Hi there,
This is a very good contest for those who want to write regularly with new prompts. But you should also mention the week's dates in the forum, like september 6th to september 12th, etc. I wanna enter using the graveyard prompt, hope you get lots of entries fore this contest.
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Hi there, Just call me Omni,
I was paired up with you in the Merit Badge birthday Bonanza - So here I am at your port.
This is a very sad story about a woman who had to experience both illness and loneliness. The layout of this story is very attractive. You've used words well, which helps the reader to visualize the situation. Write on!
Hi there,
I loved reading about your most prized possesion - your daughter. For any mother like you, children always bring plenty of happiness. I liked the way you've expressed your desires for her. Nice rhyme and rythm. I hope your daughter will live up to your expectations no matter what.
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This is an interesting item. I like the little bit of thrill created here, this teenage guy seems like a demon! Well written, with carefully chosen words, and the situations are nicely explained. I didn't understand why you included that date at the end. Write on!
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I guess the boy in this story was just a teenager, and he could relate to the incident happening before his eyes. I suggest you give a brief description of the boys family life before going into the main story. You could also add descriptions of the boy's friends etc, to make the character more lively
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Hi there,
This is a poem full of happiness and encouragement. The header image suits this poem well, it looks like the bridge of life, with a positive end, and a negative end. Life is meant to be enjoyed, and we can enjoy in a number of ways. I enjoyed reading it, and I' invite you to my port too.
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I like this poem's layout very much. It looks like a slim bottle, and the allignment at the center is just perfect for this. Well, every cloud has a silver lining. Bad times come to make you realize the value of happy moments with a loved one.
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Friendship is one of my favorite genres, so I decided to check this out.
Friends are special treasures we find for ourselves. You have a very good understanding of the relationship, which is evident through the first paragraph. People don't always have to meet face to face to be good friends. I like the way you've expressed your feelings within a short word limit. I'd suggest to include stacy's portfolio link here, so that other readers can also check her writings.
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Hi there,
You surely love your wife a lot. And she seems to be a very loving and caring person too. I hope you'll share lots of happy moments together. I like the way you've expressed your feelings. This has a nice rhyme and rythm! Write on!
Hi there,
This is a very amusing story. I liked the sense of humour of the hungry bull. He produced supplies for himself from his own words! I really like the layout of this story, it has a special design. But I guess a little bull picture would look good at the end.
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Hi there,
This is a beautiful token of friendship. Friends should be there for each other everyday. Cut some of your punctuation. One or two full stops after each stanza is enough, one after every line is not required. You've expressed your feelings well in this.
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Hi there,
I wonder what I'd say after meeting someone from a previous life. Maybe I'd dream of someone and talk like the way you did in the poem. This poem is unique, cause each stanza has a different starting and ending. Allign this poem at the center, and check your indentation.
Good attempt
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Hi there,
This one's a very good story. I liked reading it. It'll teach the meaning of sharing with friends. You've chosen the words well, it'll not be difficult for children to comprehend. Dialogues occupy a major part of this story, which would encourage children to visualize the events.
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Hi there,
I enjoyed reading your poem, and I agree with you. This poem badly needs some punctuation marks, and some of the lines can be rephrased. Overall, this is an encouraging poem for those who always think negatively. Life is worth living, so we must enjoy every moment of life.
Good attempt
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Hi there,
Well, to me this looks more like a prose than a poetry. It's really inspiring, I guess people who suffer from depression need to read this. It has a very friendly tone, and readers will enjoy reading it. The punctuation and spacing needs improvement, but overall, good job.
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This is a really entertaining children's story. I like the little barking dog a lot, and I like it's determination. But I think you can erase the repetiton of the word "bark", as the reader already knows that this dog barks a lot. I believe children will really enjoy this. You could give a little description of barky. Well written. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
This story is not bad. It looks like both a fantasy and a horror story to me. This can work as the first chapter of a longer story perhaps. And this requires more spacing between the lines. Cut your sentences short, to prevent monotony.
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This is a nice interactive with lots of additions. I've made two additions, maybe I'll add more later. Thanks for buying tickets from my raffle, check the forum to see your ticket numbers "Try your luck-Charity Raffle-Hibernate " . You may also check out:"My tribute to Wdc- CLOSED"
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Hi there,
Welcome to WDC. This is the way people behave when they fall in love for the first time. Change the numbers into words, cut the elipsis at the end, make your poem alligned at the center. Add some more lines to your poem. Overall, this was a good piece to read. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
Hi there,
Welcome to WDC.
This is a sweet story, except for the fact that this girl Marli seems a bit stubborn. Dialogues dominate over this story, it looks more like a drama script. I guess you could cut down the dialogues and add a bit of description. The characters could be described more fully. Talk about the character's appearances and actions. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
Hi there,
Welcome to WDC. Depression is part of anyone's life. It can attack anytime.But life is short and beautiful. So just have faith in God, as He's never unjust, and enjoy every moment of life. Count your blessings. Addiction will never help you. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
I really liked this story. It looks like a letter to yourself or your loved one. I like the way you've talked about the various shades of colors to describe situations. It's a short piece that looks like a painted picture. I applaud your use of words, the story is very well laid out.
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This one's really amusing. Children, at times can understand what grown ups can't. I liked the way you've described your children's behavior. You've used very simple language, which is important to attract readers. The story is well laid out. I wonder what happened to the rabbit later? did you write another part of this story?
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