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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
sorry to hear that. i think it was sort of a heavenly task given to you to test your perseverance. good luck
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Rated: E | (4.0)
ang lalim ng tagalog mo. but it was a good presentation. you should have an english translation of this for the benefit of the english-speaking readers of this web site. good luck.
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Review of Le Cirque  Open in new Window.
Review by seeing-through Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
there is a chique restaurant in downtown new york city by the name "le cirque" which was made famous lately by gloria arroyo, supposed to be the president of the republic of the philippines. here, she dined with a group of philippine congressmen and friends and spent $20,000 ( 1,000,000 pesos) that night. this is not unusual but it was an act of arrogance and insensitiveness since in the philippines, 9 million of its inhabitants are surveyed to be experiencing hunger and languishing in poverty.

sorry for this "inclusion"....i am a filipino and my heart bleeds whenever i could hear such news about my country. thanks...
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Rated: E | (3.5)
i hope you will be proven right that "tomorrow, "he day we become stronger as a nation." as of now....there has been no change with our economy. depression is getting deeper and deeper with every passing day. obama seems not to be sincere and concentrated with all his promises.

i see....most of our people are getting hopeless. the light in the tunnel is not yet clear.
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Review by seeing-through Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
you may be right with your prognosis in a sense but i would suggest that you read and follow up the "mayan prophesies." search about them in "google.com"

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Review of Yo-Yo  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
that was great!
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Review of Hold On To Me  Open in new Window.
Review by seeing-through Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
it is hard to rate a piece with no title in it. honestly, i could not decipher what you wished for....(nursing a broken heart?)

i guess...you got to put your posting a name somehow to be understood well.

you write well....good luck.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
it was a good beginning. i hope you could continue expounding your thoughts....and please give it a title, i would not know what i would be reading about.
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Review of Obama Can  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
i am not a republican nor a democrat. i am not even an american voter...but here in this part of the globe (asia), the name of obama stinks like osama. if obama's slogan is "a change that can believe in" then he is right. did he not change his name from barry soteiro to barrack obama? did he not change his religion from islam to whatever movement that suit his ego? did he not change his atheistic tendencies? i would say, he is a good speaker but his words are a lot of bull. they are empty. all words no action. what did he accomplish in the US senate except for two or three bills that he co-authored and unsignificant. and what is this thing that he "gifted" the clintons with $50 million just to side with him. more? from his campaign fund of 174 million dollars, he kept it half of that amount in an undisclosed bank in China. "he is dirty, man or a wolf in a sheep's clothing," says my guru.

i don't care about the results of the election in your country. i am just laying down some facts which your paid media fail to inform the american people.

nothing more to say. but good luck.



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Review by seeing-through Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
keep on writing. you got a lot of ideas in there that need to be said and written. good luck
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Review by seeing-through Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
above 6 degrees rise in temperature, scientists say that the earth will revert to a condition similar to cretaceous age.

the last 5 paragraphs of your piece were mere conjectures and have no factual basis as of now.

i am not trying to pull down your thesis. i am just adding some inputs i gathered from "Scientific American."

a good thought-provoking piece you have there. keep writing, man.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i think it was a good presentation. but i am quite confused with that line:

matchstick tree's lined
with ebon, liposuction
candidate blackbird's,
as in the Alfred Hitchcock's
famous, the bird flick.

this seemed to be off-tangent...don't you think so? or i just did'nt get the whole context of the poem?

at any rate, it was a good piece for me.
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Review by seeing-through Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
similarly, the same is true in the philippines, the arroyo administration continues to kill or maim activists and journalists who are not in cahoots with the present dispensation. these acts like those of the bush administration must be censured worldwide.

if bush had been labeled as the worst president in the u.s.history, glora macapagal arroyo has been acclaimed as the most corrupt president of the philippines. she has also been named as the "hitler of the philippines" next to the former president, ferdinand marcos.
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Review of These Hands  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
i liked well the poem...except for the last line. it seemed to me a little "off" from the rest. i know it was metaphorical but it somehow "removed" the focus from my mind.

at any rate, it was a lovely poem. good piece.
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Review of Agoraphobia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
the idea of the title seemed to have come a "little late" and it carried little impact to the reader like me. i found it amusing why would one have "panic attack" just the thought of going outside to post a letter? he/she has not been "out" yet to diagnosis this as having agoraphobia. i think a little adjustments is wanting here. don't you think so?

at any rate,i found the piece well written. it was a good topic to deal with and i liked it. continue writing.
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Review of A TIME TO ACT  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
same situation exists in the philippines under the administration of gloria arroyo..human rights are violated. activists are being hunted down and "salvaged."
the opposition party are being demolished with political suits and bribery...

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Review by seeing-through Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
passionate and emotional. well presented.
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Review of Sleepless Nights  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
the last 3 lines were a bit off i believe.

it was a nice poem. with a unique form and style.
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Review of The Days of Blue  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
good poem.
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Review of Porcelain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
that was pretty clever. very well expressed and presented. good work.
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Review of You Gave Us Hope  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
nice song but does it not resemble the song of josh groban?
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Review of Making Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
simple but meaningful. good work.
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Review of Scarlet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
suicide poems have negative values and vibrations.
i wish the author would devote his/her time to something more meaningful and positive.

i am not saying that the poem was good or it was bad. we all have the right to say what we want. this is a democratic country. but i believe it would be more fruitful to write on things that could have bright colors in our life.

sorry to rate your poem low. it was the thought but not the structure that i rated. you could have done much better on other topics, i would believe.

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Review of Fatherhood  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
i loved the thought. good work.
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Review by seeing-through Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
the article has made me remember the old place. i was at the same spot (orianburger) way back in 1979 when the wall dividing the 2 berlins was still standing. i remember that a german guard approached me from nowhere when i started shooting pictures of the place. it was verboten then....how i wish i could return to the place to find what has transpired since then..but the article vividly said all what i wanted to know.

it was a nostalgic piece for me. a good one.
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