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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Unresolved by conventional warfare,
The "I do somemnly swear. . .
To the best of my abilty
WILL PRESERVE
PROTECT,
And DEFEND
The Constitution of the United States. . . " Efforts are failing.

This segement had special meaning to me, because I feel the same way.

This poem is well-written and makes a significant polical statement. Well-done.!!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
To tell the truth, I passed over this story a few times. I just could not bring myself to review another piece of writing concerning 911. But, since I had reviewed some of you other work, I thought I waould take a crack at it anyway,

This story is well-written in its entirity. I enjoyed reading it and I feel like a like of thought went into the writing of this piece.

Very well done. BRAVO!
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Review of Why This Lust?  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well written little poem and the verses seem to be in good meter. The poem is about the age old struggle that is instinctually inherient in all men. Good luck on trying to overcome this feeling. However, I think all men feel this way at some point in their life. Good writing, well done.
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Review of Cannot Help It  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem tells of a concept that is so true in real life. "With a Love that burns true....but not in both directions."

I've been in these circumstances a few times. On both sides.

I thought this poem was well-written and entertaining. The writer shows depth in his thoughts. Bravo.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
If this isn't a creative piece of writing, then I don't know what is. Very well written and full of humor. In fact, I started laughing on the first paragraph and I was still rolling on the floor when I got to the end.

The group of people that wrote this are completely "In sync" with the rest of the group. This story is just fantastic. !!!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could nopt find any spelling or gramatical mistakes and the story is so well-written, so entertaining, so eloquent.... then I had to give it five stars, even though I seldom give anything five stars.

My hat goes off to this writer for being so talented.
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Review of Inside My Heart  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Pretty good. I could see no flaws in the verses and it is well-written. Plus it is happy poem. Ends happy. Sounds to me like two people in love. Hey, isn't that waht makes the world go round? Very nice, keep writing and welcome to writing.com ........BRAVO!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is the best story I've read tonight and I've read some really good ones. The story starts out fast and furious, and so far has not slowed down. The conversations are real and very believeable and the entire two chapters are well written. I can't wait to see the rest of this novel. Bravo for a job well done.
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Review of The Campfire  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found noting wrong with grammer nor did I find any mis-spelled words. I gave this excellet, well-written piece of writing five stars because it is a true story that tells of tragedy as well as valor. This story is a tribute to all scouts. And was well told by the writer.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This piece of work describes me and the "Love of My Life" ( my wife) to a T. We met online, then we met offline, and then we got married. So, my hat off to you for writing such a meaningful poem about ME. When my wife awakes I'll have to share with her.
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Review of Fixation  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nothing wrong with this piece of work. It says everything with clarity. It was entertaining in the fact that I like buttons, too. Especially as described in this piece. I thought the overall poem was witty and clever. Writer has talent. Bravo! My hat off to you.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Good poem but what does it say? When reviewing poetry I try not to be too critical, because the writer has his/her own interpretation of what they are writing. However, when it is not clear what has been written, then the reader has to make his own interpretation. And in this case I don't know what to say except it sounds like a dream.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think my rating system is close to yours already. The difference would be in taste. Things that I like real well may not be things you like real well. Plus as you can see, I have dificulty picking the right words to express myself. In any event, I like the way you describe everything in detail and after reading the above article I can't think of anything to add.
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Review of Comment-In-A-Box  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
As usual you've done it again. I am going to try to design my rating system after yours. I seldom give a five star rating but in this case I'm making an exception because I can not think of anything I could add to this piece. Thank you for your continued help.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Are you a soldier? Because you hit the nail on the head. All of these traits are needed to be a good soldier. The writing is tight and concise and the article looks to be well-researched or it comes from personal knowledge. You've exhibited the talent to be a good writer.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hooves of Fire, oh, that's too much. Cute little short story about a cow that writes stories and has an account with writing.com. And is a pretty good writer. I enjoyed the story, thought it was well-written, entertaining, and exhibits your talent for being able to put words down on paper and make them interesting for other people to read.
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Review of The Magic 21  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Sounds like every one had a good ole time. This is well-written and where there is conversation it sounds real and believable. Well presented. And I wonder how many 21 year olds have done similiar things as you and your group did, I know I did back when I turned 21,. Good job.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I read this story all the way through and to tell the truth, when I saw what Santa had brought you all for Christmas I almost cried. Boy this is a Well-written, emotional story. I'm giving it five stars. I don't see anything that needs changing. Job well done.
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Review of Fishing Buddies  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Now did I read this wrong, or is "Fishing Buddies" a love story? And the writer of this story is a natural born storyteller. Entertaining and well written and most important in this genre is: the story is believable.
Thank you for a job well done. Keep on writing.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Now is a very sad piece of writing. No one knows how to laugh. Very sad. But the writing itself is powerful and tells a story. One that I enjoyed reading. It was well-written and entertaining. And BoBo turned out to be a good character. Welcome to writing.com
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Review of In My Head  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I hope I'm the only one that sees my thoughts. Sometimes when my thoughts are exceptionally bad I get scared that they will appear on my forehead like a lit up marquee, but so far that hasn't happened. I would say everybody has these thoughts. Now keep writing and Welcome to writing.com
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Review of Millennium Star  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey, I was a little surprised because this was actually a pretty good "space" story. This one was written in very understandable words and actually had strong characters and a good plot. A man takes on new responsibilities but can not find his friend thaqt is lost. Strong.
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Review of I love You  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Although this is certainly a tribute to God it is also a tribute to the writer and an inspiration to us (the readers) for the way you show your love to God. I thought this was good. And also powerful in its concept. Keep on writing. And keep up the good work.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Jenna arrives at her condo. She gestures open the door and walks through the doorway. The Wilson Estimator kicks in and brings the temperature and humidity to optimum levels for her mood, adjusts the lighting to match the activity level of her brain, and provides an intricately calculated combination of aromas to enhance her performance in her currently desired area of interest. In less than a second, every room in her condo is at a temperature of 74.6 degrees with 34.7 percent humidity, bathed in a bright white glow, and pleasantly fragranced in a scent dominated by lavender and jasmine. Tonight is a night to study.
This paragraph, I want all of this in my house. Pronto.

Okay as to the story. Your correlation of having the NFL rule our country sounds preety good, in fact, I don't know but what they would do a better job than out last seven presidents. I'd be willing to give them a try.

This story is well-written and clever. Keep up the good, and imaginative work.
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Review of The End of Days  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I don't see anything wrong with this very short poem dedicated to faith. However, without a prologue to let us (the readers) know what this is all about, I think it is too short to stand alone. Clever words put together to sound great, but just not enough to explain the entire thought.

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