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Review of Sound of Silence  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Heather,

Your poem was very nice. I know how loud silence can be. There are times it does consume me.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sew,

Thank you for sharing your story and for the information. I have type 2 diabetes.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Shasha,

I liked your poem. I know how words can sting. Even though I am forty-five my parents always use those stinging words to make me cry. It is to the point where I only talk to my parents once a month.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lone,

I get really angry too. I know the feeling about it being explosive and then you feel guilty afterward. I hate that guilty feeling.

JJDel
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Review of Hellish Thoughts  
Review by JJDel
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Heather,

This poem is a little dark but I understand it. There are times I live in my own personal hell.

JJDel
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Review of Contrast  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Heather,

Very good on the poem. Of course I would choose the positive one if I could but like you say we don't get a choice. I have been dealt a fairly good hand at life but recently I have been having struggles. Yet I find myself trying to stay as positive as I can. Keep writing.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Sholuck,

Your poem hit home. I have Bipolar and Borderline Personality Disorder. I wear masks all the time. I am scared to let my true self be seen. Writing is wonderful for me because it lets me be me without judgement. Keep up the awesome writing!

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Tanya,

I like your first chapter. I look forward to reading more.

JJDel
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Review of Love, Love, Love  
Review by JJDel
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like your poem. I could use more hugs too.

JJDel
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Review of Studio 54  
Review by JJDel
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Purple,

I have read your work before. I liked this piece. It captured me from the first line. You write very well. Keep on writing.

JJDel
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Review of We Die Twice.  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Asder,

I really liked your poem. I liked the line "Fear is a life's ambition to challenge." That really made me think.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Eyes,

This sounds like it might work. I have never tried meditation for medical purposes.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Tristan,

Your poem is very good. I love the last line, 'an inner child, still wanting to see the snow'. Your descriptions are wonderful. I have nothing negative to say about this poem. Keep writing!

JJDel
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Review of Lies  
Review by JJDel
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Very interesting poem. I have been alienated because of my illness. I have Bipolar and most people do not understand it. Either I sleep because I am depressed, I am up all the time with no need to sleep because I am manic, and then there is the normal mood. I am in a normal mood phase now. But I get the strange and hurtful looks.

JJDel
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Review of Contact  
Review by JJDel
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Don,

I liked your poem. I get dreams from the dead. I have talked to my Grandfather and Grandmother. I got messages to give to loved ones. I have dreamed of my dogs and my cat, letting me know that they were okay, and waiting for me. When I first started getting these dreams it scared me but then I quickly realized that there was nothing to be afraid of. The dreams now calm me and I actually look forward to them.

JJDel
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Review of Hypertension  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Purple,

I am sorry you have to deal with high blood pressure. My father has high blood pressure too. Keep taking your medication and I wish you luck.

JJDel
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Review of Lucy  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Bald Writer,

Your story had me in tears. Very well done. It is never easy loosing a loved one. Our companions are with us for such a short time but it seems to be harder to loose them. They give us unconditional love and they simply accept us without judgement. I lost my Mittens a few years ago and it was heart breaking. I still cannot get another cat for it doesn't seem right. Lucy loved you very much and try to remember all the good times you had with her.

JJDel
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Review of Bewildered  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear CC,

I am sorry to hear about your illness. My father is in remission, he had throat cancer, which was very scary. I was terrorfied that I was going to loose my father. My father is a strong man and he fought and won. I am sure you will beat this.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Pierce,

Nicely done.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear SWPoet,

Honestly I thought that this poem would be better. I really could not relate to it. I am sorry. It flowed nicely and there were no spelling errors. I am sure you have a gift for hearing spirits but it is hard for you to hear what they are exactly saying. Keep writing.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Sarah,

Your poem has me in tears. Very well done. I am sorry you have had to feel this way. It is not fun. If you ever need to talk, please contact me, I will always lend an ear.

JJDel
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (4.5)
You are right. Right now is what matters. The past is gone and the future is not here yet. It is fun to think of the future but we have to focus on the here and now. Great poem.

JJDel
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Review of Snowy Kitten  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love your "Snowy Kitten" She is so pretty with those blue eyes.
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Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Mordee,

Your poem was hysterical and yes, when in doubt blame the kids. I don't have kids of my own but I blame my nephews. LOL.

JJDel
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Review of Mysterious Cats  
Review by JJDel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Chris,

Your poem was adorable. I love cats. I think they are the smartest damn things.

JJDel
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