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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear tattsnteeth2,

I am reviewing your poem as part of the First People's Review Forum! Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: This is a very powerful and touching poem! It brings to mind a question that many of us ponder. I guess fear prompts people to do cruel things sometimes, and possibly this is a motive for the massacre of so many. You poem is well written, and flows evenly. Thank you for sharing!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Mystic Sierra,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your story "Chapter 1: The Dream" for the Simply PositiveSimply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I really enjoyed reading the first chapter in what appears to be a novel. You really grabbed my attention! It was a well-written piece. Tales of this genre are really popular, and I think yours will fit into the mix very well! I wish you good luck with the publishing process!

Errors: I did notice one small error that possibly editing didn't catch. In the 35th paragraph (I believe), you wrote: "So far we are in luck, Andreas and his followers no nothing of the girl.” I think that it should read, "So far we are in luck, Andreas and his followers know nothing of the girl.”


Suggestions: None. It was a good story line.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Professor,

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Interesting twist! Good job! And, all in 100 words!

You are correct. The contest was one that was challenging and fun! I miss it, too. I really didn't realize how difficult writing a story in 100 words could be!

I really enjoyed reading this entry, and will continue on to the next one in the series!

Regards,
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Review of Kristilove  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Connie,

Dear Humming Bird,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece "Kristilove" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only a humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Having had the experience of meeting Kristilove through WDC, I would have to agree with the praises of her that you sing in this well-written poem! She is truly a special person that I call "friend" also! Good job!

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: It was an excellent piece, and I know of nothing that would improve it!

I enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of Media Memoir  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Joseph Michael Webb,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece "Media Memoir" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only a humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed your short story about personal experiences in the changes of media over the lifetime of the character. It was a well-written piece. Media has certainly evolved, and continues to do so at an alarmingly fast pace!

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: It was an good piece, and I know of nothing that would improve it!

I enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of Waves  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Orchard,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "Waves" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: The title caught my interest! I am always intrigued by anything dealing with the ocean! It is a very descriptive free verse form. My favorite part:

A wave rolling along
Gentle and mindful
Careful to not interrupt his brothers
Both the one who succeeds him
And the one who lags behind

What a great description of what I would like to strive to become!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of You  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear CEW,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "You" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: An emotion filled piece about feelings, and dealing with them. (Rhyme scheme aabbccddee ff) Good job.

Errors:I noticed no errors. I think that you did not capitalize in some instances for emphasis.

Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of Unsure  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Smith,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece "Unsure" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Wonderfully concise! Good description of the uncertainty of relationships.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear writerbaby98,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece, "It's a Monster's World" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Insightful piece about the inner controversial feelings experienced by a "new" monster. Brief and to the point!

Errors:Please check usuage of "required" in line: " I felt it and I was afraid of these new feelings I required." Did you possibly mean "acquired"? ( I wasn't sure.)

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of Impossible Peace  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear VictorRee,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "Impossible Peace" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: World Peace! Such a wonderfully idyllic concept! But, alas, one paid for at a great price! Thank you for sharing your point of view in this free-verse style poem. The flow was good, and was enjoyable to read.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear K. A. Price,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece "The Forest's Eyes" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I thought it was an interesting beginning to a longer piece. I noticed that you stated it was unfinished, and I would be interested in reading the "rest of the story". Your characters are believable, and you set a good background for the story.

Errors:Please don't think I am being overly critical, but I did notice one tiny error in paragraph 11. You wrote: "That squirrel and hid it in a box under my bed?" I think you might want to re-word it. Sometimes when I am editing, I add or forget to take away words or phrases. Perhaps this is what happened here.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of Falling  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear faithanne95,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "Lemondrops of Poetry" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Very descriptive free verse form with a good flow.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of You Were  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear alliecat,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "You Were" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I loved the usage of the colors and the way that you related feelings to each one. Great job! Your free-verse style flowed perfectly.

Errors:In the last line of the last stanza, did you mean "I'll" instead of "ill"? Just a thought...

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of Ties That Blind  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear LdyPhoenix,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece "Ties That Blind" for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Very profound! I enjoyed reading your perspective. It is sad that we can sometimes be so trusting with people that aren't what they seem!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Review of Waves  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Sophy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "Waves" for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: This is a brief, but very profound piece! It gives such a strong metaphor that the reader can almost feel your heartache and grief from the description! Good job!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear aeriia,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "Lemondrops of Poetry" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: You painted such lovely pictures with your words! Your free-form verse flowed beautifully. My favorite part:

Lemon drops of poetry
rain on me
falling through my skin
their rhythmic
pitter-patter
and drip-drip-drip

is
music.

What a great description!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear sssam,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your poem, "Think....what else should our lives be", for the First People's Review Forum. First, I would like to say that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard any portion that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Very "thought" provoking! I enjoyed reading your piece. The free verse form flowed well. It certainly gave the reader a lot of truths to ponder! My favorite line: "What else should our lives be but the most thrilling experience imaginable". We should all live our life with this in mind!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I hope that you enjoy the time you spend here at WDC! Since I joined in June of this year, I have become addicted! I have met many wonderful writers and have entered lots of contests! I have found the prompts to be.challenging! If you have not gotten involved yet, you might want to check out the great contests and activities found here.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of When you need me  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Mystic Sierra,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your poem, "When You Need Me", for the First People's Review Forum. First, I would like to say that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard any portion that you see fit.

Overall Impression: It is so true that we all need a friend in tough times as well as in good times! I enjoyed reading your poem. The rhyming couplets was a good choice. It was brief and to the point. The rhyme scheme worked well!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I hope that you enjoy the time you spend here at WDC! Since I joined in June of this year, I have become addicted! I have met many wonderful writers and have entered lots of contests! I have found the prompts to be.challenging! If you have not gotten involved yet, you might want to check out the great contests and activities found here.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Vindication  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Kristi, Hello, I am here to review your poem "Vindications" as part of the First People's Tribal Review forum! Please remember that this review is only my opinion. Please use or discard any of its content that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Good form! Very creative. It flowed well, and was an interesting form! I enjoyed reading your piece about overcoming xenophobia.

Errors:I noticed no grammatical nor spelling errors.

Suggestions: None. I am not sure what you could name your form....but it is catchy!

I always enjoy reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Singing Bird (aka Nani)
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Review of Dare To Be  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Ken!

As the mother of two daughters, I can really appreciate your lovely words! You are quite right, though. When they are young, we plant seeds, that we pray will come to fruition when they are grown...and, we hope that any weeds that we may have sown, will not take root. (lol).

Thank you, for sharing this piece. And, as always, please continue to write on!!!


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Review of Dark Lullaby  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Harvey,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece, "Dark Lullaby", as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Your free-form style is full of great imagery. It tells a tale of sadness and dismay. I hope that you do not write this from experience.

Errors:I noticed no grammatical nor spelling errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! As always, please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Vixen Sykerd,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your poem, "My zip won't do up" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you may use or disregard any portion of it that you choose.

Overall Impression: What a dilemma! It is a part of Murphy's Law that if anything can go wrong, it will! *Smile* I certainly hope the young lady in the poem got her problem resolved before the job interview. It was a light hearted free-verse poem about an event that can be extremely stressful!

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! As always, please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Campfire Creation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Duane Spanel, Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece, "Campfire Creation", as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Your free-form style is full of great imagery. I can almost smell the smoke and feel the warmth of the campfire! Good job!

Suggestions: Please don't think I am being critical, but in the last line of the first stanza, there is a "typo" - "enchanting" is misspelled. I often have trouble such as this, when I am typing on my laptop! *Smile*

I hope that you enjoy the time you spend here at WDC! Since I joined in June of this year, I have become addicted! I have met many wonderful writers and have entered lots of contests! I have found the prompts to be challenging! If you have not gotten involved yet, you might want to check out the great contests and activities found here.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of Forevermore  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear S. Lucas Lloyd, Hello! I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece "Forevermore" as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Reviews. Please remember that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard it as you see fit.

First, I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

Overall Impression: This is a free-verse poem that flows smoothly.

Suggestions: Please don't think this as critical. Check your usage of the word "confine" in lines 16 & 17. Did you mean to use the word "confide"? I think it would possibly flow better if you used "confide". (But, that is only my opinion.)*Smile*

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!


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Review of Season Opener  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Qwestion Evrythng, Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece, "Season Opener" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group! Please remember that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard it as you see fit.

Overall Impression: A very humorous look at watching your favorite team and being a fan even when they lose! Good job!

Errors:I noticed no grammatical nor spelling errors.

Suggestions: None that would improve the piece.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! As always, please continue to "write on"!!

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