This is an interesting start of a short story? Novel? It could be these or whatever the writer wants it to be. What is written is well done and intertaining, and shows creativity. Welcome to writing.com
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If this truly was your first attempt at writing a sex scene then Bravo. You did an excellent job. Not even Stephen King could write one that good on his first attempt. This was well written, entertaining, interesting and very erotic. Good job.
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One brother dies while one brother lives...This poem is about the exchange of life. Well written and verses are good, meter is okay and this writer knows how to tell a story. Welcome to writing.com
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Excellent story about grief and how one woman starts to deal with it. Unique approach to dealing with grief. Well written, good grammar, and not mis spelled words that I noticed. This story was easy to read and entertaining. I enjoyed it. Welcome to writing.com
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This poem is well written, verses are tight and meter is good. It makes a religous statement and at the same time is a tribute. As I've said before, when reviewing poetry, only the author knows for sure what the whole meaning is. So in this case all I can say is: Job well done.
I really enjoyed reading this piece of writing. It was enlightening, entertaining, creative, and offers sage advise to anyone who reads it. The writer of this piece shows a depth of understanding about the world at large. Keep up the good work and Welcome to writing.com
Very well written narrative. No grammatical errors and spelling looked okay. In this story the vampires are written in to be the good guys, just out for an evening meal. I could find no malice in the acts of taking blood. BRILLIANT! Welcome to writing.com
To me, this is a darn good piece of work. The verses compliment each other and the meter is right on target. And this reviewer can relate to it because he has a dog that is all the things mentioned in the poem and of course a whole lot more. Very well done.
This is a well written poem with good verse and excellent meter. It is about someone reaching out for love. The writer shows talent and could be a natural born storyteller. The poem does tell a sort of story. And the ending is pretty much how it would be in real life in most situations. Welcome to writing.com
Basically this is a good sample with a couple of typos in it. I prefer to see paragraphs have line breaks and conversations to have line breaks, it just makes it easier for the Reader to read when line breaks are incorporated. Nice. Welcome to writing.com
Now this piece of writing has teeth. The subject is abuse and the writer tells about it with emotion and passion. Verdes are good and meter seems to work. And the piece tells a story, sad, but with a happy ending. My hat off to the writer for a job well-done.
This writer writes with so much compassion that I'm venturing we'll soon see her in print. And notice how she has a craft for weaving words of wisdom into old songs that have special meaning, not only to the writer but to all of those considered to be baby boomers.
Well-written and so truthful. Takes me back forty or so years when some of my friends were writing similiar poems and articles about the vietnam war. We marched in the streets to the beat of a different drummer. Sunflower shows so much depth in all of her writing.
Is this a tribute to Odis Redding? No, it is a tribute to life. Odis just gets a little credit for the song, "sitting on the Dock of the Bay."
This is a well written piece of work that is truly good.
The waves pulsate awry,
wind blowing raw and harsh with words
of warning to my presence
against all further intrusion.
Sunflower has done it again by writing an emotional poem that is full of thought provoking narratives. In any event, I enjoyed reading this poem, the writer has a way with words and how to use them to her advantage. So I envy this writer because she/he can say so much with so little.
This is a very intense, however brilliant, piece of work about the loss of someone the writer loved and still does love. The poem itself could fill up a single poetry book, but regardless of the vlume of work, every line points and reminds of the loss of good times.
Bravo! Excellent! Brilliant!
There is so much passion and compassion in this poem.
This is an extrodinary piece of work. Not only in it's lenght (it is almost a novella) but in its entire dedication to the love of one person, his daughter.
Not only filled with memories past but also of favorite recipies the man and his daughter had shared over the years.
The intensity of the love shown here is very awesome.
This has always been one of my favorite songs. I have the video version on VHS. I thought the added verses were just excellent. I kind of sang them to myself as I was looking through them. My hat goes off to the writer for being very creative and doing a great job.
I thought this was an excellent poem and it exhibited creative expression, even though I thought a couple of lines in the first part of the poem were melodramtic. That is just a personal opinion, so don't try to cash it at the bank. Over all it was good.
Excellent take-off on an old classic. I'm laughing so hard right now that I can't type. The verses are all good and the meter works just about the whole way through. Might be a little bump in the meter here and there, but it does not distract from the quality of the writing. Very good job and I gave it five stars.
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