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Review of Stairway  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Hello Moarzjasac I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is an important poem, written as a warning to us all over the world. The virus is frightening. I am on oxygen all the time with lung disease and heart failure, I am terribly afraid of getting the virus, luckily so far there have been no known cases of it in my county of Harlan Kentucky.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Last Flight  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello kerrimiller I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a well written and very fine piece of poetry. for I think that you have a wonderful flair for writing poetry. I recognize the form I believe, however I can't
recall the name of the form. The title of this poem is very appropriate for the piece and the item description is also very helpful to the reader.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello THANKFUL SONALI Now What? I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this begins with ten well-written stanzas which have an abcb rhyme scheme.
I truly enjoyed this item and I thought that the title was so appropriate for the poetry. This was a fine tale of the month of love, which is sometimes overdone.
I enjoyed reading your well put together and cereative piece of literature.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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for entry "The Spirit of Summer" 
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

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Hello Dave I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Round 67 March 16 , 2020
From Burma, the Ya Du . I see you have entered the Oriental Poetry contest this month, I wish you luck. I loved your entry, I think it is beautiful. You always write such nice poetry and it is always so well written. The title of the poem is awesome and also very appropriate for the item. the item description is also very helpful. I wish you all the luck in the world on winning this contest you have a vast amount of talent.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Purple Plush  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Hello Beholden I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this is a well written piece of literature and very creative and imaginative. I reallty liked it. the title is appropriate and the item description is helpful to the reader. I hope you do well in the contest for which you have entered this piece.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of The Ozzard of Wiz  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Hello ☮ The Grum Of Grums I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I adore limericks, I think that they are very quirky and cute for the most part.
You have written one for the Limerick contest, and it is about a wizard, I liked it. You have a witty sense of humor, I do so hope you place or win in your endeavor.
You have written a very creative piece of poetry and you must be pleased with your effort.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with meou keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of You is You  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello percy goodfellow ,I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I see that you have been a valuable member of our writing.com family for eleven years today, Since April 1, 2009. I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today. I chose this poem, "You is You", because it seemed like a very fun little poem, you paid no attention to grammar but that was what made it fun I suppose. you categorized this poem as nonsense, which really I suppose it was.
You also did not use any of the punctuation that we would normally expect. That is quite alright, however because we don't always use punctuation when we write poetry.
I thought that this was a clever little piece of writing, I like the fact that you seemed to be just having fun with your craft. I have done this a bit myself.
you seem to have a good sense of humor, which I do like.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*
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Review of One Raindrop  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello SandraLynn Team Florent! , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since April 13, 2014, This month you will be a member of our group for six years, we are so glad to have you with us. I chose this particular poem because the title really just spoke top me in a great big way. I thought that the title was appropriate and also very creative for the poem. You called this a joybell poem, I am no so sure that I have heard of this form before, but I surely liked it. I don't know the rules for the poem, and I also do not know what constitutes the poem. I would like to offer the helpful suggestion that you add a note following your poem, telling what a Joybell poem is and what the rules of the form are, I do think that it would be very helpful to all of the readers of this poem, I really enjoyed reading this poem, I thought that it was quite brief, however, I do not know the rules of the form so I can only guess if it is correct.
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Review of The Big Catch  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Angelica- Happy July 4th! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this poem using six stanzas of three and four lines each. I thought that this was an unusual but sweet subject on which to write a poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Going fishing and catching a Largemouth bass., You really struggled but in the end you really got the little booger.

*Moon* Flow: The flow of the poem was good and I liked how you separated all of the stanzas with lines of some type.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation in the poem was right on que, I am not really that good with punctuation but I think that it looks right to me.
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*Sun* tone: it sounded like you had a difficult but fun time reeling in the large fish.

*Strawberry* Title: I thought that the title was appropriate and also very good,.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I
can envision you on a hillside next to a pond fishing.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think that this was anb excellent poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Clarity  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello kwerky123, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure was very simple

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it was about Christ and I truly don't know what I think about it. I love God and believe that Jesus died for our sins. He is my Savior and I believe and trust in Him very much. the flow of the poem is done well. and there are no stops or pauses that are not needed.


*Exclaim* punctuation: As far as I can tell the punctuation is okay, I am not the best person to judge punctuation though. The grammar and the spelling also seem correct to me.

*Sun* tone: to me the tone is dark and sad. The title, "Clarity", is also very creative and appropriate for the writing.

*Dragonflyp* Image: The image I can envision is of The Lord Jesus Christ Nailed to a cross on the miserable and important day of His Crucifixion...
I can see Mary and His Mother Mary weeping at His feet in sadness...

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I don't know what you believe but let me witness to you that Jesus died for your sins as well as mine. It says in the bible,
"I and my Father are one..." I for one believe that. You believe what you will
but always remember that God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten son
that whosoever believeth in Him shall not perish but have everlasting life.
John 3:16 KJV

Thank you for sharing your talent with us
and may God Bless You.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using four stanzas one of which is a couplet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: t is a really good message to all of us and we all need to follow it. to shred all of our documents so that thieves and hackers cant get it and do wrong with it.

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and is a great idea for a poem,

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is good as far as I can tell.

*Sun* tone: the tone is in a warning so it is quite serious.

*Strawberry* Title: the title is appropriate for the item and I liked it.

te:dragonflyp} Image: it brings forth the image of people rifling through your garbage cans.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: a year ago I had my identity stolen and they charged several thousand dollars of stuff on various accounts in my name. The police knew who it was and because he was a police informant they let him go. I didn't have to pay for the items that were stolen, but I had so much paper work to do you would not believe it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Tick Tock  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Raven , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is created with a structure of four cinquains or four five line stanzas. this is some kind of timing for this poem with what is going on all over the world.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: a poem about locking away pain and lies.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the poem flowed well without any untimely pauses or stops.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation looks to be correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the item was smooth

*Strawberry* Title: I felt that the title is appropriate for the item.

*Dragonflyp* Image: this is really not applicable for this poem.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that you did really well.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of I am awake  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello ouphist, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using six quatrains and a single line. The words I am awake, are the repetition in the poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it is about a vampire out for sucking blood from his victims.

*Moon* Flow: the poem flowed well and there were no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: punctuation seemed to be fine.

*Sun* tone: tragic tone as we are talking about death

*Strawberry* Title: the title is appropriate for the item.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision a vampire sucking the blood from a victim.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: this was a thriller and was very dark.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser:mirtx }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is written using all quatrains, you might call it a quatrain poem.

the theme of this poemn is love occurring for those who seem forever single.
*Moon* Flow: It flowed well and had no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to m

*Strawberry* Title: The title of this item is pretty long, but it does work.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this was a well written piece of poetry, you did a fine job creating it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of A Breath Away  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello MirandaCookies IS IN COLLEGE , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Moon* Flow: this item is structured using five tercets or three line stanzas and one quatrain, which is a four line stanza. it flowed well without any pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation in this item is good as far as I can tell.


*Sun* tone: anxious

*Strawberry* Title: the title is very appropriate form the item, and creative.




*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this was a well written piece of work.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Vanishing Vapor , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This poem was structured using five sestets, or five stanzas of six lines each.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: A man feels like a fool

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well without any unnecessary stops or pauses anywhere.

*Exclaim* punctuation: it looked to me that the punctuation was done correctly.

*Sun* tone: the tone was melancholy

*Strawberry* Title: this was an excellent title for this poem, it was very appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: this really is not applicable for this poem.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a well written piece of poetry.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.5)



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Hello charrell, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using what is called two septets or two verses of seven lines each.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this item was a playful little kitty cat, which I thought was just adorable, as I love cats.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the poem flowed well without any unnecessary stops or pauses anywhere.

*Exclaim* punctuation: You chose not to use end line punctuation in this poem, which is quite alright, as it is up to the individual writer as to whether to use punctuation or not.

*Sun* tone: the tone was fun and energetic.

*Strawberry* Title: I thought that the title was adorable, it is also very appropriate..

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can just close my eyes and envision a sweet kitten playing.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I would suggest that you go back and read the poem out loud to yourself and edit it in several places. you should be able to see what I am talking about in several spots you are missing a letter or something. all in all this was a great little read.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless Yo=lu and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello MirandaCookies IS IN COLLEGE , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: structured this little poem using two septets and one tercet, this is an odd format, which I've not seen before, Is it a new form of poetry?


*Butterfly2r* Theme: recalling the moments spent with a first love,

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the poetry flowed well and that it had a nice feel to it.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was well done and seemed right to me.

*Sun* tone: I thought the poem felt a little meloncholy.

*Strawberry* Title: The title of the item was perfect, I really liked it I felt that it was very appropriate for the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: *StarfishB* Suggestions: You did a great job creating this item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of IT HAPPENED!  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you have structured this poem using eight quatrains at Written in abcb 7-6-7-6 format.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: A welcoming meeting with a writer on writing,.com, this is probably a thing that happens often to you since you share the name and position with a famous doctor on CNN named Dr. MC Gupta. I do believe he is several years younger though.

*Moon* Flow: The flow of this piece is very good and no unnecessary stops or pauses are seen.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay as well

*Sun* tone: happy, smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title is good and appropriate

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision the two of you chatting on line

*StarfishB* Suggestions: this was a good poem by a very established and talented writer.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of LIFE WITHOUT YOU  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is written using four quatrains, Written in abcb 8-8-8-8 format

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Memories of a beloved and missing spouse

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well with a subtle hint of rhyme.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to the best of my knowledge, the punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is nostalgic

*Strawberry* Title: The title is perfect for the item, It is very appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I get an image of a man sitting near a headstone, talking to his beloved in Heaven.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions, I think this was a well-written piece. I would think if the rhyme were more apparent then it would be 5 stars.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is definitely structured in a unique way using one cinquain, one sestet, and followed by a septet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: A poem written about the sport of surfing.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the poem flowed well and I love that you really used good language

*Exclaim* punctuation: To the best of my ability it looks as if you did a good job with the punctuation and vocabulary was extraordinary.

*Sun* tone: kind of a thrilling and suspenseful tone I thought.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is surprising but it works.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I caan envision someone on a surfboard at the beach.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was an exciting poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Hello Elisa: Middle Aged Stik , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This structure suited this poem very well. You used five tercets and one quatrain to end the poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: A person who only cared about others, this is a person I'd like to meet. It is a rarity.


*Moon* Flow: The flow is very good and there is no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am not the best with the punctuation, but it looks to me
like you aced it.

*Sun* tone: calm kind of tone I would say.

*Strawberry* Title: I liked the title and I thought it was appropriate for this item.


*Dragonflyp* Image: this is not really applicable for this item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I loved the concept of the subject you chose. I found this poem to be refreshing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Baby Powder  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Bikerider ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary ,
this beautiful evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. This is the second of two reviews I have written for you this evening, I find your writing to be quite poignant and sweet. I especially loved this one. which was inspired by your grandchild. I think it is quite different and unique.
The title, "Baby Powder", is so good and very appropriate for the item which you wrote. The item description is so very helpful to the reader. it is very telling.
Your granddaughter will be a very fortunate little girl to have such beautifully sweet poetry written for her, as she gets older, I do hope you share some of this work with her, it is a special gift you could give to her. it is touching. You granddaughter will be proud to receive such beautiful words just for her;.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Thumbsup*
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Review of Fruity fun  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Chris Breva ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful evening. I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had. On the twenty-first of March, you will be celebratin g your seventh account anniversary. I am sure you are looking forward to this milestone.
The title, "Fruity Fun" is very appropriate for this item. I think this is an odd subject for a poem, but it works for you/ it is a triolet poem, and I did catch a mistake in it:

Front Loops are my favorite food
I eat them by the box!

in line one above it should read fruit loops not front loops.
it is just a small little mistake which is easy for any of us to make. it is an easy fix. I like fruit loops myself they are a terrific breakfast cereal. I think this is creative and cute.

{thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of The Split  
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Hello Chris Breva ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary ,
this beautiful evening. I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had. I am writing this review for your gift for your seventh account anniversary which will take place on the twenty-first of March. You have written a wonderfully cute little limerick about an older woman who does the splits and rips her britches. this was a humorous little ditty and I really like light comedy. The split, which is the title is very appropriate for the item. This was a contest entry for the Senior Forum for November 2019. The item description was helpful for the reader. I think that you did a fantastic job creating this little item. You show great creative ability and I enjoyed reading your piece of writing.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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