Now that's scary. Does that mean if I die right now I'll spend eternity writing reviews at writing.com. Hey this was an excellent piece of writing. Interesting and entertaining and a little bit of a twisted ending. The writer has a real sense of humor and can convert it to paper.
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This is a well written piece of writing that had me on the edge of my seat throughout the reading of it. Not only is it entertaining, interesting, and creative, it also tells a story, almost a novella in prose. And then to my surprise, at the veryend it tells another story. Very, very good job.
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This piece of writing was moving. For a minute there while I was scrolling down I kind of held my breadth in anticipation of what was going to come next. This was well written and interesting. Bravo to the writer for a job well done.
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Well written and entertaining. I enjoyed reading this piece of writing. I especially liked the part where you went to the Heinekin museum, for I, to, am a beer drinker. Job well done.
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I thought this was a novel, creative idea. When you thought this up you found a winner. Plus the story rolls along smoothly. Very interesting and entertaining in its concept.
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I thought this was a good story. This writer is a natural born storyteller. The story is intereing from the very start and entertaining. Dialogue is good and believeable. And, the story has a happy ending. Kind of.
Good job.
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I think this "Why Do I Write" is both a testament and a tribute to the life of this writer. The writing is entertaining and interesting. It tells a story, sometimes sad but in the end, happy. Good job.
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This is a very emotional, touching story. And also tragic. It was interesting and entertaining to read, but it hit in several truths which makes one ponder.
Good job.
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This writer is very literate. Interesting comentary but not for the sqeamish who will not recognize the depth of this piece of writing. Philosophical in its entirity and worth reading.
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I took to heart the last few lines of this wonderful piece of writing. The part where visits do matter. I've been in the situation where nobody came to visit and although at the time I tried to act like it did not bother me it did.
My hat goes off to the writer of this piece.
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Here we go. Writer is obvously talking about something in their past. Poetic license allows writer to be vague while at the same time writing good poetry.
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When I first started reviewing, I read some of your suggestions and they really helped. And I made some bad reviews and the feed back was unreal. But since then I've learned to tone down a little. In some cases it is hard. This article will help me tremendously.
That sounds reasonable. But what if I want to look at the river? This piece of writing is an abstract. I liked it.
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Amber is a word that builds pictures in my mind. = I liked that line. I feel that way about my son. Nicely done. A tribute to Amber. Creative. Entertaining. Good job.
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I think in the first lines: women should be woman. Other than that I did not catch any mistakes. Nice letter.
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Very nice poem. Good verses. Good meter. And good advise, I guess. Poem tells a story and the chorus, I liked that the best. This writer exhibits qualities of being creative.
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Hey, I don't think this stinks. Sometimes writers are their own worst critics. Verses are good and meter is too. Plus it is a light-hearted happy little piece of writing.
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Now I really did like and enjoy this poem which was well written and reminded me of those summertimes when no one had air conditioning and the windows were open.
Nice job.
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This reminds me of my mother's kitchen. This is a completely inspiring poem, entertaing, interesting and tells of simpler times, I'm sure. For one thing my mother did not have a wood stove although she did learn to cook on one.
This is really a good poem.
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Top-notch piece of writing that tells a story and then tells another story with in that story. Writer made it work and it did. Good grammar and good job. Welcome to writing.com
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