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I love to do reviews! I can get lost for hours reading all the amazing work from everyone here! I am honest when I review, I love to offer advice or suggestions, sometimes another set of eyes can be a big help!! I know that I always appreciate another opinion or help so I just want to offer the same to others!!~
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Spotting ways to change up just a couple of words and make the flow even better. As well as noticing ways of making the writing stand out even more with adding text color or placement.
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Dark
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Sci-Fi
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Poems
Least Favorite Item Types
None really
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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!! This was truly beautiful and heart touching, brought tears to my eyes. I am so sorry for your loss...I cannot imagine the pain that you must feel. Your grief is felt in your words, flowing evenly and smooth, verse by verse the reader is pulled deeper and deeper into your sorrow.

Your sister would be proud of this amazing poem you wrote!

Good Job!~
Write On~


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Review of Sweet Dreams  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem hit very close to home and brought tears to my eyes...I felt the deep emotions of grief and pain...losing someone close to takes a piece of your heart to.

You wrote about someone you loved and it showed through your words...the verses blended smoothly and the reader cannot help but feel your pain.

Great poem!

Write on!


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Review of I Know A Girl  
Review by Jen~
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was intriguing and pulls the reader in at the very first verse. Nobody knows the demons we battle within ourselves, fighting with a image of the person you used to be.

You wrote this with a smooth flow of words, verses that blended together and emotions from the heart.

Great Job!

Write On!


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Review of Cocaine  
Review by Jen~
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Numbing the pain of life with whatever drug is your choice...never fixes the problem just hides it in the corner of your mind for awhile where it sits and festers and grows...when the high is gone and reality sets in..that is when the cycle of pain begins again.

A well written poem to show the view of the addict...desiring their fix.

Write On!~


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Review of Insomnia  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can 100% relate to this right now...I have been awake for over 36 hours as of now...normally I curse insomnia however this time I am okay with it...I have spent hour after hour scouring through everyone's writings...reading, learning and becoming so inspired by such great work that I have reviewed over 100 writings...Insomnia will not beat me...it will inspire me to strive for more!

Very well written and easy to read...a perfect peek into the mind of those that can't sleep!

Write On!~


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Review by Jen~
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Such an amazing and insightful view into the mind of an addict. The way they think, feel and act depends upon which demon is in control at that time. Fighting a battle that spins and spins...around and around..a vicious circle that they get caught up in and there is no way out in their eyes.

Very well written and emotional poem!
Great Job!
Write On!~


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Review of Scream  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a poem grown in darkness, the darkness of our minds. As someone who suffers from mental health problems, I can relate very much to this....The demons are a daily battle that has yet to be won...

This was my favorite part:

Death’s joy is killing you
And sending you to the demons

It is like being damned to the hell of our minds where the demons play.

Great job!

Write On!~


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Review of Against Cheating  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (5.0)
So many forms of cheating and none of them are okay...No matter what it is that you have been cheated on, the feeling are the same...feelings of betrayal, anger and shame....

It takes talent to write poems the way you do...without many lines you still manage to capture the reader and draw them in...I find myself drawn to your writing style...it comes off as kind of blunt..which I think is exactly as it should be told! I am a blunt person and I tell it like it is...you do the same with your poems yet in a way that makes the reader open their mind and think.

Job well done...again!


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Review of Goodbye  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very emotional and heartfelt expression of the pain and grief that he is overwhelmed with is felt through your powerful words. It's sad because this happens each and every day..people giving up on life and tossing it away...because they feel they have no other way out, no help, nowhere to turn.

Well written and very emotional!

Write on!


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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (3.5)
The reader instantly feels the fear and panicky emotions that are flooding her mind. To think that you are trapped...like a caged animal...has to be terrifying. This was well written and your verses flowed and connected.

I did notice one thing, perhaps a typo:

Its like we a linked together

(It's like we (are) linked together

Just a suggestion....Good job!


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Review of The Eulogy  
Review by Jen~
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This oozes of darkness and fear...the reader can feel his heart race as panic sets in. Thinking about the end of ourselves is a never ending story, telling it over and over with a different ending each time...not knowing what truly will be but expecting the worse. This was a well written poem. I only noticed one thing that is maybe a typo:

The dead don’t feel cold

The dead (doesn't)feel (the) cold

Just a suggestion...great job! Write On!


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Review of Whispers  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my gosh...this had me in tears..I lost my grandfather when I was 10 years old and I have NEVER gotten over it or gotten closure...He was my best friend, thought I had hung the moon! This poem ripped me back in time, made me feel every emotion that is expressed within your words and I loved it! Thank you for letting me take a trip down memory lane with you!

Write On!~


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Review of Final Gift  
Review by Jen~
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I love how innocent and pure the gift the boy offers truly is...there are many losses in life..some take a piece of us with them. Trying to get through the grief and heartache is a job in itself...trying to remain strong is harder then you think and hanging on to hope and faith eases your soul through the grieving process. Well written!!


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Review of As My Love Dies  
Review by Jen~
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The heartache and pain that you express is very much felt as you read this. A sense of panic comes over in a time like this, the what if's and what will be will eat at your mind..till your soul realizes that while he may be gone from this earth he is with you everyday..he lives on in your memories. I am so sorry for your loss. Well written poem~


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Review of Last Hurt  
Review by Jen~
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh my gosh...this brought me to tears and my heart aches for you...from one mother to another, I cannot imagine your pain and I am so very sorry for what has been done to you. A mother should never have to feel the way you are, should never have her flesh and blood taken from her for no reason. I totally understand if the mother did something to harm the child then yes, but in your case...no way in hell should this be okay on any level! Your poem was so intense with emotions that you can't help but to feel them as you read. I pray that things turn around for you and your babies. Amazing poem!


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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (3.5)
You for sure make the reader FEEL the darkness and fear, almost speeds up the heart as you read it...perhaps sensing the fear? The detailed way you wrote made it so easy for the reader to slip into the words and get lost. Everyone has had a experience of some type of fear in life so it is easy to be able to relate. Great job!


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Review of Mistaken  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love reading your writings...I get lost in the words and the power they hold. We are our own worst enemy, our demons that we face, we sometimes can't help the way that it is...all that we can really do is pray for help within, to fight our battles and be accepted for who we are. You have a way of flowing words that lures the reader in, hanging onto every word, always wanting more! Great job!

Write On!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Captivating and pulls the reader in instantly! Inside the mind of what they must think, knowing they are about to die, for crimes that put them there. The reader can feel the fear and panicky feelings, scared of the unknown,yet rightfully where they belong. Great job! Write On!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.5)
We often get caught up in the day to day chaos of life and forget to stop and smell the flowers! Life is not promised for tomorrow, we are NOT getting any younger,do what you want while you can because as you said..."No one is young forever!"

I enjoyed reading this, it does make you stop and think, live life in the now, before it passes us by!!
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Review of Sometimes  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.0)
I can really relate to this poem. I have learned over the years that sometimes the friend we think is forever was gone yesterday, the friend we thought never, is there till the end. What happens is all that we allow, and often we allow people in our lives that are not there to better life, but to better themselves. Well written and well expressed! Write On!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! This was amazing and had me hooked instantly! I cannot imagine losing a friend like you did, the pain it caused you is felt through your words. How sad that she dreamed of bigger and better things, dreams that faded away when she never looked back. You did an excellent job of telling this tragedy. Write On!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! What a powerful story!

There is, I believe, a time in everyone's life that they question WHY things happen. We falter and stumble along the way as we all embark on this journey called life. The pain that the mother felt when her son was killed was a pain that has no end. Seeking for help by staying strong in her faith is what helped her through.

We all sit and ponder of what will happen once our time comes...hope and dream of seeing the ones we lost along the way...being greeted at the pearly gates, rejoicing with each other,finally feeling free. A place that has no limits and where all our memories live...somewhere that we know is home and happiness sets in.

Your story showed great emotion through the power of your words. Great Job!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.0)
There seems to always be a thought train running over and over throughout our minds. When we try to silence things to listen, it is the thoughts that lead our way. We open our minds, clear our heads, yet never a time does the thought train stop. Sometimes "just listening" is hearing what our own minds have to say. I think that this poem is able to be taken in a few different ways, and how the reader perceives things,is what they will hear. Good job! You for sure get the thoughts flowing with this one!
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Review of My Child  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was very touching and the reader can feel that it was written from the heart. Such sadness and pain the mother has, the reader's heart breaks along with hers. The style in which you wrote this made it flow well, verse for verse. Really a great job~! Write On!!~
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Review of irritation  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.0)
This made me smile, not because it was humorous but because I can totally relate! And I am rather blunt so sometimes the words actually slip through my lips Ha Ha... Sadly there are people in life that drive us crazy and we have to chose to either tolerate them or truly make them "go away" Good Job~
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