Well done !
the piece sets a harsh tone and justifies it in the text
we should all consider the cost of what we see displayed before us.
Every murder reduced to a sound bite cheapens the life lost, every horror story and outrage cut and edited to fit our ever decreasing attention span before we lose interest and switch to Seinfeld or Everybody loves Raymond for escape makes us forget true horror.
Worst of all those with no dignity or even sense of personal worth baring their sins for judgment by some Celebrity host and studio audience.
No fan of the media am I, can you tell..lol
I like your poem and hope you will post more of your work
Nice work
enjoyed the pacing and discription of the colors
there is no feeling like the change of seasons to make us whistful
the feeling you envoke in this is very rich with menories
In the part about walking in the morning you might add bits about the nip in the air or the way a breath makes a
pale cloude against the bright colors but its good just as it is !
I look forward to reading more from you and keep up the good work
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