Hello! I am reviewing your poem as part of the First People's Group.
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Overall Impression:I enjoyed reading your poem! Owls appear to be such pompous and wise old birds! You have caught their "personality" perfectly!
Errors: None noticed.
Suggestions: None. It is great like it is! The imagery is wonderful!
It is pleasure to review your work! And, please WRITE ON!
Hello Rosie! I am here with a review for the First People's Group!
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Overall Impression: A lovely and emotionally charged write! Your words create beautiful imagery.
Errors: None noticed.
Suggestions: I wouldn't change a thing!
As always, it is pleasure to review your work! And, please WRITE ON!
Hello Oldwarrior! I am reviewing your poem as part of the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, I am not an expert! The words of this review are my opinion. Please use anything that you feel is of worth, and discard the rest!
Overall impression: Chilling! Great imagery! Good ending!
Errors: None noticed.
Suggestions for Improvement: I wouldn't change a thing! It is great just as it is!
Thank you for sharing your work with all of us here at WDC! I enjoy reading your poetry! Please keep on sharing with us!
Dear Chrisna, This review is in connection with the First People's Group. Let me begin by saying that I am not an expert, by any means. This review is solely my opinion as a reader on this site.
Overall impression: I enjoyed reading your poem about children! I have six grandchildren that I love dearly, and could relate to the words of your poem!
Errors in Grammar/Spelling: None noticed.
Areas for Improvement: No suggestions.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us here at WDC! Please let me encourage you to "write on"!
Hello! I am reviewing as part of the First People's Group! First let me say that I am not an expert, by any means, and this review is only my opinion. Please feel free to use any part of it as you choose.
Overall Impression: I enjoyed reading your poem. I found it to contain some real life truths.
Grammar/Spelling: I noticed no errors.
My only observation is that some reviewers on this site, might comment on the fact that you capitalize each line. It is my personal preference to do so, but I have found that some of the reviewers at WDC don't like that style, and think that capitalization should only be used at the beginning of a sentence.
My favorite part was the second stanza! Some people really don't want to accept their calling in life. How true!
Thank you for sharing your talent with us at WDC! Please let me encourage you to "write on"!
Dear Feather Duster, I am reviewing this as part of the First People's Group. I enjoyed reading your piece. It is very reminiscent of my teen years, when I fell in love for the first time! I thought the poem to be very well-written. I saw no errors in spelling nor in grammar. I can not offer any suggestions for improvement. Thank you for sharing a lovely trip back in time!
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Dianne
Hello, SummerLyn! I am reviewing this in connection with the First People's Group. This was a concise, well-written poem about the life cycle of sunflowers! I think you captured this all too short span of such a beautiful flower quite well. I saw no noticeable errors in spelling nor grammar. Thank you for sharing!
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Dianne
Cute poem! Well written. Perfect for children learning the fundaments of letters! Good job! Had a nice flow and rhyme scheme. I certainly enjoyed reading it, and I know that children would enjoy it as well! I enjoy writing within this genre, too.
I love the sea, and ever thing about it! And, I am always happy when I am near it! This was a well written poem, with a good rhyme scheme. I enjoyed reading it. Your imagery was very thought provoking. Good job! I hope that you will continue to "write on"!
My husband was on the wrestling team, a lifetime ago, when he was in high school. I can see him standing there with similar thoughts racing through his head before, during and after the match. Good job. I thought it was a well-written poem. Please continue to "write on"!
I think it is a catchy beginning. I will be very interested to see how it develops! I felt it was well written, with an excellent flow. It is definitely a beginning that would encourage me to read more. I am the type of reader whos interest MUST be captured in the first few paragraphs, or I usually don't finish the read! Please continue to "write on". And, let me know when you get more of this story formed!
It sounds as though you have experienced the emotions expressed in this poem. Is so, I am truly sorry that you have encountered such hurtful experiences! I thought you used a good choice of words to make the reader empathize with the emotions that you felt. Overall, a good poem in my opinion. Please continue to "write on".
It is always amazing to be in God's presence! Thank you for your beautiful poem! I thought it to be well written. It expressed such wonderful facts, too. It shares many things that I, too, feel. Like the words of the song that we sing, "He's still working on me" too! Please keep writing! I share your enthusiasm for this genre, and love to see others pass on the wonderfully amazing news of our God!
Good job, Scott! This is a difficult form to master, but I think you did a great job. I enjoyed reading your "100 word" story. I found no repeats in the words. And, I think that all of us who write are constantly striving for your closing sentence! Please continue to "write on"!
I enjoyed this poem, and I feel that others will enjoy it as well. It is well written and would appeal to children if placed into a collection of stories/poems for them. Although I am new to this site, I am certainly amazed at the talent that abounds. Please keep sharing your writing with everyone.
An interesting form, and one with which I am not familiar! I enjoyed it! Although I am new to this site, I can certainly see why it is an "Award Winner", It is brief, concise and to the point! And it is accurate as well. Thank you for sharing it.
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