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This poem flashed at me when i opened it. litarally. The color almost blinded me for a second. lol talk about a flashy coevr.
Poem:
Your poem was done nicely. you did a good job putting it together.
favorite part:
My favorite part would have to be
Holding the shining blade,
Emotionless, she slashed,
You did a very good job building those sentences or paragraphs and making them stand out among the others
Good work on that.
Keep up the good work and write on.
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Hello Farooq. I am here to review your item for part of your showering acts of joy review package.
A very nicely done peice of poetry.
Font:
the font you chose was wonderful with this piece. the format was another thing that brought the piece to life. The poem brought itself to life in front of my eyes. The words stood out and everything.
Wording:
Your wording was nice also you did a good job wording this right and wording that right. You got it all worded nicely which made the whole thing smooth to read.
Keep up the good work and write on.
Very nice group idea. I see you put plenty of thought into this group. Making fellow scifi readers come together and think up ideas with each others. This goes with your three prompts contest. You did a good job attaching everything and putting the point right out.
keep up the good work.
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This contest is unique.
Becuase of one prompt instead it has three. Giving the contestant a chance to pick about what he wants to write. Instead of just one prompt and forcing the person to work with that prompt.
Your format was good your idea was great and you did a good job putting this together.
Keep up the good work.
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Another great cnote shop done by you. Your Cnotes were nicely done and they are great for wishes and cheers. Lol like your title says. The cnotes would be good for special occasions. Your choice of pictures and really cool and they are not only nice to look at but fun to look at.
Very nice work and keep up the good job.
Very nice Cnote shop. Everything is in order thinks to you and Writing dot com. Your Cnotes look very nice and you did a good job making them that way. They are nice cnotes.
You should continue to make many cnotes in the days to come. Even if you have like 5 cnote shops. lol
Keep up the good work.
Very nice photo. Although im not a great photo expert i know that if you had steped in the water you would have gotten a better picture. lol maybe his mouth.
I guessing you got this picture yourself. I bet it was preatty cool to see a real one in real life.
Nice picture and keep up with the art.
This kinda cracked me up becuase of everything they say in the army. lol
Your outline forms and grammer and plot was done nicely. You went to extra effort to look up and research the army very well.
Favorite one was.
BDU Battle Dress Uniform
It is the camouflage uniform worn by the armed services today. As this story takes place in Germany 1988, the BDU uniform was of a green wood line pattern. BDU’s can also have a desert pattern to them as well and are currently worn by the services in Iraq.
Keep up the good work and write on. It was a nice peice of work.
Very nice story or poem which ever you want to call it.
Your grammer was done nicely and made the whole thing readable. God bless grammer. lol
Favorite part
My favorite part had to be
And I know there's no forgetting; only trying to move on
Wording:
Your wording was great. You did a good job with you form of wording and which along with your grammer made the whole thing much more readable.
Overall:
Overall you did a great job on this peice of work. Your skills show greatly on paper. Keep up the good work
This poem was a very unique poem. I read it and i was amazed at the entire thing. It was written very nicely and you did a good job on it. Ok now bye bye. lol just joking i would leave the review right there. now that would just be dissapointing. lol dissapointment is life.
Character:
no particulary unless you count New Year a character. lol i must be a nut hope a squirell dont start chewing on me.
Format:
You have a very nice format here. The way you formated everything out looks very nice and makes the whole poem spring with life. Bazong.
Favorite part:
My favorite part would have to be
Hot chocolate with mountains of whipped cream
lol who doesnt like hot choco with moutains of whiped cream. The more whipped cream the better hot chocolate.
Spacing:
Your spacing was quite od for the fact that you had one area like this
flames
just like that what a paragraph. lol you should fix that or edit it. unless of course you like it that way.
Wording/grammer:
your wording and grammer were very nice to read and look through. Your grammer was almost perfect and your wording was quite enjoyable.
Overall:
Overall your poem was very nice and you did a good job
Keep up the good work and write on
Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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Very well done. Your title amediatly told me that this poem had to have something to do with birds or flock of birds migrating. Watching the birds migrate is a nice thing to watch. actualy you could say much or very enjoyable. to watch them glide or float along int he sky. How ever you would want to word it.
Character:
None characters what so ever other then geese. Lol geese arent characters.
Plot:
Your plot was a very nice one. It was along the lines of birds and them migrating into the morning sky. Now as i talked about earlier the bords are wonderful to watch but to watch them glide off during the morning sky. Hot dog you got a free showing at the theater. lol
Spacing:
Your spacing was a very creative one. For a poem it seemed a little to un spaced. Your paragraphs were too long making it harder to read then some poems. You should fix that. would help alot for those who were to read this.
Format:
Your format was enjoyable and made the whole thing much better to look at. but there were isusus with as i said earlier Spacing. and as every good writer knows spacing is part of the format.
Overall:
Overall you did a fairly good job.
Keep up the good work and write on
Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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This was a very nice poem to read. i liked the quote you wrote this on or based it on i mean.
Snow provokes responses that reach right back to childhood.
~Andy Goldsworthy
Snow is a great thing when your older. it reminds you of when you were a child and dashed and played in the snow. this brought back to me when i read it when i was a little younger and would spend every minute i could out in teh snow. quite fun and memorable moments.
Plot:
Your plot was quite touching. Snow and the power of snow when you are in child hood and when you grow up and what it does to affect your parent hood or adulthood.
Overall your plot was enjoyable and quite a good subject to write about or on.
Format:
Your format was nice again though you had the mistake with your spacing making every paragraph too big. you should really go through ur poems and fix them all.
Spacing:
Your spacing was once again to far away. You didnt space the story out enough and you didnt creat enough paragraphs. That could really use some work.
Overall:
Overall you did a good job other then spacing problems.
Keep up the good work and write on
Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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Very nice story/ poem you got here.
I called it a story/poem becuase you wrote it like you would a story just made the format like a poem. very strange thing to do but i guess it makes it more uncommon. which is what every writer wants. i poem thats stands out in the crowd.
Subject/Plot:
The subject you picked for this story is greatly known. Its about spock and the star ship enterprise. Lots of people have seen the movies or either seen the tv series. They are quite good. But Many people would get this by just looking at the title. Tis all a bout spock.
Characters:
Lol its spock again. Spock is the only character again and whats weird in this is that you actualy gave the character information in this one. usualy poems dont do that but its cool how you did that.
Format:
Format was nicely done and you did a good job making the format as you wanted it to be.
Spacing:
Spaccing was like any other poem is. After each part of a paragraph you press the enter botton.
Grammer:
Wonderful grammer. i didnt even spot a mistake on this one. you did a great job.
Overall:
A great poem. keep up the great work and write on
Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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*Quill* 1st Place in the "Dark Dreamscapes Poetry Contest"
Thats awsome. That means you wrote this with the best of your ability. Which is good. lol
Ok so at the end where you discribed the storm. That was a preatty neat description.
You will find me in the moonlight;
In raging tantrum of the storm.
I, myself, in darker form.
That was a great description. i couldnt have described it that good even if i tried. But i dont really know how good i am at writing.
Characters:
No characters in this lol. well makes since becuase this is a poem after all.
Format:
Your format was very nice on this poem. You did a great format. your format is unique and special. never quite seen a format like this. looks very nice on this peice of poetry.
Spacing:
Your spacing was very nice in this also. Your spacing along with your format made this peom look very nice and preatty.
Overall:
Overall you did a good job with this. grammer was perfect and made everything flow easily.
Keep up the good work and write on
Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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Characters:
You dont really have a character other then you. I only count you as a character becuas eyou wrote it and you would be the character behind the story. nothing about the characters is in this which makes since becuase it is a poem.
Format:
Your format was nicely done. the format you used was idea for poetry. It looks great on this peice of poetry.
Also your format did a good job with working along side your wording and spacing to make this peice look fine and dandy.
Spacing:
Your spacing was very good. You spaced it perfectly. Your spacing looked perfect on this peice of work.
Wording:
Your wording was done great for a poem. Your wording made the whole poem come alive and made this peice of work much easier to read and much easier to look at. for if it isnt easy to read it isnt easy to look at.
Grammer:
Your grammer was done with great detail. You did a good job with your grammer. its like perfect grammer.
Overall:
You did a great job on this and i couldnt have done better myself.
Write on
Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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The whole plot and stuff behind this poem seemed a nice subject to do.
You did a great job with this poem. I see your skills of writtening great poems is very great. lol
Your format:
your format was very nice and made the article easier to read. It also just seemed a veyr nice format and conveinant for you subject.
Spacing:
Your spacing was a little strange. But it looked fine and went well with the flow of the words. Overall your spacing was very nice and made this article not only easier to read but funner to read.
Flow:
The way your words flew made the poem sound very nice. You did a great job making the flow and wording go together. atleast i think that. Keep the good flow up.
Wording:
Wording was very nice and the words you used seemed perfect for what you were writing. Your wordding was just simply good all around.
Grammer:
SO i found no grammer mistakes other then in my review. lol Your grammer seems to be good along with your punctuations.
HAHAHA lol. What a rare peice of work. This has to be one of my favorites now lol. this made me laugh and i couldnt stop laughing. I wonder what gave you the idea to do something like this. Never seen something so funny like this. You did a great job on writing these small nonsense poems.
All the random sayings were funny like oogle boogle bugle boy. What a name for a peice of writting work. but when i was reading this i was all like laughing after every single thing you said on here. There were some preaty weird combinations like
In the furnace in the heart
Someone stole my horse and cart.
That one made me laugh the most.
Ok
Plot:
i dont know where you got the plot from but this is great. although theres not much of a plot anyways.
Format:
Your format was very nice with you sayings. It made it much easier to go from one to the next.
Spacing:
Your spacing was cool. But it seems so many peopleuse the same spacing for all there work.
Wording/Grammer:
Your wording was very nice and your grammer was simply perfect.
Characters:
You did a good job on your characters. You described them just enough for a short story. For chracters in a short story you never want to explain to much or too little about them.
Plot:
Your plot was preatty good. the whole thing about going to get wood. That made it much more exciting becuase when they came back everything was in flames or in ruins. and then they had to fight the beast.
Spacing:
Your spacing did a great deal to help this peice look nice. The fact that you used alot of ~ also helped it look much nicer.
Format:
Your format is similar to spacing but it had more to do with words. Your format was great and along with the spacing made the peice enjoyable to look at.
Overall:
Overall you did a great job with everything includin grammer which i found not a signel grammer mistake. But your flow of words was also great. just overal everything went good with everything. Good job and keep up the good work.
Write on
you did a good job describing the setting and everything that was going on. you wrote this very nice making it a fun peice to read. i enjoyed it very much. so your format was very nice and your spacing was perfect. although your wording was a little strange i thought it was fine. Write on
you did a great job on this. your writing skills are awsome. the way you described every thing made it very funt o read. you did a great job with you grammer and i found zero mistakes. you spacing was great the same with your format and wording. and just overal you did a fantastic job
Write on
Very nice peice of poetry. its also very touching. you did a great job on this peice of work. your spacing was great and your format made it much easier and funner to read. our wordinf was very nice for the subject and your grammer was even better. Keep up the good work and write on
Very nice poem. Also welcome to WDC. so overall you did a great job on this peice of work. your spacing was very nice with the subject and your plot and subject was a nice one. your wording was also great and so was your form
You did a good job writing this keep up the good work
Write on
when i read the title at first i thought it was going to be about a light house shining out in the darkness. but when i read this it wasnt even close to what i thoughtit would be. Heheh isnt that how the cookie crumbles. You did a great job on this. Keep up the good work and write on
happy fourth of july i guess is what our talking about. Very appropiate to when im reading it. lol its 4 oclock exactily. U did a great job with this peice and your spacing was weird for this but it didnt make it any harder to read. Keep up the great work and write on
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