Good job, Scott! This is a difficult form to master, but I think you did a great job. I enjoyed reading your "100 word" story. I found no repeats in the words. And, I think that all of us who write are constantly striving for your closing sentence! Please continue to "write on"!
I enjoyed this poem, and I feel that others will enjoy it as well. It is well written and would appeal to children if placed into a collection of stories/poems for them. Although I am new to this site, I am certainly amazed at the talent that abounds. Please keep sharing your writing with everyone.
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