I must say this was a true Deee <light> to read, the flow of it was easy go with. The one thing that stood out to me was in the way in that you have used the word Fear, into days world you do not find many people that use it the right way as you have. For you stressed (awe) with the word fear and fear does mean just that (to look up to), {to hold in your heart a love or respect for}. Like as a child looks into the eyes of the mother with A great fear as it feeds from the mothers breast. Very well done ! It seams to me you have much fear for Gods creation for the works of words you use ring out A true fear. May God be with your spirit.:) And keep writing!
This was sent to me By my freind Beth Barnett and as she was reading it to me I asked her to send to me so I may make to a statment about your work as it is I think what over all enplyed was right to the core . and as a vet I will say this I want to let my kids have to hear the hell of war be a place of each breathe as they live so all i can say as the man on some show I was told about as to methadeds to get the trueth of men that wish to bring war to the us soil by means of training kids to strap booms on there bodies in the name of god I have but one statement give me my m16 bACK AND i WILL PUT A .223 in there head from about 300 meters away my self.as the core say kill them all and god sort it out as for peace your dam skipy the price of freedom is never free of death some one will always have to die for freedom to ring for so long as there is men on this earth that do not believe in christ and always seek to use death by war as a means to control by forced use of knowing true truth to make people be afraid.. to me that feeds to basic fear in men that live with out faith of knowing the truth of the way of God and to understand that death is and was defeted when love drove a nail into its own hand....
hello greeting this was great keep up the work I love this site....:)
so I send all the gift points I have as of now....:)
Hello All:
My Name is Mr.B.Anderson I am new to writing.com well kindof,anyway my Best friend Miss. Beth Barnett has turned me into a writing.com junky if I do not take at lest an hour to read somesones work my day just does not seam to be complete. I do not even watch tv anymore. Besides I have not seen anything on tv worth my time.
Anyway thanks to <Miss Beth Barnett(angellove}> and My grandmother Anderson,the 2 greatest women in my life. I am working on writing the first of 3 Books here on writing.com an a personal Jounral for my childern as I go to law school to fight for them.I am working with with Miss Barnett to get a one and only writers club put into our local jail and I am wanting to put some of there work here on writing.com it be like a new news journal called justice journal of Indiana I am working on letting inmates of the jail have the chance to air there grevances with the Justice System ie wrongfull convitions, abuse, cover ups and much more. The jail comander is seamingly willing to let this come to pass, and I will say God Bless you Sir. it seams to be that there has been a on going problem of ill trained law inforcement in and out of jail to deal with those that are mentaly ill and more much more. as for me and writing all I can say is thank God for spell check I am just realy learning to write and typ useing a computer I did not realy get into useing computers till I started a Veterans suport group after I got out of the us army and had a child that died that was having some of same undiagnoseable illnesses, she past away in 1999 at the age of 11 months and as of to date I am still fighten the Government over her death and my health problems , the Name of the Veterans Group was Crisis In the homeland, I do not do much with that anymore I still help vets as I run across them as when the good lord sends them my way. As for the first Book I am wanting to write well its decore is of Epistemology Brain wave entrianment, geophysics,astrophysics,anthropocentrism,social anthropology and much more ..
well if you liked the DV code and the left behind books, then you would enjoy this one I am looking to start putting in on writing.com in about one month.
Some of my favorite books are <Hinds feet on high places>, <worriers with out wepeans the Robert copeland Story>, and <the Hiding place> ie the corry tin boom story>. & thus far is <Alien Bond spring of life> By (Beth Barnett} here on writing.com.
I am trying get ahold of the man who wrote The Book {Spirit Controlled Temperament} <Mr.>{Dr.} (Tim Layhaye), he was the, I think that got the Movie done of The left Behind Books, I have sent the wave of emails asking for him for his help etc to make a moive out of the <hinds feet on high Places> and {Beths Barnett} <Book Alien Bond>.
Well this thing is to get me in to the swing of the family of writing. com so anyone that wants to view my junk please feel free to tell me what you find wrong with it I can use all the help I can get..:) ha ha lololol...:)
Well God Bless (all) each and every one with every breathe you take may his love be in your inward air sweet with his stillness and simplicity...
I just got off the yahoo chat Box with you and could not stop thinking you, and When I remebered that you had written some things well I just got done reading this and it realy took me back to when you and I became friends when my Dauther was dieing and the countless hours we talked to the many nights we set out under the stars with the many bond fires and the steero we set to be in sounrd sound that played Native flute musice as the warm fire crakled till the early morning hours laughing and talking. To the many nights when I set alone out in even when it rained and it was so cold my pants would frezze and drank stairing in to flames trying to come to grips with her death and my own health problem. I never told you about the endless nights I would walk in the dark across the fields and through the woods crying and praying for god to give me the streight to find a cure for her dieing body to after she past away the heart not to put a gun to my heaD CUASE i COULD NOT BEAR TO CARRY ON WITH OUT HER and the thoughts of living feeling the way I do still today . You have always been there for me your kindness and understanding heart was gods way to answer my greving heart and soul.
I pray God Blesses you with the greatest gift a man could ever have a child and a faithfully loving wife. for next to my Grand father you are the kindness man I know it will be my hearts prayer that on the day your wifes words of I am with your child may your soul weep tears of the joy as I did with each one of Babies tears only a Father can understand.
ps
as I finished this John Denver Born in the bitter root valley (Montana skys)
remember!?
Keep writing I know you have many others to put on here!!
I was thinking about this and thought that you should think about contacting all the local schools about this and see if they would tell there kids writers etc.i WILL post it here at Ivy tech today for you as we talked about and I will try to go over to IU as well..got to run class is about to begin....
Great Work ...I tryed to write out a break down of what I thought about your work , but I think hit the wrong keys , ie break down of each answer inmy own words. I will try one more time in a email latter. I think you need more answers for each one ,the answers seam to not be broad enough, but that just maybe the (Mel). and (sang) talking ha ha mine was a 57 score <MEL>, God Bless keep up the great work. oh yes one more thing when are you going to write the next chapter of Alien Bond, and oh yes have you heard anything back from Doctor Tim Lahaye to look at Helping you make the movie out of your book. I am hoping that they make a movie out of Hands feet on high places, that would be worth going to see. i AM STILL LOOKING INTO MAKEN THE vIDEO GAME FOR KIDS ABOUT THE bIBLE.
wELL gOT rUN
GOD BLESS
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