I was doing reviews for SWCR and dropped on this one. I like the way you have put everything together, struggles of the mole family, their desires, the way they moved on... I guess us humans have to learn a lot from animals. The most important thing I learnt from this story is that we always have to move on, no matter what!
This is a heartfelt tribute to your friend. This person seems to be special in his own way. There seems to be many positive things about him. The colourful header adds to the beauty of this poem. Proper font size, easy words and short stanzas make it easy to read. Thanks for sharing!
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I wish all people thought the way you do. Even in my country, some girls can't get married because of dark skin colour. I wish people could look beneath physical beauty. I like the struggling nature of the girl. No matter what happens, she'll never give up. This is why I like your writings, they always show people's inner self.
This is my first visit to your port, I really liked this story, though it was filled with sadness, heartbreak. But it also has a flavor of suspense, and perhaps horror too, which kept me glued to this story. I wonder what among the three choices, the lady had picked at last. Write on
Well, you certainly had some unpleaseant experiences in the past, but they say that failure is the pillar of success. And as for children, you'll have to be very patient with them. You at least have solid knowledge about ENT, that's a plus point.
The format and requirements of this contest proves that you not only like writing poetry, but you like analyzing and criticizing poetry too. This will help poets think more deeply about their creations. Hope you'll get lots of entries for this. Thanks for looking at my wishing well. I'm glad to grant your wish.
Hi there,
Thanks for leaving a wish in my wishing well. The light colour of the first stanza hits the eye, it would be better if you change the colour. Also, you can allign the poem at the center. To do that, just add a { c} and { /c } before M of the first line, and after e of the last line. I like the language, few words knit together, expressing your feelings well. Hope you'll get loads of reviews for this.
Hi there,
thanks for the encouraging review you gave me yesterday. I like learning about different countries, and this poem told me a lot about Ireland. I love the layout, and the lovely header that decorates this poem. Ireland seems like a very colourful place.
write on!
Hello Guptaji,
Just read about your offer for TI members in the forum.
I think every single reader who has lost a dear one can relate to this poem. You did not write this poem for anyone specific perhaps.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. Love the way you have expressed your feelings here. But maybe, you might allign this poem at the center, that will make its look better.
Hi there, Natasha,
I just love animals as much as you do. They can be great friends, and they provide support whenever you need unlike humans. Having a pet is like having a little heaven around you. I'll surely try to enter in this contest.
Till then, write on
Hi there,
This is perhaps my first visit to your port, I was hooked to this little story from begining to end. I know how it feels to loose a brother who means so much to his siblings. Hope Allah Allmighty will give him peace, he will always live in your mind.
Hi Sherri,
Lovely C note shop you have there. I'd surely buy some from here soon. Susan's graphics - I just adore them. Please see my special valentine day's sig shop and help if you can, half of the proceeds goes to RAOK, tell me what you think about it. Thanks a lot, and hope you are fine now. Really missed you when you were sick.
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Hello there,
Thanks for sharing this personal experience with us. I loved every single bit of it. And the header on top is just perfect. Sometimes children don't realize how much they mean to their older dear ones, but children are the ones who can turn a hell into heaven.
I'm sure there are lots of music lovers here on this site. I'm sure you'll get loads of entries for this. I'll soon figure out which song, or which album is my favorite, cause I just listen to a lot of music. Then I'll try to enter, or tell my friends about it.
Hello Manika,
Thanks a lot for reviewing my poem. I'm glad you liked it. This is a beautiful poem, really enjoyed reading it. If darkness, or sadness didn't exist, there would be no light or hapiness. I'm not an Indian, I'm a Bengali. But I'm really glad to be a part of team India. Gonna make this review public, so that more people can view it.
Keep writing
Hello there,
This has suspense and drama, mixed with a bit of emotions too. I found your item through Plugword, and though it was a quite big story, I enjoyed reading every part of it. Kiya has done a good job with the banner, this banner made the story more attractive. I'm glad the goons didn't catch gloria. Thanks for sharing this.
This was a marvellous auction. Too bad I saw it after the bidding date was gone, or else I'd bid on something. Thanks for your participation in my new year activity. Best of luck in that. Hope you'll win something good! I'll go and check some of your other items now.
Hello Mel,
This is the first of the 15 reviews you have won from GeminiStar's gift exchange.
sometimes we just buy books, and simply forget about them. Just dust creates a coat on the books, and those books wait to be picked up. But we just leave those knowlege factories on shelves.
This is one of the best groups of WDC. I had recieved upgrades from here twice. A huge thanks for that. I'm proud to be a RAOK member.
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Hello there,
This is the last review you've won from "Invalid Item" round 10.
This is the story I like most. The story of a young orphan girl struggling for freedom really touched my heart. She was not like the other girls who prefered to be caged birds, she was a determined young lady.
The simple words are knitted in such a way, that the reader will always be curious about the next event untill the end.
Hello there,
This is the second of the 3 reviews you've won from "Invalid Item" round 10.
Roscoe surely loved to exercise! But poor Shimmy! I'd try to divert my dog's mind away with something else, if he tried to do that with me. Thank God, the dog finally agreed to go home. Walking at night can be scary at times.
Hi there,
This is your 3rd review from "Invalid Item"
This one's a nice story filled will thrill and fear. Lewis at first seemed like a prodigy, but later on he looked like someone who has supernatural powers too. I enjoyed reading this story.
Done for "The Kindness Tree"
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