ohh my gudness..u r amazing ..if i noe u bettr i had say strt for a novel....its amazing teh expression and pain put forward freely...widout any restrictions...lyk u hav jus poured eveytng frm ur soul....
ahh a nice try...properly written but i think u cud just make few changes to last paragraph..no offense,,,sumwhere the 2nd last and last line sumwer seems to b in odd with everything./.the start was beautifully done...plzz dont mind my review..just my thought....
very nyc...but u cna just make the spacing proper between the paragraph after pleasure...or were u planing to keep the space..well i must say a gud try...
awww.....its amazing..short and sweet...beautiful try...and its all true....who cares wat u c in a dream....and its just for that one person...words chosen are very nicely taken..
hey...a big fantastically amazing morninnn to all......i had love to b reviewed critically or however....its lovely to read through ppls thngs and review them...i had wish people to do teh same for me too...thnx...