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Review of Baseball Facts  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was fun. Baseball is so fun. I remember playing baseball in Jr high and learning how to hit the ball. The thrill and excitement of the bat cracking at the ball with my eyes closed when it hit because I was so scared. Then running as fast as I could.

this was a nice game. I enjoyed it.
Thank YOu!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I did not do well.... Maybe it is from lack of sleep.maybe it is because I never read Shakespear. You asked challenging questions. The questions were welll worded and I did not see any punctuation errors. Good general questions.

Great Poll. I will check out your port!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hmm It was a total wild guess on my part.
I did not have any idea. what a crazy life that sponge bob leads.I must admit I have never watched him on the televison. This is the stuff that creates imagination. At least he seems to be better than the Simpsons!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
proton32060,
I just read this, This is Good Advise. I am thinking of selling my house and you just gave me the information I need to sell it.

As far as how this is written, I see no errors. It is a little clumsy in the beginning then graceful when out of the text book lingo.

Thank You! You helped me make a decision.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good quiz, I guess I could take the bible study class at church and focus less on just singing the songs. Although I went to church daily as a kid apparently I did not retain the information. I guess it will take rereading the bible to remember what I have forgotten.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am surprised at how people answered this question. I rebelled against the racial religous upbringing I had. I was brought up in a religon that taught that only white people went to heaven. I understand that this was a rather wide Christian way of looking at the Tower of Babel. I walked away from that religon without looking back
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was actually to predictable of answer. It does not surprise me with how there has been a change since victorian times of how people use to take writing desks outside since the outdoor spaces have decreased (people's yards are smaller) and the crime rate is higher.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
35% of these people are clueless how dangerous it is meeting people in person that you have met online. Maybe I am jaded from personal experience and unable to see the goodness of most of the people in the world, but I have seen the whites of the eyes of the worst of the worst.
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Review of The Crazy Buffet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Elisa, Snowman Stik,

Well what can I say here..

This was well written and better than most of the poetry on WDC.
It is clear and understandable; however it is disgusting.
I have to say this is the most disgusting one I have read.
You have successfully found a way that reaches emotions in your writing.

But very well written!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Excellent question to see peoples views.
I personally think there will be a massive die off due to lack of food. So that is actually partially in the oil answer. We are growing food for gasoline substitutes while there is a current massive famine going on in Africa that is being kept out of the media. Probably because we are causing the food crisis with our oil policy.

But what can we do. I do not want a nuclear plant in my back yard.

You left Monsanto off your list of reasons....
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is Hillarious!

MEN ARE ALIENS! That is why they seem so foreign. The scientists of New Zealand have solved the mystery. Now that we know we can now establish teaching plans to better train men to inteact on this planet.

This needs to be expanded. This is more like a good story for like a sitcom.

You should do something with this!
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Review of shrinking info  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What an interesting question!
I understood shrinking to mean loosing weight, which I would have suspected everyone to say yes.

Of course men would be the 47% that said NO! What dirty minds they have!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I read your story and could not figure out why the mispelled beginning.
I think I missed the whole point of the story?

The title should reflect something to do with the story and I did not pick up anything to do with begging.

Is it in the next chapter?
Let me know what I missed
jello
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Joy--in snowball fight!,
You have given me a good tip, putting a notebook next to the computer to keep track of the story. I wonder if a synopsis and blurb are the same thing?
This is an excellent informative piece on how to write a synopsis for a publisher including which fonts are acceptable.
Thank you for writing such a excellent, well written informative piece.
Jello
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Rated: E | (4.5)
pit dogs are vicious
and poodles are one of the top biters
I think you meant golden retriever who are lovable
gentle non-biters.

using the wrong dog lead me to question the rest of your contet.
"Some people are pitbulls, who fight and scrape
Their bite is strong and stubborn
They end up with wealth, the rat race they escape

Some people are poodles, who want comfort, style
They fail to do the work required
They end up chasing another's bone all the while

this is so true" Hurting people won't get you anywhere fast"

It seems that you think that only pitbulls succede in life.
I think you are wrong.

I did not see anything wrong with your writing, just the reasoning.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
iva*mae,
Thank you for writing such a welcoming piece.
You have opened up more of WDC to me by giving me the insight to use the search box in a different way to search for help. I have found it difficult to get around at times and did not realize that I could search so easily using the search box with those search terms.
Thank you

This was well written and clear with good helpful information.
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Review of Character sketch  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
ProudPop,
I am doing some writing and needing information on how to develop characters and ran across this to read and review.
I read it. What it did not convey to me was a sense of who the individuals are. Their uniqueness that provides a like dynamicness? to the writing. Without providing more information it is almost like the people are inatimate objects.
I have no advice to offer you since I am lacking the same thing in what I am writing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sharmen'

I am reading Consistency is Key, your right consitency is the key to credibility.

You coached Larry bird and Michael Jordan? That is Exciting! and to by chance run across someone who has influenced such great sports figures is unexpected.

Consistency creates credibility. Consistency creates results. The great ones are consistent in all they do. More importantly they are consistent at all they do well, and that is what creates greatness.

Your words are inspirational to be consistent and reliable are very good traits of a sucsessful person.

This is well written, without error, your message is clearly understood.
Good job!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Kayna-amy,
I have just read part one of sister bond.
I read it and became deeply intrigued... it is not a dog what is it?
You wrote it really drawing me in to the story... I sure wish I knew the mechanics of how you did that.

I did notice a wrong word. seized. should be ceased... unless I am wrong.

Excellent job.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
elizjohn,

Uhh, Did you write this? This is so well written and sounds like such a perfect story that it sounds like it is done by a classic master. Obviously you did write it, but man alive, that is as good as the best classic folk tales I have heard in my life.
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pixybrat,
Well you are obviously a medical student, or should be.
This is very well written; it is at a good reading level. Although technical this is readily understandable. I learned about hypothyroid disease and thought I knew it all until I read your artilce and found all kinds of new information.

Very Good
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very informative with wide appeal!
I bet this is the most sought after article on WDC!
You did an excellent job.

If there was 1 thing you could change it might be to say how much an ISBN cost you through Lulu.

However in neck breaking speed after reading this I will find out that myself.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
HelloThere ShiShad !

I just read your Author Bio.
I was blown away by the photos and watched all of them. They were incredible and unique.
I am going to look at other things you have written to see if you have picture trail photos on there
also.
I have only 1 criticism. I have a 15 inch monitor. What you typed went over the edges of my screen and I was unable to shrink it to read the first and last words on each line.

I ejoyed your bio!
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Review of Your Today  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello
I found your poem under the sponsored items. What caught my attention was the title and subtitle.
Your Today
Living each day by seeing the small things that mean so much to

Your words are so true that I was drawn to read the rest.

When I was younger and before having life's experiences and traumas I felt like your first 2 versus:
Wish I could change the here and now
With the twinkling of an eye
By merely going back in time
To change events that have gone by.

Wishing that I might try again
But time past is now history
Want that same opportunity
But the future's a mystery


Now that I am older and wiser I can identify with the last versus:

Learn to be content with what is
Witness each day as heaven sent
Because your today is a gift
That's why they call it the present.

What you have here is a great portayl of how we view life over time.
Great Job! I like this!
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Review of Burned Bottoms  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Kenzie,

That brought back memories of my childhood anxiously awaiting the rolls in the oven my mother was cooking. She always fussed so hard to make those rolls. Now that I bake bread myself and make my own rolls, I make my own burnt bottom rolls. Thank you for the memory.

Great job writing. I found no errors.
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