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Casual, friendly. I'll point out typos when I see them and make suggestions about quality, characters and logic, besides telling you how I feel about the piece.
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Does it make sense? Are the characters well portrayed? What's the overall feel of the piece?
Favorite Genres
Poetry, children's, anything rated E
Least Favorite Genres
Anything higher than 18+
Favorite Item Types
Poems, flash fiction, essays, articles, biographical/personal, etc
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Review of Just A Dusting...  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh my! I could feel the bitter cold as I read this. Brr. But why couldn't the narrator go back inside their house to charge their phone? Where were they that defeat was so "defeating?" Also, specifically mentioning that the starter was silent implies the starter is broken, not that the car battery died from the cold. If it was just the car battery the starter would be clicking. Sorry, but I speak from experience *Laugh*
Also, the meter is a little ragged. When I write poetry I tend to use a very stiff meter, but that's just me. Yours is more conversational *Smile*
Other than that it's a crisp, cold and humorous poem. Thank you for sharing.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful prayer. The third line is a sentence fragment; adding the word "so" at the beginning would help: "So that You are pleased with me..." Also, there should be more punctuation to make it easier to read. A semicolon (;) between "pleased with me" and "let me be" would help. And they always say "all caps is SHOUTING." Perhaps you could choose a different font or a pretty color to set the words in so it looks nice, rather than using all caps. Thanks for sharing!
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Review of " I'M Greatful "  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful sentiment! The word is spelled "grateful". Your lines are short and simple and I can see the simplicity of your feelings here. The blessings of good health are indeed something to be grateful for. Thank you so much for sharing with us :) take care.
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