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I love to do reviews! I can get lost for hours reading all the amazing work from everyone here! I am honest when I review, I love to offer advice or suggestions, sometimes another set of eyes can be a big help!! I know that I always appreciate another opinion or help so I just want to offer the same to others!!~
I'm good at...
Spotting ways to change up just a couple of words and make the flow even better. As well as noticing ways of making the writing stand out even more with adding text color or placement.
Favorite Genres
Dark
Least Favorite Genres
Sci-Fi
Favorite Item Types
Poems
Least Favorite Item Types
None really
I will not review...
Sci-Fi
Public Reviews
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Review by Jen~
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This was such a deeply written and emotional reading poem. Your use of words and how you fit them together is like that of a puzzle master. I loved the way it flowed and how it read. The ending was perfect and over all it was well written and portrayed! Great job!
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Review of Faces Plenty  
Review by Jen~
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Your usage of words is amazing and the way that you described details and your view of people is very interesting. I like the way that you while you kept the poem flowing you were able to touch upon many different feelings and thoughts!

I did notice one thing and am not sure if you intended it to read as follows or not:
Upon the cock
Of the world

Is this supposed to be "Clock"??

Well written, easy to read and a good job!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I was very moved when I read your story. I do not know if it comes from personal experience or simply amazing skills but either way you draw the reader in from the very beginning! What you wrote about is sadly something that happens all of the time and your way of showing the impact from this point of view was exceptional! Great job and Write on!!!!
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Review of The Note  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.5)
I loved the way in which you wrote this and the amazing way you showed such strong emotions through the power of your words. You captured so many feelings and thoughts and the reader is able to sense and feel them as well. Life is a learning experience and we must deal with sorrow and pain. Well written and write on!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (3.5)
Life is all about taking chances and honestly every time someone is about to take a chance, there is a fear there. Wondering the what if's and all it could be, wondering if taking the chance is right or wrong. You wrote this showing the battle within us as we have choices and chances. Well written. Write On!
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Review of Dog Pack Attack!  
Review by Jen~
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I thought that this was well written and it made me laugh! I love how at first the reader thinks that this is about to be a gruesome scene and then things turn light and humorous! You were able to keep the reader involved, wanting to know what happens next, hanging on to every word! Great job! Write On!
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Review of Disconnection  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow this had me hanging onto every word on the edge of my seat! Then the ending is a twisted yet very true story. As said as it is, it does happen. Sometimes people cannot seem to come to terms with losing a loved one so they simply shut down. Awesome work, flows evenly and reads well. Write on!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really needed to read this right now in my life. I love each and every way that you show where God can be and what He can be. Sometimes in life we get caught up in the every day hustle and bustle and expect and wait to see BIG signs from God...yet if we just slowed down we would realize that what we want and need is literally right in front of our faces...in many forms. Great Job! Write on!
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Review of Take Life  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! I do not even know where to start! This made me have goose bumps, it made me tear up, it made me FEEL what you wrote. From darkness to despair and back again yet happiness at a new life to be....I myself suffer from mental health issues and honestly it made me feel a strong connection and a solid understanding of what the poem is saying. You wrote this with emotion and you make the reader feel it to. Amazing poem, flows so well and just simply a great job!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Reading this gave me goose bumps! Your usage of words and details 100% grips the reader and pulls them in. You truly had me reading it and hanging onto every word AND left me wanting more! Which as a writer is such an amazing thing to accomplish...keep them wanting more! You did it for sure~ Amazing writing, flows evenly and easily and is just plain and simple really good! Great job! Write on!
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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.5)
The story line here is very touching and shows that sometimes in the midst of pain comes something anew. The dying wish for brothers to become strangers no more was tearful and sincere. You have wrote a great poem that tells an amazing story. Great job and as always...Write on!
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Review of The Lovers' Dance  
Review by Jen~
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Loved the way that you wrote this and how it easily flowed. The reader can see within your words is a lesson that is so true! I loved your last lines:

For all that live will someday die,
But new Life comes from Death.

Very powerful finishing line!! Great flow and great write!
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Review of Love  
Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (2.0)
Interesting writing, I enjoyed the many different ways that you defined love because they were so very true. Your right the list is endless on the ways you can define the meaning of love and that it comes in many forms. The only thing that I didn't understand was the mentioning of a goblet. Other than that it was a good writing.
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Review by Jen~
Rated: E | (4.5)
The detail was amazing and honestly makes the reader feel as though they can see, feel and hear everything as they read. I loved the humor and how you ended the story! Following footsteps in life is how we grow and learn and the experience we take from these lessons is forever in our hearts! Great writing!
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