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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Amay , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: i Thought that the structure of the short story was just perfect, it was written as a letter to David, your friend.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme was a surprise wedding for you and engagement all in a week.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the flow of the story was really well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: it had a happy and very pleasant tone to it I thought.

*Strawberry* Title: I thought that the title, "A Weddin g Dream Come True", was just perfect and very appropriate for the story,

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can easily envision your wedding how beautiful it must have been.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: The story was fresh and very interesting and fun.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I thought that you wrote a very nice poem it is the type of writing that many would call
thought-provoking and also interesting as it shows into your psyche.
I would like to thank you for entering my contest and I wish you good luck and hope you will enter again in July, I will give my decision sometime after the 25 of June.

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Review of A Chance  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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Hello chantelle , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed d

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Your writing is good, but I feel as if I came in at the middle of a story or something.

*Moon* Flow: the flow of the story was good, it moved at a brisk pace. but I am feeling as though this was like chapter six in an eight chapter book.

*Exclaim* punctuation: perhaps it is just me but something seems to be missing.
the punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.


*Sun* tone: the tone was smooth and easy

*Strawberry* Title: the title , "A Chance," is appropriate for the story.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think perhaps you need to answer the question, what happens?
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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello isokarifrancis , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is hardly even an item, it is just one line of wisdom. but I must say that you packed more wisdom into one line than many do in an entire poem or paragraph of a story.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: " If your mouth becomes a storehouse of the words for the holy books, your inventory will consist of all-around goodness and quality success."
*Exclaim* punctuation:the punctuation is correct

*Sun* tone: the tone is thoughtful and educational

*Strawberry* Title:the title, "Quotes and Words of Wisdom", is very appropriate this is a quote that is -packed full of wisdom.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of No More Asking  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello JMariah , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is structured using three sestets or three stanzas with six lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this item was the shadows that dance around the room in the moonlight at night.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this item flowed really well and that it had a great rhythm and the rhymes were right on every time.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seemed to be correct and in place also.

*Sun* tone: the tone was kind of spooky but it was not dark.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, " No more Asking", was a bit thought provoking,

*Dragonflyp* Image: I could imagine a room with streams of light dancing shadows and an overall spooky feeling.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was the best poem I've read today soi far,
and I've read many. keep up the good work *Thumbsup*



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of My Soul  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It is well written and says everything it is meant to say.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be in place and ve correct to me.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "My Soul", is so good and it shows the depth of feeling you have for this person,.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision to starcrossed lovers embraced and kissing.
*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions,, I thought it was very brief but it says what it needs to.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Epitaph  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello tauqeerwrites , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.



iThis is a poem about work and worship it is an epitaph
*Moon* Flow: it seemed to flow really well and I liked what you spoke or perhaps it was the way you spoke you seemed sure
*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was, for the most part, missing with exception of some parenthesis and a question.
*Sun* tone: the tone was forceful and strong maybe even confident in what you were writing.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Epitaph", is exactly right for this particular poem.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: really don't have any suggestions for you, just keep writing and keep the confidence high.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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for entry "~ A Story-Poem ~" 
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)



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Hello ruwth , I am so happy that you decided to enter your poem in my contest. This is the first month in a long time that I have held it. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day. I want to wish you good luck in your endeavor.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using one hundred short lines of print. I really think this was more close to fifty lines as it is written. because the lines are so very brief.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: I think that the theme is very commendable I love the Bible and I believe all of the problems that face mankind can be remedied if people would follow the laws set forth in this very important book.

*Moon* Flow: I didn't think the lines flowed but the entire story did as a whole.
There was a lovely pace that the story had,

*Exclaim* punctuation: I really didn't pay a lot of attention in this subject as I am not an expert on it myself.

*Sun* tone: The tone was loving and educational in some respects.

*Strawberry* Title: The Title, " A Story-Poem", was appropriate but I do also think another name Such as a Book of Life 0r something about the Bible would be more creative. but yours does work.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I really loved your story-poem and I adored the subject matter.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of John The Ripper  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello tauqeerwrites , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this was created using six quatrains.
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*Butterfly2r* Theme you are not safe nor is the one controlling you

*Moon* Flow: this poem flows alright and has some rhyming in it. It's rhythm is a little strained.

*Exclaim* punctuation: there is no punctuation used in thisd particular poem, which is fine.

*Sun* tone:the tone was harsh and matter of fact.

*Strawberry* Title: John the ripper",is a play on the old "Jack the ripper" character

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I really had a difficult time following this poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello MatildaRose , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using ten quatrains and a single line separating one part.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Your brother was stolen according to your poem, he was taken from his bike off the road.


*Moon* Flow: This poem flowed very well with good rhyming and a nice rhythm.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seemed to be correct to me, however, I am no expert on punctuation. it looks okay though. The grammar also seems to be right in place.

*Sun* tone: the tone was sort of sinister I thought. and really sad.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "My dear old brother", makes me question if this is sarcasm on the part of the brother or is he really a dearly beloved brother or is he another brother to get rid of.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision a young fellow being stalked and taken from off his bike.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I do wonder which type of feeling you are playing on sadness or sarcasm. If this is a true story then I am so very sorry this has happened to your family and may God watch over you.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Dear Me  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello fyn , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured as s professional letter. to oneself.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: a letter from fyn to fyn about his writing and reviewing skills and efforts.

*Moon* Flow: the letter flowed well However, the grammar was a little bit off.
though I think it was meant to be that way as a form of comedy.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I guess the punctuation was okay, but I am not certain because I am not the best student of punctuation.

*Sun* tone:*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Dear Me", is the premise of the letter and is appropriate.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions but saw no mistakes.



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of GANDHI  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: Written in abcb, 7-6-7-6 syllabic format

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Gandhi, a sainted Indian who brought freedom from British.


*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed well and had sone rhyme and rythm

*Exclaim* Punctuation: The punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge.
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*Sun* tone: tribute

*Strawberry* Title: the title "GHNDHI" I think by putting it in all caps really
puts a spotlight on him.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you did a great job.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure is written in pentameter.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: internet addictition

*Moon* Flow:I thought that the item flowed well without rhyme or rhythm.


*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuations I usually leave because I am not good at it myself.'

e:sun} tone: inquizative

Te:dragonflyp} Title : "internet Addiction" is appropriate as a title
I thought you did a fine job creating this poem which asks and answers the question is the internet addictitive.


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e:muglp} Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Day One  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello {suser:chandtelle, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using a one-paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is war or should I say the caos that comes about after the war. You discuss the soldiers and the government.... rich!

*Moon* Flow: Your item flowed well and there were no unnecessary stops anywhere.
It was easy to follow from start to finish.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seemed to be okay to me, I am not very good at punctuation or grammar. but it sounded fine.

*Sun* tone: The tone was bitter and sort of enraged.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Day 1", I personally think the number one would do better if it were spelled out like "ONE".

*Dragonflyp* Image: A war-torn town comes to my mind when I read this.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that you showed one side of the plight. It was angry sounding and sort of sad.




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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello chushychus, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure creates a picture that favors s Christmas ornament.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the poem's Theme is chaos, it was dark and
thought-provoking
*Moon* Flow: it flowed okey I thought

*Exclaim* punctuation: the opunctuation was correct

*Sun* tone: the ton was chaotic

*Strawberry* Title: the title was appropriate for the item


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you did a fantastic job showing what chaos is.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.5)
your words are in red and my words are in blue. You made the following mistakes, I have copied yours, then I corrected it in blue.




I still remember about my experience. This day my father invited some people from my church to came in my house. 6 p. m. o'clock some man has came, they has preapared to present in my church. My father decided to training sing at second floor in my house. You must know: my house was not inhabited since ten years ago. So, you can imagine now, how scream my house.
In second floor, I was sat in front of the door. My eyes can see all things that in the room. The door’s room was opened when iI sat in front of it. The room was so dark and stuffy. It can be seen without you in the room. And then in this room, there is have a little room-bathroom that are rarely used also in this room a lot of my father’s book piled up.
When I sat there, I have been already felt that was something wrong there. But, I can’t find that. Until all the people tried to sing a song, my eyes see something. Exactly in front of me. I am speechless.
When I realized it-it that looks very white but transparent it’s not same wall in my house, it’s like a jellyfish. It’s form like a piece of hand. There is no body or head. I immediately shouted-“Pak, there was someone who called me, but there was no one there who was just a hand waving at me.” (*Pak it mean Dad in English)
Immediately all of the people was shocked. Then my father asked for me, “You see only a hand waving for you, right?” “Iya, Pak.”(“Yes, Dad.”) So, my father pleased to all people to go back and tried in the first floor.
So, if you it’s me what do you think about my experience? Are you shocked? Or are you scared? You can believe or not-because that I became known all of the “ghost” in my house. Now, is no disruption about “ghost” in my house.



To with, in line one, remove the word (about).
came in will be come to
the second sentence should be come
have prepared will be next instead odf has repaired.

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training will be train
on the second
at my house
In the second floor
in the same sentence remove the word at before the word in
not the same instead of not same.
It's formed not it's form.
remove the word to
If you were me, what do you think of the experience?
and finally, change in to at.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: * Written in abcb, 7-6-7-6 format

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The death of school children, taken in a fire in India

*Moon* Flow: the flow was terrific and there was no rhyme

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone was sad and melanchol

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Lord, Bestow Grace." was very excellent and appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a beautifully written memorial and tribute to the children.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello JMariah , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using two paragraphs, both brief.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is what type of flower you are, a dandelion is what you are.

*Moon* Flow: I think it is fine to be a dandelion, they are always there for you and they aren't that bad to look at either.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seemed to be correct to me.

*Sun* tone: light and happy

*Strawberry* Title: the title , Proud to be a Dandelion", is just great and appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you and I found no mistakes with your writing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Longing  
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Hello JoshtheJiant , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

e:think} Structure: the structure is made using only three short lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: loinging for something

*Moon* Flow: this was a very brief poem and the flow was as such very stifled



*Sun* tone: was deep

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Longing," was very appropriate and perfect for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think that you could make a really good poem out of this idea, it is deep and not bad as is, but of course, if you added some substance to it, it would sound better.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello LegendaryMask❤️ ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,

I know I have already wished you a happy anniversary twice, but I can't seem to keep myself from your hauntingly beautiful tributes to our Lord. to me the inspiration of writing starts first with God, and we need to always remember to give Him the glory and credit for everything we produce.. in writing as well as every other aspect in our lives.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Hello iluvhorses ,I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today.
You will be having an anniversary on May, you have been a valuable member of writing.com since 2011, that is nine years and we are lucky to have you. I love an acrostic poem, I think that they are so much fun. You did a fantastic job creating this one. "Priceless" is a wonderful poem. It shows how much you treasure this priceless relationship that you have with your wonderful husband. That is truly a great inspiration for your writing. I personally always use God, family, pets, nature and so on to inspire me. You did a great job, God Bless You/
ou.*Heart*

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Hello blakely5,I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today, I do so hope that you are having a very blessed day today, I know I have given you a review for your anniversary already, however you are highlighted this month in the Anniversary group so you deserve two. I chose this piece because the title spoke to me. I love God too, and I used to write letters to Him every day, It may sound crazy but God gave me the talent to write and I am a very shy person otherwise.
I can talk to Him now and do every day. You write from your heart and I can see how much you love and respect our Heavenly Father. It shows in all you do. In your writing, in your contest, and probably in your entire life. I hope my love for God is also as apparent as yours is I write about him often as He is usually my inspiration. Your writing is beautiful and filled with love, never change that.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Bowl-a-Rama  
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Hello JACE , I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today. I have written this two times already and keep losing it, so lets hope that you end up with this one. I just read your poem, "Bowl-a-Rama",
I thought that it was quite good. You have been a valuable member of writing.com since May 1, 2008, which is about twelve years, we are so happy that you are apart of our little writing family. I see you chose to write a Lento poem for this piece of writing. The title is appropriate for the writing and the grammar seems okay to me. The punctuation looks okay, but I am no expert on that subject for sure. This poem consists of two quatrains or stanzas with four lines each. The rhyme comes in with the second and fourth lines in both stanzas. There is a good rhythm to the poem which I thought was good, I do like a kind of flowing rhythm when I read poetry.
wh8ch I love to do. I read poetry as a hobby and I liked this poem because it reminds me of when I was a little girl and used to go bowling with my family, it was always so much fun.


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Hello Ollie Cooper , I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morn9ing, I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today.
I read your poem and I thought that it was very creative, thoughtful, and interesting. The title, "Dreams v.s. Reality," Is very appropriate for the item,
I also think that the item description is somewhat helpful to the reader of this item. You created this item using six quatrains or stanzas with four lines each.
I thought the form was suitable and the punctuation seemed to be in place to me, however, I am not the world's best at knowing punctuation. I think that the grammar was also correct and I saw no spelling errors in your poetry. I think poetry is great the way it shines on the subject we are writing about. I think this is a good poem and you worked hard on it I believe. congrats on the nice finish.




thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Hello Ruler of the Werecats , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,
I do so hope that you have a very blessed day today, I think that your writing is very good, and I liked the title. I thought it was friendly and appropriate for writing. I also think that the item description is so very helpful to the reader.
friends are a very special commodity, one that, these days, is hard to find.
I think you showed a good talent for choosing subjects of interest to write about.
The poem you have written is so creative and I found a lot of interest in it.
Friendship is hard when it is long distance so learning to communicate through writing is vastly important. This freestyle poem should please any friend.
I know that I would so pleased if I thought that I was the inspiration for a nice poem that my friend wrote for me.
hank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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