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Review of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Connie,

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I am reviewing your piece as part of the Rising Stars Member to Member Reviewing Forum. Please remember that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard it as you see fit.

Overall Impression: Concise and descriptive! I enjoyed reading your piece about autumn. It is my favorite season of the year! I thought this to be a good example of a form that I was not familiar with before today.

Errors:I noticed no grammatical nor spelling errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! As always, please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of Dream With Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Nicki-D,

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I am reviewing your piece as part of the Rising Stars Member to Member Reviewing Forum. Please remember that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard it as you see fit.

Overall Impression: Good flow of verses. A good example of kyrielle form!

Errors:I noticed no grammatical nor spelling errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! As always, please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of Bad Lands  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Medusa,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A well-written thought-provoking opinion piece.

Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear A.J.Stevens,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: What a fantastic dream! If only I could be so lucky!! I enjoyed your free-verse piece, and the thoughts that it provoked! This might make a good story if you lengthened it and developed your characters a bit.

Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of The Wind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear pixieprincess,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A nice personification of one of the forces of nature! The rhythmic verses flow smoothly.

Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Losten Lyrix,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Beautiful thoughts and words from a man in love! Thank you for sharing!

Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of Faded Fears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Jade,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: This would be a very good beginning to a longer piece. Perhaps you will develop it at a later date!

Errors:I did read your "bio" and know that you indicated that spelling was not your forte'. I did notice a few small spelling errors and/or typos. Please don't think I am being critical--this is just an effort to assist you with editing your piece. In line 1, you said " There is something in the forrest. My freinds is hidden in the trees pleeding for my help." I think it should read " There is something in the forest. My friend is hidden in the trees }b}pleading for my help. In the second line, you wrote "I do it any way". I believe it should read "I do it anyway." And finally, in line 3 (or the first line of the second paragraph), you wrote "The depths af the darkest night turn to light". I think it should read "The depths of the darkest night turn to light." But, please remember, I am not an expert! This is only my opinion!

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of Circle of Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Moo Year's Hooves!,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A lovely tribute to your Mother's memory. You paint beautiful pictures with your words!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Review of A Bitter Old Man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Paradoxical,


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Hello, I'm Nani!! I am reviewing your piece as part of the Rising Stars Member to Member Reviewing Forum. Please remember that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard it as you see fit.

Overall Impression: Excellent poem!One to which I can really relate! Often I find that the things that "I" write, seem to write themselves. You put this thought to words.

Errors: I did notice one minor error. In the second stanza, line 4, you wrote "to my surprise their are endless words for me to find". I think you shoud use "there" instead of its synonym "their" making it read "to my surprise there are endless words for me to find". I have trouble in this area myself!

Suggestions: I thought your form was good and the rhyming patterns led to a good flow. The aabb pattern worked well!

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future!

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Emo-Dragon592,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute story! Very concise! I enjoyed reading it!

Errors:I noticed several spelling errors, that I think could be corrected by running spell check. I don't mean to be critical, rather just helpful. As there were several, I felt that possibly you may not have run spell check before posting, so I didn't list them in this review. I do think however, that your story would benefit from the corrections.

Suggestions: None.

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Review of "Shiny Pearl"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear JeRrY,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good job! You really turned depressed feelings into positive ones! I think you found your "shiny pearl".

Errors:I noticed one small typo. In stanza three, line three, you wrote "So underneath this sadness and grief,Ii would say there's a shiny pearl." I think you meant "So underneath this sadness and grief, I would say there's a shiny pearl."

Suggestions: None.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Fable Scriber,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: An interesting and well written piece! It can be taken both literally and figuratively! I enjoyed reading this!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Review of I love you  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sweetzer,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Your free-verse style flows smoothly as you express the intense feelings of love and the possibility of having that love changed in your life.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear ScorpionJD,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I think you would have a good "country" hit. The life of a trucker is a hard one to be sure. I can see how some of the feelings that you describe could travel through their heads sometimes!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future!
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Review of Traveling  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear John Hider,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece" for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: You really described the life of a trucker in this piece. It can be such a lonely life, and you have captured the feelings of this man splendidly.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Review of The Glory Of War  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Harry,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "The Glory of War" for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: This is a very profound piece! You have really captured the "glory" of war in this piece. It was a very good read. Your free-verse poetry flowed flawlessly.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear Anne,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Your piece has the fundamentals of being a very good one. It has an interesting story line that you should develop a little more in depth.

Suggestions: I noticed several errors in spelling and in grammar. I am not meaning to be critical, but rather helpful. While I am by no means an expert at reviewing, I think that you should have someone who is more learned than myself to review this for you and make suggestions as to how you can improve it. I feel that it is definitely a piece worth further development!

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of The cursor blinks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Fitz,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Oh, how true your words ring for me! I have tried changing the cursor to different forms but it continues to blink (LOL)! You have certainly described a problem that many of us face sometimes, as a writer. I don't think (as you wrote in your description for the piece) that it needs a lot of work. Perhaps just tweaking a bit here and there! The first stanza fourth line stumbled a bit for me. But, let me say that I am by no means an expert! You might try something like "Willing me to give it a poem..." (only my humble suggestion, though).

Errors:I noticed no errors.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Sparkplug,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Your song has a nice flow. Your word choices paint a picture of someone who is hurting from the painful thoughts of losing someone for which he/she cares deeply.

Errors:I noticed one small error. In the next to last paragraph, you wrote "And its slow poison, comes taking its claim, taking away what not so plain". I think you may need to review this sentence, and tweek it a little.....maybe to something like "And its slow poison, comes taking its claim, taking away what is not so plain" or perhaps "And its slow poison, comes taking its claim, taking away what's not so plain." But please keep in mind that these are only suggestions.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear ScorpionJD,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "Pub Song fro Jesus" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I really don't know quite what to say. While the flow is good, and the subject matter holds truths, it is difficult for me to put the subject into this type of medium. So, I will just review and rate on the form. Your form is true to the one of a pub song. Your rhyme and flow are good.

Errors: I am not meaning to be critical, but rather helpful in the review of your song. I did notice several typographical errors, including one in the title "Pub Song fro Jesus". In line two, you wrote "this is song's about an amazing man whom everybody knew" I think you need to edit this to read "this is a song about an amazing man whom everybody knew or perhaps "this song's about an amazing man whom everybody knew. In line three, you wrote "he performed many a miracles and then well he got screwed". Did you mean to write "he performed many a miracle and then well he got screwed"? In line seven, you wrote "peter was asked about him he daid "don't know that name". Perhaps, you meant "peter was asked about him he said "don't know that name".

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear C.C.,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "The Grim" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A very dark piece! It would be a good piece to read around a campfire of young folk on a dark night!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Irisflower,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your poem, "Swinging on a porch", for the First People's Review Forum. First, I would like to say that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard any portion that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I think you have captured the pure essence of just relaxing and swinging all of your worries and cares away on the porch swing! I really enjoyed your poem. It was a joy to read!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Explorer,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "Rainbow Moon" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Beautiful imagery in this love poem! You paint lovely word pictures for the reader. Good flow, too!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear paparoach,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "death" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Although your poem is brief, it speaks volumes! We all would really like a definitive answer to your rhetorical question! I think you did a very good job with this.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Joel.Werner,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece, "An offset judgement" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed reading this. It almost reads like the book of Proverbs in the Bible, but on a personalized note. You bring out some very good points.

Errors:I noticed only one small error. I am not sure if it is a typo or not....but, you wrote: "Slander throw around and feelings demolished". I think it should read "Slander thrown around and feelings demolished. Please bear in mind that I am not a professional editor, and this is only my humble opinion.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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