo".

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Mary Ann,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group Challenge for April. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv*I truly enjoyed your devotional. You are so right, when you remind us that we need to thank Him more often for the things of this earth that He has given us. Too often we get caught up in the hustle and bustle of life, and forget to "stop and smell the roses". When I am at the beach, I am constantly reminded of His magnificence! He is a Mighty God!

The flow of your devotional was excellent. And, I liked that you gave information to those who may not be aware that they can "visit" other places in the world any time they choose, with the assistance of a computer.

Errors/Suggestions:{ /c}*Flowerp*None.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Review of The Used-to Age  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Harry,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group Challenge for April. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* Great contest entry. The flow is good, as is the rhyme scheme. I can certainly relate to some of these....I, too, am a SENIOR, and have entered the world of "used-to" also. Thank you for sharing your talent with us at WDC!

Errors/Suggestions:{ /c}*Flowerp* None

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Review of What Did I Do?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Southern_Star,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group Challenge for April. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv* Contained within this emotional piece are questions that we all ask ourselves at one time or another. The rhyme and rhythm of the poem are smooth. Your deep feelings leap from the lines. Good job!

Errors/Suggestions:{ /c}*Flowerp*None.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Review of Beautiful Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Numb Hands,

Hello, I'm Nani. I will be reviewing your work as part of a Simply Positive Group Challenge for April. I am by no means an expert at reviewing. I cannot claim any titles nor degrees to my name, therefore, I am not a qualified critic. The opinions that I express are my own and are based on simple, basic principles. I am just an humble reader who enjoys visiting, the ports of other members of WDC. Please use anything within my review that you find helpful, and discard the rest.

Overall Impression:*Flowerv*Concise free-verse piece with great flow. I enjoyed reading your point of view, which by the way, I, too share!

Errors/Suggestions:*Flowerp* None.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC! I encourage you to continue to "Write On"! *Smile*
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Review of Broard Shoulders  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear highhopes,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good advice within your rhyming couplets.

Errors:I noticed several errors in spelling....they may be just typos.*Smile* First of all in the title....did you mean "Broad Shoulders"? This error is repeated in the 5th stanza, last line. The other error was in stanza 3, line 1....I think that "complait" should perhaps be "complaint". Sometimes, it is hard to catch those pesky typos!

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of They Marched  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear wordgodess,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Very good use of the acrostic form. The piece has a smooth flow and even rhyme.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear LauraM,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: This piece flows good, with a clear abcb rhyming pattern. Good word choices.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of My Love...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Crimson Goth,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Allovely romantic piece that flows well. The imagery within your words paints a beautiful picture of devotion.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Haunting Shadow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear LauraM,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good piece about the effects of abuse. Good style and flow to the poem.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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