Secondly, I love the poem. You are dead on with this. If you are not stick thin or you do not look like a barbie doll guys turn their noses up at you. It is so frustrating.
I liked your little article. I too have Bipolar. It is a blessing in disguise in a way. I think we are more creative. I have struggled with Bipolar and over come obstacles that most people would never overcome. Good luck with your illness and remember recovery is real.
I liked your poem. With your permission I would like to print it out and read it to my nephews. The both of them love Scooby Doo. Your poem made me smile and laugh. Happy New Year!
I loved your poem. Old age does come on and it seems like it is all of a sudden. I am only 45, not too young but not old either, and I am noticing the aches and pains are already starting. I got injured on the job, I was a paramedic, and I hurt my right leg. I have had to have a right knee replacement and now the left knee needs one too. My knees ache, my hips hurt. I now wear glasses to read and when I am on the computer. So many changes. Happy New Year Donna and I hope it is a great one for you.
I hear you. I really liked your poem. I did not make any resolutions either. I am just grateful for every day I am here on earth. I will take each day as it comes.
Happy New Year!
I am not fond of this poem. I thought it was very repetitive. I am very curious. What is the meaning of this poem? You cannot conquer time for time is endless. I think this poem could be a lot better. I am sorry for the negative review but I wanted to be honest.
I like how you set this up, time and feet. This set up is very creative. I also really enjoyed it. I use to be a Paramedic and I know all too well about living life to its fullest. Thank you for the reminder. Keep writing and Happy New Year!
Your poem is very interesting. I suffer from Bipolar and Borderline Personality Disorder. This poem hit home for me. You would never know I had either illness but there are times that they show themselves and I hate it when they do. You are great at poetry. Keep on writing.
Your poem is excellent. I am sorry you had to go through this. It hit a cord with me too for I have been in an abusive relationship as well. It is hard to break the cycle. I actually divorced him. Good luck and keep writing.
I found your story to be very difficult to get into. I suspect that Adelin dies at the end. I know there are people that will like this story. I am sorry I did not like it better. I saw no spelling errors and no grammar errors in this story. Keep writing. You have a great imagination.
I liked your poem. Your descriptions were beautiful. You have captured death well. I have lost my share of friends and it can be heart breaking. You write very well, keep up the great work, you show a lot of potential. Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.
I am so sorry for your loss. That is the greatest loss that I can imagine. Your poem was short but sweet. Stay strong. I hope it gets easier for you soon.
What a wonderful poem and a great tribute. I am very sorry for your loss. Loosing a sister is never easy. I am grateful that I still have my "little" sister. I do not know what I would ever do without her. My sister is my inspiration. I love her dearly even if she does not realize it. I tell my sister all the time that I love her and I look up to her. There is nothing like a sister.
I liked your poem. I am 45 and it reminded me of the end of days. I am also a retired paramedic, due to injury, and I have found myself thinking this way. You have a real talent for poetry.
I liked your poem. I liked the words you chose. It was very pretty. An old friend of mine use to raise rabbits. She also would rescue rabbits. She had a kind heart. Baby bunnies were so cute. I use to be fascinated by them. I loved watching them hop around.
I liked this poem. You have some real talent for poetry. I wrote one poem and I found that very hard to do. Poetry and I don’t do well together. I hope your holiday was merry and bright. I know mine was. I was with my nephews who are 6 & 9. They were wonderful.
That poem was great. I love pet dialogue. Everyone has a different take on it. Your poem made me smile on this very chilly morning. Thank you and have a blessed day.
JJDel
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