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I love to do reviews! I can get lost for hours reading all the amazing work from everyone here! I am honest when I review, I love to offer advice or suggestions, sometimes another set of eyes can be a big help!! I know that I always appreciate another opinion or help so I just want to offer the same to others!!~
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Spotting ways to change up just a couple of words and make the flow even better. As well as noticing ways of making the writing stand out even more with adding text color or placement.
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Review of To Go Around  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello! Having 3 kids, I can relate to this...and as you said, it is adults as well. It is like morals and values have gone out the window nowadays!

You wrote this well giving a meaningful and powerful message within your words. I only suggest to center it, add color and change font style to really make it POP!

Great job writing about a serious subject!


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Review of My Wife's Escape  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I happened to come across your story and just finished reading it and I wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

This was a humorous and very attention grasping story...I totally love how the ending was...at first the reader thinking that s divorce was coming..but NOPE....Herrrrreeeessss Sally!!! Ha Ha loved it! Well written and very entertaining!

Great Job!!!


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Review of We Both Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello again! Decided to read another of your poems since I liked the first one so much.

This is a beautiful story of a very intimate relationship and bond between two people whose hearts form as one. You used words that made the reader feel and understand them and what message you were getting across through your words.

My only suggestion once again is cosmic...font style, text color and center it.

Good Job!~


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello I cam across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice.

Love is such a powerful and meaningful thing and there never seems to be enough words in the world to describe it. BUT...you did a great job of it here. You use expressive words and tell a love story between to people who are not just lovers, but best friends as well.

Well written..my only suggestion would be to center it, play with font styles and add a nice color to it to make it eye drawing attention getting!

Nice Job!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

This was a perfect way to describe a rainy drive home or to a destination. There are the slow overly cautious people...the ones who just don't care and then the ones who are cautious and alert...prepared for what could happen.....

This was well written with a even flow to your words.....my only suggestion is that maybe you try to center it, add text color and change font style....it will really pull it together!

Great Job~


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Review of Randoms by Rach  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh how I wish I had an Ipod to do this too!! LOL


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Review of Silence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I wanted to come stop by your port and check out your work and I came across this and...WOW....This is amazing and it gave me goosebumps as I fell deeper and deeper into your words...expressive and attention grabbing words and amazing story being told that grips the heart!!

My ONLY suggestion is to center it, play around with font style and add some text color! It will 100% make this perfect!

Great Job

Gift from a wonderful friend!


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Review of If I Could Choose  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I have just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I think that was a very neat and intriguing way to use the five senses. I found it a enjoyable read, finding myself smiling as I read along. Thinking about my own family and memories of the past. This was well written and the words flow nicely.

I only suggest cosmic improvements such as font style, text color and perhaps center it to make it really come together and more eye catching!

Great Job!

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Review of Whispering Tears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading this and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

This is a beautiful poem about the love between two people and the lasting effects it has. Love is a amazing,powerful and scary thing yet we all want it more then anything! Sometimes, after that love is gone, we still hold on to memories and feelings, locked away in our hearts.

This is well written, flows smoothly and keeps the readers attention throughout the entire poem!

Great Job

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Review of I love you  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1300305 by Maryann Author IconMail Icon
review raid. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

You write well about the power of love. The reader can feel that when you write, it is from the heart and meaningful. This is beautiful, the feelings of love right before you wed are so very powerful and strong. It is a bond that is taken care of, cannot be broken.

Well written! I only suggest cosmic improvements such as playing around with font styles, text colors and maybe center it to make it really pull together and more eye catching!

Great Job!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I have just finished reading this and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

This was a very sweet poem all about love and the wonders and amazement of what it does to us! It truly is a gift, one that should be cherished and treasured. But also something that you have to work at to keep it strong!

Well written and easy to see why it won first place!!

Great Job!

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Review of A Ghostly Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1300305 by Maryann Author IconMail Icon
and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I have just finished reading it and I wanted to leave you some positive feedback.

I LOVED this poem! I got lost in your expressive and detailed words as they smoothly flowed. It kept my attention throughout the entire piece and it was just great! I love that the house came with the ghost children and that everyone lived all together as one. I believe in the paranormal and this was just a very well written poem about the topic!

My ONLY suggestion would be to maybe play around with font styles and text color just to make it even more eye catching!

Wonderful Job!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1300305 by Maryann Author IconMail Icon
and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just read this and wanted to leave you some positive feedback.

This 100% touched my heart deeply, I am an animal lover and this was moving. What a beautiful dog, and I am sure was an amazing best friend and furbaby to you. I am so sorry for your loss. This was just a few short lines and it was powerful and moving. Well written and a beautiful tribute to your furbaby~!

Great Job!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I loved this poem and the story it told! I got lost in your words as you described this amazing day you planned, then it falling apart and what you did from your heart to bring it together was inspiring. Your family showing up and everyone just jumped right in to keep feeding your new found friends. This is a beautiful show of a true pure heart and I think it is awesome that this happened the way that it did.

Very well written with a easy flow to your words. You keep the readers attention well throughout the entire poem with your expressive and detailed words.

My only suggestion is cosmic improvements like adding font style and some text color!

Great Job my friend!

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Review of In The Heart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I have finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

This is a very well written, from the heart poem. Our hearts are full of emotions and feelings that go deep within. We try to listen to and follow our heart in life. Sometimes it is painful and sometimes it is amazing, either way, it is a lesson and we carry these lessons in our hearts forever.

Very sweet poem. I suggest centering this poem and trying out a larger, bolder font style to make it really stand out!

Great Job!~

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid and your item was on the list of items to be reviewed. I have finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

This made me instantly wish for spring badly! The reader can get lost in your expressive detailed words and smell the roses. It is well written and sparks feelings in the reader, spring, flowers, the scent of roses in the air..ahh winter will be over soon!!

Great Job!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your item was on the list of items to be reviewed! I have just finished reading it and wanted to leave some positive feedback and friendly advice!

This is a well written poem about such a powerful topic, friendship. Friendship is something that should be valued, cherished and treasured. A true friendship will last a lifetime if you treat it right. You wrote this with expressive emotions and a flow of feelings that the reader can easily relate to.

My only suggestion is a cosmic one, maybe try some font style, text color an perhaps center it to make it more eye catching!

Great Job!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I love it when I come across your writings! I always get lost in your words and find myself laughing at the humor that you write so well. Your stories are intriguing and pull the reader in, feeling comfortable, as if they know you. You make it feel like that, as I read I feel like I am reading a letter from an old friend! A funny one at that! I may have to raid your port for another funny read!

Another amazing story written with ease to your words, humor and attention keeping details!

Great Job!

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Review of Easy Goes It Does  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

This was a very enjoyable read, a story about how working hard towards your goals. Setting structure and routine in life will eventually lead you to your goal. Keeping on the right path and your focus on getting where you want and need to be in life. Well written, nice flow to the words.

My only suggestion would be to play around with the font styles, text colors and perhaps center it. It will really pull it together even more!

Nice Job!

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Review of I Still Love You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello! What a beautiful poem you have written about the love between a husband and wife. You are expressive in your words and details, it easily pulls the reader in. Anyone reading this cannot help but to feel the love and pureness of it. A perfect love!

Beautiful and well written, telling a wonderful story about the amazing power of love!
Thank you for sharing this!

Nice Job!~

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Review of Hello  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1300305 by Maryann Author IconMail Icon
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I read this and it brought tears to MY eyes. I love the power of what this one sentence means and says. It is hard when someone we love gets older and starts to forget who people are, like their own family. It is something of course out of their control, but that doesn't make it any easier on us. However,it happens and we do exactly as you said, we wipe our eyes and introduce ourselves to them again.

Nice job~

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Review of Death Bed  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I came across your poem and have finished reading it. I wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

This was a deeply emotional poem that the reader can easily feel through your words. The loss of a loved one is heart breaking. I lost my Dad 2 months ago and I am lost, I could relate to this poem. It read well with a nice flow to your expressive and detailed words.

I only have a few minor suggestions. Trying out different font styles, text colors and centering it will really pull it together amazingly well. Also, if possible, adding a cover photo will really draw the readers attention more!

Great Job!

Write On!~

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I came across your poem and just finished reading it. I wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I found this to be well written and humorous, lighthearted in nature. Talking about the mundane life of same people that you have to deal with every day, that are not always people you WANT to spend your time with! LoL I think that you did a great job expressing the true feelings of having to interact with co-workers. It flows well and holds the readers attention well throughout the entire poem.

My only suggestion would be to play around with font styles, text color and centering it. That will make it really eye catching! As well, if possible, adding a cover photo will really draw the reader in!

Great Job!

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Review of Late AGAIN!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I just came across this item and have finished reading it. I wanted to leave you some positive feedback!`

This had a humorous and lighthearted tone to it as I read along. I know some people who we have always said would be late to their own funeral so this was something I could smile about as I read it. This makes you think...take the time to slow down..smell the roses...and stop at the yellow lights!

Well done!

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Review of My everything  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I really enjoyed reading this poem, I can relate very well. I have 3 kids myself and my oldest daughter has recently moved out and started college and gotten engaged...this made me tear up reading it. I feel the same way about her (all of them really) but this poem made me think of specifically my oldest and the bond that we have! I cherish it as well.

You wrote this with true and deep emotions, allowing the reader to relate and feel what you are expressing! You grip the readers attention and hold it throughout the entire piece. This invokes loving and emotional feelings and I thank you for sharing it!

Well written and a great flow to your words.

My only suggestion is to play around with font style, perhaps center it and add some text colors. It really just pulls it together even more!

Nice Job!

Write on! I look forward to reading more of your work!!~

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