Hi again,
Overall, this was an interesting too, except for the fact that it had too many dialogues, which can be monotonous at times. I liked being introduced to Terri, she seems like a lively little girl. No gramatical or other errors detected
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This second chapter seemed more interesting to me, as I'm a girl, and just passed my teens a few years back. I like Taylor's character. She seems soft and attractive. You've described such caring characters in your story. I think this will appeal to both adults and children.
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Hi there,
Here's your first review from the coffee house.
I liked the display of pure and true love all throughout this story. The characters are shown well through their dialogues and actions. The strength of this story is its simple language. As I read, I could visualize myself in the street with Tyler's mom.
Dialogues dominate in this one, so it seems like a short story, and a drama script. The paragraphs are well punctuated, and the spacing is also proper. Tyler seems like a very strong guy, who doesn't break down easily.
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Hi Sherri,
Finally, something new. I come to your port every day to look for a new piece. This piece illustrates true love, which is hard to find these days.Your items are always well laid out, this one's also very sweet visually. I like the last four lines most.
Keep writing.
This looks like a very good game. I guess you should increase the number of prizes. Try and promote this in any way you can, before 21st, and hopefully you'll end up getting a huge pile of entries. Also, increase the numbers to be guessed.
This is a very sweet little activity, which many readers will enjoy. Do let me know if you create a story out of these words. I'd be glad to make more additions. I'll check your contest too. I'll make this public so others can view this too.
Hi there,
I like the way you've portrayed the different beauties of all the seasons. I like spring most. You have talked about winter, summer and fall here, but where is spring? Moreover, you can make it a bit longer if you wish. If you revise a bit, this will become even better.
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Hi there,
This poem has a good blend of fear and suspense in it. It portrays a man's last moments of pain, fear and grief well. Though this does not rhyme, I enjoyed reading it nonetheless. With your words you've tried to help the reader visualize the situation.
Well written
Hello there,
You came to my port and gave me a nice review, so here I am, to visit you.
I like the poem a lot, it seems to be full of life. I like the way you've shown courage to move forward, no matter what comes your way. Nice layout, and good rhyming.
Write on! Humming Bird
Hi there,
Looks like you enjoy writing teenage romance. Well, a lot of readers over here might like this genre. Thanks for creating and sharing this. Your port has just a few items, let me know when you write more.You can just write a teenage romance, and use this poll to see how many people like it.
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Hi there,
This is an interesting blog. Though I'm not a teen anymore, yet I like learning about teens. I like the way you've poured your heart in this. But check the font colors, some colors are so light it hits the eye. This blog would look attractive with a little banner.
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Hi there,
This is something every teenager can relate to. At some point of life, a teen's musings become so mysterious to others, that they become strangers to their dear ones. I like the way you've portrayed a part of your life here, and the ending is really inspiring.
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I like this story a lot. It has a special setting, and some special characters too. I like the use of italics for the song. This needs a bit spacing between the lines, or else it looks a bit clustered, and is hard to read. Well tried, write on.
Hi there,
This is a very good contest for those who want to write regularly with new prompts. But you should also mention the week's dates in the forum, like september 6th to september 12th, etc. I wanna enter using the graveyard prompt, hope you get lots of entries fore this contest.
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Hi there,
I loved reading about your most prized possesion - your daughter. For any mother like you, children always bring plenty of happiness. I liked the way you've expressed your desires for her. Nice rhyme and rythm. I hope your daughter will live up to your expectations no matter what.
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This is an interesting item. I like the little bit of thrill created here, this teenage guy seems like a demon! Well written, with carefully chosen words, and the situations are nicely explained. I didn't understand why you included that date at the end. Write on!
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I guess the boy in this story was just a teenager, and he could relate to the incident happening before his eyes. I suggest you give a brief description of the boys family life before going into the main story. You could also add descriptions of the boy's friends etc, to make the character more lively
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Hi there,
This is a poem full of happiness and encouragement. The header image suits this poem well, it looks like the bridge of life, with a positive end, and a negative end. Life is meant to be enjoyed, and we can enjoy in a number of ways. I enjoyed reading it, and I' invite you to my port too.
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I like this poem's layout very much. It looks like a slim bottle, and the allignment at the center is just perfect for this. Well, every cloud has a silver lining. Bad times come to make you realize the value of happy moments with a loved one.
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Friendship is one of my favorite genres, so I decided to check this out.
Friends are special treasures we find for ourselves. You have a very good understanding of the relationship, which is evident through the first paragraph. People don't always have to meet face to face to be good friends. I like the way you've expressed your feelings within a short word limit. I'd suggest to include stacy's portfolio link here, so that other readers can also check her writings.
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Hi there,
You surely love your wife a lot. And she seems to be a very loving and caring person too. I hope you'll share lots of happy moments together. I like the way you've expressed your feelings. This has a nice rhyme and rythm! Write on!
Hi there,
This is a very amusing story. I liked the sense of humour of the hungry bull. He produced supplies for himself from his own words! I really like the layout of this story, it has a special design. But I guess a little bull picture would look good at the end.
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Hi there,
I wonder what I'd say after meeting someone from a previous life. Maybe I'd dream of someone and talk like the way you did in the poem. This poem is unique, cause each stanza has a different starting and ending. Allign this poem at the center, and check your indentation.
Good attempt
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