I love that type of poetry and enjoyed yours very much. I can see the mare running with his mane in the wind, joyfully running fast. Great job of putting your thoughts across in such limitation and poetic flow. In a sense like Piccasso would say, the least artistic stucture - the best. keep sharing and keep writing.
First of all, I want to thank you for sharing and your honesty of such a riveting emotion of action that goes with such a difficult discision for so many girls and woman. Keep sharing and keep writing.
I truely ejoyed your metaphoric story. Very thought provoking. Very insightful on your part. I espeically liked, " I am part of the whole, not only of the earth but of the universe." I agree with this statement. Please keep sharing and keep writing. Excellent.
Nicely written poem, good thoughts, riveting. keep sharing and keep writing. one little advice, try to get the flow a littl more smoother. but very good otherwise. thank you for sharing.
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