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I love to do reviews! I can get lost for hours reading all the amazing work from everyone here! I am honest when I review, I love to offer advice or suggestions, sometimes another set of eyes can be a big help!! I know that I always appreciate another opinion or help so I just want to offer the same to others!!~
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Spotting ways to change up just a couple of words and make the flow even better. As well as noticing ways of making the writing stand out even more with adding text color or placement.
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Review of Hues of love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I just read your poem and really enjoyed it. I like the many different comparisons of love that you expressed. It was well written and had an even flow to it.

To make it more eye catching I suggest playing around with font style, text color, and perhaps centering it. It will really add a lot of improvement to your poem!!

Great job!!~

Write On!!~

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Review of Birth Cry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just had the pleasure of coming across your poem and reading it! I wanted to leave you some positive feedback!!

You deserve it! I loved this so much! I am sure that readers can take this in a few different ways depending on them, with me, it made me instantly remember when my firstborn was placed in my arms the very first time. And then it made me reflect on when I had my other 2 kids...

This poem truly invoked emotions inside me and doing that is what a writer really wants! This was well written and flowed smoothly.

My only suggestion would be perhaps to play around with the font style, text color and maybe center it. It would 100% bring this together and just make it perfect in my eyes!

Great Job!~

Write On!!

Gladly gave you a deserving 5 Stars!!

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Review by Jen~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I just had the pleasure of reading your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!!

I loved this! It has such depth, character and emotion within it! You pull the reader in not only by the way the poem is written but by the way in which you intertwine words together to express things!

Awesome job!!

Write On!!

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Review of Raptures Loss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The reader can feel the emotions that you are expressing here. We have all at some point had to deal with the loss of a love of one kind or another and it is a very emotional and difficult time. Yet that is what makes us stronger! Those lessons in life!

Well written and flows nicely.

My suggestion would be to play around with font style, text color and centering it. It really will pull together the poem even more!!

Write On!~

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just had the pleasure of reading your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!!

This was such a well written, very enjoyable read. I loved it! You expressed everything from the elements to retail sales and it flowed perfectly because you had just the right amount of balance through out the entire poem.

My only suggestion is to perhaps play around with the font style, text color, and maybe centering and see what you can come up with. Honestly just making those simple little tweaks can really just pull it all together even more!

Great Job!

Write On!~

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello! I just had the pleasure of reading your poem and wanted to leave you some feedback!!

I loved reading this, the way the poem flows and how it is written makes it even more intriguing. The comparison of the fall/winter against lost love is awesome!

My only suggestion would be maybe play around with the font style, text color and maybe center it. It would really pull it all together even better!

Great Job!!

Write On!~

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I just got done reading your poem and would like to leave you some feedback!!

Very cute little Halloween poem, expressing all of the fun and joy that Halloween brings!

I suggest playing around with the font style, text color, spacing and placement. Changing those simple things makes it grab the readers attention before they even begin reading!

Best of luck!

Write On!!

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Review of My Hopes for You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As the mother of 3 I felt that this was very much something that I can relate to feeling! I have just gotten my oldest graduated with a scholarship and out on her own and these are some of the very things that I have sat and wished for her myself! Thank you for sharing this!

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Review of Our Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very well written and romantic poem. Expresses deep emotions and feelings of how amazing love can be with that perfect someone! A true look into the depth of love and where it flows.

Easy read, flows smoothly and really is just an overall great read!

Write On!~


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Review of Dark side!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A deep and dark peek into the mind of darkness itself. This was an easy real, flowed smoothly line by line.

I suggest playing around with font style, text color, spacing, placement and text color change. You will be surprised at how much it just really pulls the poem together~

Good Job

Write On!~


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Review of The Key  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed reading this. It shows and expresses a lot of different emotions, joy, happiness, love and hope! It was well written with a great and smooth flow.

My only suggestions would be to play around with some spacing, centering, font style change and text color to pull it all together!

Great Job!~

Write On!~


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Review of Faceless  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Interesting story that shows that some people feel as though they go through many things in life faceless, nameless and no morals. Not seeing her face, nobody, not even him was an awesome ending to it. It truly grasp the thoughts of remaining faceless.

Well written, flows well...

Great Job!~


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Review of Shift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed reading this, it was extremely intriguing and really pulled the reader in. It had an ease with each word as it flowed line by line and verse by verse. The expressions and emotions in this poem are easily felt by the reader!

Great Job!~

Write On!!~


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Review of How To Meditate  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this and really enjoyed reading it. It was something that actually I needed to read. I have been thinking about trying meditation out to see if it will help my anxiety and stress. So thank you for posting this!!

Well written, easy read with smoothly flowing words.

Write On!!~


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Review of Delivery Failure  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!! I was so into this story and so surprised by the twist of the ending!! I went and read it again and after knowing the ending, it read with even more power! It is a emotion filled and heart touching story. I loved it!

You grabbed the reader at the start, held them in and then shocked them with a ending they didn't expect. Great job!!

Write On!!~


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Review of Penitence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a well written and intriguing poem. It really grabs the reader and pulls them in, reading word for word and verse for verse, hanging onto each word! The emotions are expressed well, it flows smoothly. Only suggestion would be maybe some font style change and some color!

Good Job!~

Write On!!~


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Review of Construction  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
We all have things in life that at the time we almost freak out over! Struggles are thrown at us at the most awful times and yet when we overcome them and look back we can see that the very thing that we thought would kill us actually made us so much stronger!

Well written, flows smoothly, awesome message and meaning!


Write On!


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Review of Hannah  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very cute view into the mind of a child's feelings when a new sibling is coming into the family! I am sure that my own 3 felt these same feelings lol

I suggest that you play around with some font styles, text colors and center it maybe to pull it all together!

Great Job!

Write On!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Being able to write is such a release of so many things, stress, feelings, emotions...We as authors write so that we can engage the readers in our writings. Sometimes it is beyond hard to write and other times it comes so fast you can't type quick enough to keep up!

This was a great poem. I do suggest making the font size a little larger and maybe adding some color~

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Rated: E | (4.0)
A powerful meaning and message is written in this poem! We all ponder life and death, it is natural to do. You capture the emotions well in just a matter of a few lines!

I suggest adding some font style change, text color and maybe center it to pull it all together really well!

Good Job!

Write On!~


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very powerful poem and in just a few lines you manage to pull the reader in and they feel your pain. This was wrote with emotions of grief and pain and as the reader reads along, they sense it as well. Losing someone you love is heart wrenching, so sorry for your loss.

Wonderful poem...

Write On!~


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Review of Prayermantis  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Such a cute and sweet poem! I love the saying and what it was supposed to mean! You did a great job at making this a fun a lighthearted poem. Well written, smoothly flowing words. My only suggestion is to play around with some font styles, text colors and maybe center it...you will be surprised at how much it really just pulls the whole thing together even better!!

Great Job!~

Write on!~


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Review of friEnd  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I think that at some point in everyone's lives we all have to experience this time. It is painful and it is something that will always live in our memories forever. We worry about what was, scared of what is, and horrified of what is to come.

Well written, in just a few lines you made the reader reflect on their own lives. Good Job!

Write On!~


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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This was stock full of raw emotion. And you were able to draw the reader in instantly and make them FEEL it as well. You wrote of the regrets that people have in life when they realize there is no other chance. It was well written with a lot of meaning.

My only suggestion is to play around with the font style, text color, spacing and placement. You will be amazed at how much it pulls the poem together!

Great Job!~

Write On!~


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