This poem is both objective and surrealistic. Great peice. I might remind you whos is actually following. I found your choice of words were often measmurizing, your audience will be lost in translation. You might think of simplifying your vocabulary to more a more sublte but still defining experience. I've been lookin for a reviwer to review my work, "Philosophical Parable", please send me feedback. you seem "worthy" of respectable enterpretation.
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