Hello Tinker, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewer Group. I came across this little poem on the read and review items list. I am so sorry to hear of this fall, I bet it was very painful. It is a good thing to joke about it and lighten the mood. You should be more careful though.
This shows excellent poetic writing skills. Thank you for sharing this item with me.
God Bless You.
Hello Khatib, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I thought that this was a well-rounded piece of writing. It makes sense and is important reading. You did a good job at creating a couple of really good quotes. Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, God Bless You.
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I found this item on the read and review items list, and I thought I'd read it. I found this to be very educational and important reading for everybody. I love wildlife and nature and you have put together an important list for us to familiarize ourselves with. Thank you for sharing this wonderful list with us.. God Bless You.
Hello Eduard Karlov, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I came across this item on the read and review item list.
I thought that this was profound and interesting. I really didn't get the last line, but it is probably just me. Thank you for sharing this piece of yourself with me. God Bless You
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am here with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" to give you a review of this piece. I have never had a purple car, though I suppose it could be pretty cool. I would like to have a navy blue beetle bug by Volkswagen. I now have a black Nissan Sentra. I also have a yellow, Plymouth duster from 1971. but then again it was stolen... your writing is very good,
cars broke down and couldn’t be fix or cost too much for me to fix it one my friends would take piety on me and buy me a used car.
If I were you in the first sentence above, I would add an (ed) on to fix to make it fixed.
and also I would add the word of before the word my... also remove the letter e from the word pity.
Hey there sum1swritikng, I am here with the WDC Power Reviewers Group, I just read this item and I was truly touched by your words. You are surely creative and artistic. I thought that this item was so very sad. I thought that the title is appropriate for the item. I also thought that the item description is helpful. The grammar and the spelling are both also very good.
Hello SusanFarmer, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am with the WDC Power Reviewers this evening. I thought that this was a well-written piece of poetry. I believe it is called a senyru form, which is very similar to a Haiku. Both are from the Orient. I have apple trees in my yard and I love the beautiful blossoms,
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I am your reviewer, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am affiliated with the WDC Power Reviewers Group this evening. I thought that this item is a very well balanced and nicely written piece. First of all, I don't believe you are seventy are you?
I never dreamed of it. The smartest thing anyone could do is to leave their cares in God's hands. It doesn't pay to worry, for sure.
Hello patricia1962, I am your reviewer, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ with the Power Reviewers this evening. I thought that this was a very well written piece of writing.
What we are taught while we grow in years is very important,it establishes what type of person we will become. Will you be warm, loving, caring, generous, and accepting?
or will you be cold, hateful, selfish, prejudice, and the like? The people we come in to contact within our early life establishes what we learn from them and therefore, what type of person we will become. Thanks for an insightful piece of writing.
Hi Oddman, my name is Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am your reviewer this evening.
I see that this is neither a story nor a poem, or a chapter, but instead, it looks to be a quote!
"Spend your money for survival.
Spend your thoughts for real living."
This actually makes a lot of sense.
The title, "What's what," is very appropriate for this quote.
good quote
gee, this is such a lovely poem and I was flabbergasted by the fact I inspired you!
You are such a talented poet and all of your work is so professional and good.
I never see mistakes and you always have good subject matter of which to write on.
I have trouble thinking about what subject to write about.
Thanks your friend, Lisa Noe
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Hello Sorji, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: The structure is just one long paragraph or verse.
\ Theme: The theme is about the eclipse of 2017 in the Midwest.
Flow: It flowed well and had good grammar and spelling, it is a free verse poem.
punctuation: There was no punctuation for this item, which is quite alright.
tone: the tone is exciting
Title: The title, "A Great Small Difference," is unusual as great can also mean large yet you say small difference... I know that you probably mean wonderous (great).
Suggestions: I thought that this was a well written piece of literature.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Sumojo, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item was created using eight stanzas
I just loved this little poem,
Theme: the theme was a dragon hiding under the bed and stealing candy
Flow: I thought the flow of this poem was excellent as was the rhythm and rhyme. It also had good grammar and the spelling was correct.
punctuation: The punctuation appears to be correct to me.
tone: the tone is loving and warm.
Title: The title, "Purple Dragon," is appropriate for the story poem.
Suggestions: This was a wonderfully well written poem and a nice story at that. I want to let you know about a contest that is especially for story-poems,
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Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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This is a review by Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~
Hello Beholden, I know how difficult it is to write or create a poem or piece of writing using only twenty-four syllables, it is nigh to impossible. But you did it and I am afraid this poor writer can't understand it. but you did it nonetheless.
congrats....
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Sum1 Is Home!, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , What a wonderfully well-written piece of writing.
I just loved this. Of course, I love all things military but war. My dad was in the army and the air force over the years, He fought in Vietnam and retired after twenty-four years of service, He died because of agent orange, so you might say that war got him, though he didn't know it for eighteen years. I can't say enough good things about this poem; it's great. thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is such a lovely Haiku, or Japanese poem. The Haiku states just ever so sweetly how tiny even the largest subject can be. The chill, the frost, the sweet cardinal on the lone frozen branch. This is a well written and beautiful Haiku for sure.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun
Hello rl I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a beautifully written set of lyrics. I love music that is sad and emotional... and this is highly emotionally charged. it is a very lonely thing when someone you love leaves. I think that the title, "Lonely and Blue", is so very appropriate for this particular item. The item description is also very helpful to the reader of the song.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
And Have Fun
Hello Tim Chiu I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a poem about a man who is in a dead end job.
He sees the movie The Wizard of OZ
The moral of this movie was,
These guys wished upon a star,
For qualities and places to be,
But didn’t have to look that far.
Then Boris became a leader. This is a good poem it is well written and I liked it.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun
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