Very well written and thought process. You have rounded out your characters and I can see them as alive. Good thing for a writer. My only concern is what kind of story are you writing and where is it going? I wasn't sure if this is only a narrative or is the climax and drama is yet to come. If so, you may want to open with the drama and fill in the characters as you move through out your story. Either way, well written and thank you for sharing and keep writing!!
Well written and good usage of verbage. The word, 'festering' is somewhat confusing in the light of an antique shop, but overall a great poem. keep writing!!
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