Your thoughts in this poem are exceptional and well thought out. Maybe, and it's just my personal thought, a little polish on the flow could make this an A+. Very good. keep sharing and keep writing.
I enjoyed your story. It moved my readers' eye to the very end; which I thought was great. My one small suggestion would to always try to practice capitalization and good writing skills - then it will come natural. keep sharing and keep writing.
lovely verse of a painful situtation. well written. my only suggestion would be to always us proper capitalization and punctuation. It helps to move your reader along. keep sharing and keep writing., and sorry for your loss.
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