Characters:
You did a good job on your characters. You described them just enough for a short story. For chracters in a short story you never want to explain to much or too little about them.
Plot:
Your plot was preatty good. the whole thing about going to get wood. That made it much more exciting becuase when they came back everything was in flames or in ruins. and then they had to fight the beast.
Spacing:
Your spacing did a great deal to help this peice look nice. The fact that you used alot of ~ also helped it look much nicer.
Format:
Your format is similar to spacing but it had more to do with words. Your format was great and along with the spacing made the peice enjoyable to look at.
Overall:
Overall you did a great job with everything includin grammer which i found not a signel grammer mistake. But your flow of words was also great. just overal everything went good with everything. Good job and keep up the good work.
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you did a good job describing the setting and everything that was going on. you wrote this very nice making it a fun peice to read. i enjoyed it very much. so your format was very nice and your spacing was perfect. although your wording was a little strange i thought it was fine. Write on
you did a great job on this. your writing skills are awsome. the way you described every thing made it very funt o read. you did a great job with you grammer and i found zero mistakes. you spacing was great the same with your format and wording. and just overal you did a fantastic job
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Very nice peice of poetry. its also very touching. you did a great job on this peice of work. your spacing was great and your format made it much easier and funner to read. our wordinf was very nice for the subject and your grammer was even better. Keep up the good work and write on
Very nice poem. Also welcome to WDC. so overall you did a great job on this peice of work. your spacing was very nice with the subject and your plot and subject was a nice one. your wording was also great and so was your form
You did a good job writing this keep up the good work
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when i read the title at first i thought it was going to be about a light house shining out in the darkness. but when i read this it wasnt even close to what i thoughtit would be. Heheh isnt that how the cookie crumbles. You did a great job on this. Keep up the good work and write on
very nice idea and plot on this story. YEah daily challenges are hard and challenging some times. Well ecspecialy when your disabled. Well you did a great job with this peice of work. No mistakes and no grammer mistakes either. Keep up the good work and write on
oh i didnt get that this was for the yellow cased aruthurs until i read it. Yeah i would love to be yellow. Like a lego. you did a great job on this. Your format was great and wording was buitiful. Your spacing went great with this even if there wasnt much spacing.
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what a very nice story of encouragmnet. You did a great job writing on this and i like your plot for this peice of work. everyone doing the nano needs encouragment or someone behind them helping them through the way. Keep up the good work and write on.
you did a very good job on this. Also did you mean to leave it like that? wRite
Other then that no grammer mistakes. And you did a great job with wording format and spacing. Your sapcing mainly made it look very nice and buitiful. Have a great day
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the poem could be taken about art or life. Life to me in so many ways. This peice makes me think of another poem which i wrote a while back. Lost it in my notebook though. :pp you did a great job writing this and your format was veyr nice. Has a nice day and keep up the good work.
im guessing Karama is a friend or someone you knew. or a fictional character. You did a great job with this peice. Again i found not one mistake or no grammer mistakes. Your wording was buitiful and like usual it was fun to read. Veryfun to read.
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if one of my loved ones had died this would of comforted me. gladly though noone of my loved ones have died. Which pleases me very much. So you did a great job with this peice and its grammer. You also did a great job with wording format and spacing.
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this is a fantastic peice. I love to sit at my window and watch the snow cover the ground also. Your wording and grammer were prefect. Same with your writing skills and spacing. The way you had several letters capitilized made it fun and easier to read.
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surprisingly your short poem i liked better then your larger ones. You did a great job writing and wording this one. I found no mistakes and you format was buitiful. You did a great job with your spacing which made it fun to read. Also all your punctuations made it nicer to read also.
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veyr nice peice of work. Iture is jacked up. I love your format like always how you had jack on one side then what you meant by it on the other side. Your wording gave it a nice flow and your spacing made it great to look at. You overall did a great job on this and i loved it. Keep up the good work.
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this is preatty cool. I like what you did with this peice. the form and spacing you used madeit very nice to read and look at. You did a great job with this peice. So i like how you have the Tagged for leadership along the side then the meanings in front of it.
Keep up the good work.
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ok so the way you worded the first sentence seemed a little weird. All your other wording was fine. I like the plot and dedication behind this. I like how this was written for your friends funeral. You did a great and touching job on this. I liked how it all flowed together.
Keep up the good work and write on.
Very nice poem DogPack. You did a great job on this. Your wording was a little weird in certain places but it was great in other places. Your forms were great along with your spacing. Some of your poem rhymns i see. It makes it much funner to read. You did a great job with this peice. Keep up the good work.
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Hello my name is Iveltac and today ive picked your peice of work Harsh reality and Beautiful life.
I hope this review is helpful.
Ok so first thing first you had problems in your title. You forgot to capitilze several words like reality and life.
But if you fixed that the title would be perfect. Also your story was very nice. It was kinda touchy and stuff like that but overall i liked it. Your spacing and forms were preatty good and you did a great job with wording. For the most part. But your spacing is what made this very nice to read. Well part of it. Of course you wrote it. lol
But your spacing helped make it funner to read. your subject was a touchy one that lots of people argue about now adays. But life is painful and its good. It all depends on what roads you take and what you beleive in. Or thats what i beleive. But yes overall you did a great grammer job. I found no grammer problems which made it much more easier to read.
Keep up the good work and have a nice day
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Hello my name is Iveltac and i've chosen your peice of work
(Her Bums in Front) to review today. I hope this review is helful.
So the title was very weird and made me thing of some preatty wacky stuff. but talk about an intresting title this burns them all in dust. So i was kinda confused at what was going on in the story. Like what was he talking about.
You wording really helped make it confusing. The way you worded it was just conusing. This was hard to read and very ruserating to read also. Which you might think the same about this review.
But your form and spacing was very nice which made your peice of work very preaty. also what made the last paragraph so preatty was probialy the spacing you used and all the punctuations and stuff like that.
But if you take all the mistakes away you did a very good job writing this peice.
Also your grammer was almost perfect. i didnt find any grammer mistakes which helps to make the story easier to read.
Keep up the good work and continue to write
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Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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Hello my name is Iveltac and i've chosen your piece of work Splash to review toady. Hope this review is helpful and helps you fix your mistakes in your writing. Note if there are any.
Lol i loved this. Splishing Splashing all day long. Ok so this may not be a very large piece of poetry but im going to try and make atleast a 1000 character review on it.
Ok so your wording was magnificent. It sounded great when read to ones self. Your forms were also great and you did a good job on them.
You spacing was fantastic which made this piece much more enjoyable to read. How you did the
Splishing
splashing
waiting
warning
That was brillantly done. also your ending how yo uspaced those words. That was awsome. You spaced them out perfectly making them sound the best they could.
So overall i fuond no grammer mistakes or writing mistakes. not a mistake in sight. But you did a great job and i hope you write many many more poetry and make them funny like this one. :p.
Keep up the good work
And
write on
Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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Hello my name is Iveltac and i've picked your piece of work Starved to review.
Oh my this is a very emotional piece. You did a good job writing this. It has a nice flow and your wording is marvelous. Also im guessing you made it rhyme on purpose. I love rhymes. The rhyming made this piece of work much better and funner to read. I saw one problem though. It was the fact that you had the beginning letter capitilzed for each start of a line. That made it odd and confusing to read. But it did make it preatty. :p but love is a thing which some long for love is a thing the human race cant live without. That's why Jesus came.
Ok so you had perfect grammer and i found almost no mistakes of course other then the ones noted above. This was a very touchy peice. It made ones self think of love and those who they loved. But overall you did a great job other then the few mistakes that i told you about.
Keep up the good work and continue to write. Hope you have a great day and that the sun shines upon you
Review for Las Vegas
Hello my name is Iveltac. And today I have chosen your piece of work Las Vegas to review today. Hope this review is very helpful and will help you fix your writing.
Ok so the first problem I found with this piece of work was the fact that you like just randomly capitalized random letters at the beginning of words. It makes it hard to read.
You have a great plot here. Las Vegas. Las vegas though is full of bad stuff also. Drugs druggys and slot machines.
But your flow wasn’t very good in this story. But your wording was very nice and went well with the plot. And I’m guessing this is based off something you experienced.
And my favorite part was
We was spending money
Lol so true in Las Vegas.
But also your grammer was bad. You should try and fix it. Also try getting somone to proof read your work.
Keep up the good work and write on
Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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Review for Yellow umbrella
Hello my name is Iveltac. Today I’ve chosen your piece of work Yellow umbrella to review.
Ok so when I read the title I was shocked. You forgot to capitalize the U in the title Yellow umbrella.
But your wording spacing and forms were great. Your plot about an umbrella was also good. So many people use Umbrellas now days. Umbrellas are handy to keep all that bad wheather off your chest. Which in the long term is a great thing. So yeah I loved your story and I think you did a fantastic job on it. Keep up the good work and write on
Jester of Baratheon
Iveltac
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you did a great job on this. Your format was great and wording was buitiful. Your spacing went great with this even if there wasnt much spacing.