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#4547067

Review of Bowl-a-Rama

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Hello JACE , I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today. I have written this two times already and keep losing it, so lets hope that you end up with this one. I just read your poem, "Bowl-a-Rama",
I thought that it was quite good. You have been a valuable member of writing.com since May 1, 2008, which is about twelve years, we are so happy that you are apart of our little writing family. I see you chose to write a Lento poem for this piece of writing. The title is appropriate for the writing and the grammar seems okay to me. The punctuation looks okay, but I am no expert on that subject for sure. This poem consists of two quatrains or stanzas with four lines each. The rhyme comes in with the second and fourth lines in both stanzas. There is a good rhythm to the poem which I thought was good, I do like a kind of flowing rhythm when I read poetry.
wh8ch I love to do. I read poetry as a hobby and I liked this poem because it reminds me of when I was a little girl and used to go bowling with my family, it was always so much fun.

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#4547062

Review of Dreams V.S. Reality

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Hello Ollie Cooper , I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morn9ing, I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today.
I read your poem and I thought that it was very creative, thoughtful, and interesting. The title, "Dreams v.s. Reality," Is very appropriate for the item,
I also think that the item description is somewhat helpful to the reader of this item. You created this item using six quatrains or stanzas with four lines each.
I thought the form was suitable and the punctuation seemed to be in place to me, however, I am not the world's best at knowing punctuation. I think that the grammar was also correct and I saw no spelling errors in your poetry. I think poetry is great the way it shines on the subject we are writing about. I think this is a good poem and you worked hard on it I believe. congrats on the nice finish.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4547041

Review of Greeting to a friend of mine

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Hello Ruler of the Werecats , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,
I do so hope that you have a very blessed day today, I think that your writing is very good, and I liked the title. I thought it was friendly and appropriate for writing. I also think that the item description is so very helpful to the reader.
friends are a very special commodity, one that, these days, is hard to find.
I think you showed a good talent for choosing subjects of interest to write about.
The poem you have written is so creative and I found a lot of interest in it.
Friendship is hard when it is long distance so learning to communicate through writing is vastly important. This freestyle poem should please any friend.
I know that I would so pleased if I thought that I was the inspiration for a nice poem that my friend wrote for me.
hank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4546945

Review of High in the Sky

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Hello Legendary❤️Mask

, I just read this piece and I liked it very much, it shows your heart is in the right place, With God and prayer. I love the Lord and everything about Him
I love reading other's work about Him as well. This piece was inspired by a beautiful photo of the sky. I hope you win a contest with this one.Good luck and God Bless you.

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#4546590

Review of Dear Writers' Block

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this is a letter, written in paragraph form.

Theme: the theme is addressed to writer's block. it is about you making mr block leave you alone.

Flow: the letter flowed well and the grammar seemed to be on par.

punctuation: The punctuation was correct as far as I could tell.

tone: the tone was comedic and light-hearted

Title: the title, "Dear Writer's block", was appropriate.

Suggestions: I found this item to be quite creative and I did not see anything wrong with your writing at all. you have a nice sense of humor.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

BOOK
My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4546572

Review of Everlasting Joy

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this piece of poetry is structured using four quatrains.

Theme: The theme of this beautiful poem is Happiness.

Flow: I thought this item flows well and the grammar was good enough and the spelling was correct.

punctuation: The punctuation is correctly used throughout the poem.

tone: the tone is upbeat and happy.

Title: The title, "Everlasting Joy", was just lovely and appropriate for this piece of poetry.

Suggestions: I wonder thought if the following repeating line should read differently:

Each day bring moments of happiness,

do you think it is "brings moments of happiness." I am not sure so you might want to check that out. if I am wrong I apologize.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4546490

Review of Holding on to God's Vision

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Hello Darius Olajide , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item was about 2 and a half paragraphs
much of the citings were from the Bible.

Theme: the theme was God's vision for you and about Joseph as well..

Flow it flowed well from the beginning and was very easy to read and I thought also very interesting.

punctuation: You seemed to use correct punctuation and the grammar was proper and also I didn't see any misspelled words.

tone: this was an educational piece about Joseph, and an insightful piece
about yourself

Title: I really liked the titel, "Holding on to God's Vision", I thought it was very appropriate and very creative.

Image: I can envision biblical times and dress.

Suggestions: I thought this was a very insightful and educational piece. I don't know what God's vision is for me, but I do know I was robbed and I knew the people who robbed me, but I forgive them because God would want me to.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4545630

Review of eclipse

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Hello Riham , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this is structured as a short work of fiction in paragraph form.

Theme: an eclipse is how your love was before she was murdered in front of you.

Flow: this item flowed really well, it is a well written piece of exciting writing.

punctuation: As far as I could tell the punctuation, spelling and grammar were all correct. accept for what I wrote in the sugesstions below.

tone: sad as well as exciting.

Title: the title, "Elipse". is appropriate and unique.

Suggestions: the following are mistakes:
Einar woke up terrified from this nightmare as seeing Aeliana’s father burnt his soul; that made him remember his bloody past and what he lost. He went to have a bath and let the water washes the dust of his soul. Each drop permeated his mind to give him a chance to breathe again

The word should say wash instead of washes in the third line. also

they wanted revenge. Instead of killing me, they killed Aeliana and her family. They did it in front of my eyes. I was shackled, and I couldn’t do anything but screaming and begging them to free my wife and her family. Her voice was torturing me, yet I couldn’t save her. The sound of gunfire was an explosion in my ears.
{c:green The correct words are scream and beg...

*pos*

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4545628

Review of Proof

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Hello QueenNormaJean Julyishereboom! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this little work of fiction is structured as a short story would be, It is written in paragraph form. the word count was 290 of a

Theme: the theme of this item is proof, and how the boy likes the internet and Newton's gravity. he is trying to do his homewor300 word limit.

Flow: the item flowed well and the story was carried along at a brisk pace which made the story good.

punctuation: to me, I think the punctuation was correct, I am not so well versed in the subject.

tone: light

Title: The title, "Proof", is appropriate for the item as this is what the story was about.

Suggestions: This was a well written piece of fiction and I did enjoy reading it..

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4545574

Review of A Thousand Thoughts of Revenge

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Hello Sonnets of the Spleen , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this is a structured sonnet

Theme: this is about heartache and seeking revenge, which so many try to do. I feel revenge is best left to the Lord myself. but that is just me.

Flow: this item flowed well and the rhymes that exist are good, the rhythm was also very good. this was a delightfully easy poem to read.

punctuation: you used a question mark and a few comas but for the most part you didn't use punctuation much. which is okay.

tone: this was an exciting and angry tone Is what I felt it to be.

I woue:dragonflyp} Title: This title is simply called, "Sonnet 1", I would prefer a real title, not the form of the poem with a number behind it. something like "My Heart's Revenge". That is just an example, you get the picture though,

Suggestions: I thought this was very good, usually I don't understand sonnets when I read them, however, I did this one and I liked it.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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My Book of Prayers (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
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#4545560

Review of Not As Advertised

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Hello mxnasi , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this was a short piece of fiction and it was structured as a short story it had good spacing and was easy to read.

Theme: the theme of this little piece of fiction was about a young man and he was learning to rob a car by breaking in and the alarm went off.

we:moon} Flow: I thought the story moved along at a brisk pace and was very well written.

punctuation: it appeared to me that the punctuation is correct.

tone: the tone was light even though it was about a robbery.

Title: the title,"Not As Advertised", is a great little for this piece, I also thought it was quite amusing.

Image: I can envision a young guy breaking into a car.

Suggestions: I got a kick out of this item, you used the prompt well.
I saw it on TV
{c:greenI would not have thought to create such a neat story from this expression.
Thank you for your fun writing and this little story, it was great.
God Bless You and stay safe.

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#4544965

Review of It's All In The Numbers

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Hello Sum1 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: In this item you have written nine different poems of varying
forms. They are based on numbers from one to nine. how many lines each has is different.

Theme: the poems are centered around each number from one to nine for each poem.

punctuation: the punctuation is different in each poem some of them had none.

tone: the tone changed from each poem as well. but overall it was, to me, educational.
as I learned some new forms.

Title: The title for the overall project is very appropriate, "It's all in the numbers".

Suggestions: I almost all the time use a quatrain, but I also like to do couplets, and a cinquain.
you did a great job on all of your poems.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544962

Review of Heart of Ice

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Hello Melora , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this poem was written using three quatrains or stanzas with four lines each.

{e:Butterfly2rTheme: this item is about a person whose heart is too cold to be able
to love again and you can't melt the ice from the person's heart.

{e:moon} Flow: the poem flows well

punctuation: You chose not to use punctuation with this poem, which is completely fine.

tone: cold and stern; overall, to me, I thought it is sad.

Title: the title is appropriate for the poem as it tells all about the poem.

Suggestions: I think this is a sad thing when someone has a heart so cold or like a stone. my heart is so big and easily hurt. I can't understand how you can be so cold to someone.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544953

Review of "You're Forgiven"

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Hello WinterSnow , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: there are three very long stanzas to create this poem.

Theme: Jesus forgives us of our sins and our mistakes,

Flow: the item flowed well without pauses or unnecessary stopping.

tone: forgiving

Title: the title ius appropriate for the poem.

{c:e:StarfishB} Suggestions: she said smilingly. I just wonder if this is the correct way to say this. I would say " she said with a smile". but it's yours you say it which way you feel sounds best.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544950

Review of QUOTES AND WORDS OF WISDOM

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Hello isokarifrancis , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: The structure of this item is so simple, as it is only one line.

Theme: the theme of this item is a quote that uplifts you.

Flow: It is only one line, therefore, it does not flow.

punctuation: the punctuation is okay

tone: the tone is uplifting

Title: the title is :Quotes and words of wisdom", and it is appropriate for the item.

Suggestions: I enjoyed reading your words of wisdom and I believe what you say is true. it is uplifting. a very nice Quote.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544949

Review of Healing

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Hello Crissy , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this is an acrostic poem which means that, in this case, the letters in various stanzas spell out the word healing.

Theme: the theme is healing, which is a very crucial topic for us in the world right now, with the corona Virus. but this poem is a personal trauma that you had many years ago.

Flow: The flow of this poem is very good and I can really appreciate it.

punctuation:
the punctuation is good as far as I can tell.

tone: kind of worrying I really don't know how to say it. maybe crucial
we need healuing now.

Title: The title of this poem is Healing, and it is very appropriate for the poem since the entire poem is about that subject.
Image:

Suggestions: You wrote a very nice poem and this was about recovering from a childhood trauma, any kind of healing is difficult but physical healing is sometimes easier than mental healing.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544939

Review of Unfilled Time

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Hello Angelica Weatherby- July 4th , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this was structured like most poems, however after the poem you did the most unique thing and reviewed your own poem.

Theme: a girl left alone while her parents go for a short walk.

Flow: the item flowed well without too many pauses.
t
e:exclaim} punctuation: the punctuation seemed fine to me.

tone: the tone was kind of lonely

Title: the title was appropriate for the poem.

Suggestions: I thought you did a fine job. I was surprised that you added a review of your own poem afterward. you seemed to be a little bit hard on yourself I thought. Give yourself a pat on the back,

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544936

Review of winter calls

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Hello Rhyssa , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you structured this item using seven stanzas of varying line count and ended with a couplet. about forty lines concluded this poem.

Theme: the thee was winter and skating and falling on your tush.

Flow: I thought that this poem flowed very well and had no unnecessary stops or pauses.

punctuation: the punctuation was good as far as I can tell.

tone: the tone was friendly

Title: the title was appropriate for this poem

Image: I could envision a snowy surrounding and a pond with ice on it for skating.

I ce:StarfishB} Suggestions: I thought that this was a wonderfully written and fun poem to read. I really liked it.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544925

Review of Friendship

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Hello 💙 Carly: poems & novel , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure:e there were four quatrains to creat this lovely poem.

Theme: this poem is about the importance of friendship and that it is from God.

Flow: the flow is very good and it flows well from beginning to the end.

punctuation: There is only a period at the end of the poem, which is fine because you really do not need punctuation in poetry.

tone: the tone is friendly

Title: the title is appropriate for the poem.

Suggestions: I enjoyed reading this poem and thought it was excellent.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544918

Review of Keeping It Real

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Hello bandit I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: The structure is just a few lines.

Theme: the positives of the Covid 19 Virus and how it has brought this country or I should say world together in prayer.

Flow: I think the item flowed very well without any pauses.

punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to me.

tone: the tone is up and positive

Title: the title is appropriate for the item.

Suggestions: you did a very nice job on this item.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544835

Review of An Ode To My Generation

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Hello MirandaCookies IS IN COLLEGE , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you structured this poem using four quatrains or stanzas with four lines each.

Theme: the theme of this poem is your generation, the millenniums.
the youth of today and their creative dreams.

Flow: this poem flowed well and did not have any unnecessary stops in it.

punctuation: you did choose to use punctuation with this poem, it looks okay to me, but I am no expert on this subject.

tone: the tone was pride

e:strawberry} Title: the title was appropriate for the writing.

Suggestions: I thought that this was a well written nicely-created and well-presented piece of poetry.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544821

Review of Perspective.

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Hello Siim Kepp , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you

Theme:created this poem using three stanzas with four lines each. or should I say quatrains.

Flow: the flow was good and there were no flaws.

punctuation: the punctuation looked okay to me.

tone: I really was freaked out by the dancing on the graves part.

Title: The title was appropriate
e
Image: I really get the vision of what you are writing about.

Suggestions: I thought this was well written and good.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4544628

Review of Till the End of our Days

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

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Hello Scott A. Lowe Upshotscott , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this is a long verse which worked well for this poem.

Theme: writing about love and current affairs.

Flow: the poem flowed well and had no unnecessary pauses or stops.

punctuation: I think the punctuation was okay, I am not well versed in the subject.

tone: loving

Title: I think the title tells a lot about the poem and the title is also very appropriate for the poem.

Suggestions: this is a well written and sweet poem,

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of I tot I taw a poody tat

Review by Lisa Noe

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.0)

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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you structured this curilew poem with four quick and rhyming lines,

Theme: Tweety seeing Sylvester

Flow: the flow was muted as it was so brief.

punctuation: I think that the punctuation was correct, but I am not really well versed in punctuation. ya know!

tone: light hearted

Title: the title is very cute and appropriate.

Image: can envision Sylvester chasing the little yellow canary.

Suggestions: I thought that this was cute and light hearted, very good.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Our New World

Review by Lisa Noe

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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This review is from Lisa Noe

Hello ellenraes , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this is structured like an essay in paragraph form.

Theme: the theme is to look to the Lord Jesus Christ during this pandemic for a cure and for answers.

Flow: the flow was very good and there were no stops or pauses that weren't needed.

punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to me

tone: the tone is loving

Title: the title is appropriate for this item.

Correction:
conspiracies theories
it would sound better if you say conspiracy theories.

Suggestions: you did a good job and I love what you had to say.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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