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Review of at the party  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Rhyssa , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using one long verse or stanza

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This is a poem about hitting a pinata with a stick.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the poem flowed well from the beginning until the end.


*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seems to be correct as does the grammar, and spelling.

*Sun* tone: the tone is fun and like having a party

*Strawberry* Title: the title of the poem, "At the Party," should probably be capitalized. but it is appropriate for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: just capitalize the title and the rest is good.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Fools  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Dark Fox , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item was written using one long verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Love is in the air and people lose their sense of reasoning.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well from beginning to end.

*Exclaim* punctuation: you did not choose to use it in this item.

*Strawberry* Title: The title of this item, "Fools," is appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: in the item description the word is "loses" not losses.
I thought this was a good attempt at writing poetry.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: structured using seven lines of writing.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of the poem is about the Chambedrlains

*Moon* Flow: it flowed from beginning to end with rhymes a/a,b/b etc.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation looks correct to me.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Visions of Uluru" is appropriate for the item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I am afraid that I could not follow or understand this poem. perhaps it is just me, but I don't get what it is about.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello {suser:(peanut2365}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item was only a few lines of writing. it was endearing.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The loss of a loved one

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well without rhyme or rhythm.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am not well in the punctuation, so I'll just say I think it was correct, nothing stood out as being wrong.

*Sun* tone: the tone of this item was sad.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "The lose of a loved one " is incorrect, it should be said as: The Loss of a Loved One", and it should be capitalized.
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*StarfishB* Suggestions: I would redo the title as I showed you above.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a very creative and imaginative type of poem. I really liked it and think you did a fine job with it.


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I saw no mistakes, the spelling and grammar were just fine and punctuation as well. I thought the story was interestingly funny.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of Heart  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello cheshire I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
As usual, you have written a very nice piece of poetry/. I think you are correct, the heart is the center of life. everything that means anything starts in the heart especially love. our emotions come from our heart and our feelings also come from our heart/ The title of your poem is appropriate for this item. The item description is also very helpful to the reader.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello at47 I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer. you have written a beautiful poem I am so sorry for the child's illness, this is such a very sad thing wbhen a child gets sick and has to suffer. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with me and keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe! There is a place called Heaven and we all shall see our loved one's again If you believe it shall happen. I will keep you in my prayers.
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Review of Still  
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Ckrose77 I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You have written two very beautiful lines of poetry for God. I liked what you had tpo say. however I did catch one small mistake.

And in the quietness of me I saw Tou

you need a comma after me and you meant to say you not tou.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of Press  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Ckrose77 I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a really well-written piece of literature It makes me think of The Lord Jesus Christ as He walked to the hill, carrying His cross to be crucified oh so many years ago. Perhaps that is what you are talking about. I did see one tiny little mistake with your writing.

My my mouth dry and the taste of dirt entertains my tongue - yet I press!

You repeated the word "my" in this line.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of Life with Physics  
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello {suser:(seanfear} I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Wow I am impressed are you really a physicist, hell I have a hard time spelling it, much less laughing at someone for there intellect. I think this was a wonderful piece of writing, My favorite show in the whole world is "The Big Bang Theory", it is show I watch every night and refuse to miss, I've seen every episode several times each. Sheldon Cooper is the funniest genius on television. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Dr M C Gupta I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This poem is more pleasing as it is a positive reaction to romance, it shows two people in love. The title, Tender Feelings, is very appropriate and the item description is helpful to the reader of the sonnet. I commend you on your writing, I also think you are fortunate to share such feelings with another,
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello {suser:mcgupta44 } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I have never heard a divorce referred to in this manner... I always heard it as...
let's get a divorce. I don't know which is correct, perhaps you are but I really don't know. I think it is very sad when a marriage doesn't work out.
It happens all too often that a couple gives up at the first sign of trouble.
I have been married for thirty-five years and there have been ups and downs but I would not trade it for anything.

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Review of A CAN OF WORMS  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Nan I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I am so sorry, but I don't understand your poem? I think you are using the can of worms as some sort of metaphor, but for the life of me, I don't get it. The analogy was just lost on me.The title of the poem is appropriate , the item description is very helpful to the reader that is how I know you are speaking of pent up feelings and letting them out. or at least that is what I think you mean.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of Meditate  
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Vanishing Vapor I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I r3eally liked this poem, I found it to be profound, and also eyeopening to those who do not think on the spiritual realm. I am a very spiritual and religious person, though not a fanatic. I believe in God and worship the one who made me. He deserves all glory and I adore and love Him. I meditate every day on the wonderful creations God has created. I am astounded by the beauty of the world.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Lloyd's Song  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Tema I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I would personally like to welcome you to writing.com. I failed to give you a proper
Welcome when I reviewed your other piece. I run a contest in which a story written as a poem can be entered it is called A story-poem contest, I'd like to welcome you to write and enter a piece, I think you will enjoy it. This piec3e of writing is very sweet, it is a tribute song to your boyfriend who passed in 2013. I am so sorry to hear of your sad loss. It reminded me of the song You're in my heart you're in my soul that Rod Stewart used to sing. I'm not sure that was the title of it but your song reminded me of his song.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of TREASURED  
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Chris Breva I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I really thought you highlighted the prompt in an unusual yet effective way.
The title was appropriate and was the prompt. the item description tells us which contest this is entered in. what you said is endearing and sweet. You did a fine job and I do hope that you at least placed if not won the contest.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Whole New World  
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Lisa Noe {}

Hello The Lost One I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You surely put this piece of writing under the right genre listing, because I found it to be horrifying. The world has changed and now more than when you actually wrote this piece, with the pandemic, and if you live in the United States, The civil unrest and political atmosphere that is hot right now. I do not think the first line of your essay was a good one, because we are not Gods! We need to learn as a society to worship and pray to the one true God who created mankind and the universe. He is righteous and I give the glory of all life to Him. if more people felt this way, "TRULY" with their hearts and souls then the world would be a better place.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Tema I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think tyou are great, it is good for you to make your feelings known! You stand up for your rights and tell him you are woman hear me roar because what you say is as important as his opinion. You tell Him how it is. your song is powerful and I'm behind you. get out and vote if you are in the United States, you are every bit as good as him if not better.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of writting with me.
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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You certainly deserve the ribbon which adorns your item. This was a magnificent read. I loved it, you tell it just the way it is. This type of prejudice person really makes me sick. I love people and I follow God's Law, I love all mankind as if they were me myself. The title of this item is so appropriate and good, the item description is also very helpful to the reader of the item. Good Job.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of Fate  
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello w0lfbane I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Fate is the title of this poem and it is very appropriate for the writing,
Fate is something I believe in, I think it was fate that I met and married my husband. I thought this was a thought-provoking and very well written piece of poetry. You did a very nice job createding this piece, Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of Elastic Grip  
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Rated: E | (3.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Eelectrissy I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I must say this piece of writing is not cut and easily understood.
The title is appropriate for the item, I can not make heads nor tales of the item desccription. Writ a Eel, What does that mean,, Is it even English... if not you should write out beside it the English meaning of what you are saying.
This was a romantic poem but I wonder if it is perhaps an R rated or higher piece of writing, the reason I say that is the last line.
Thank you for sharing this piece of with me.
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Review of Buried Treasure  
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Don Two I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was a really nicely written piece of writing. The poem, entitled Buried Treasure, is a very good poem. The title is appropriate for the item. The item description was also very helpful. I enjoyed reading your poem. and look forward to reading future works by you.
I also thought that this item was very creative and artistic.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of Signs of Autumn  
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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Have a sunshiny day! I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think you did a fabulous job on this item.th e title was appropriate and matched the [oem greatly. The item description was helpful. The poem itself was educational. I thought this was a nice piece of writing and I commend you on a job well done.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Tema I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this song about you and your children was very well written and I enjoyed reading it.
is it meant to be a ballad or some other form, I especially liked the chorus as it showed how you desperately wanted to go back to when your children were young.
That would be a wonderful thing if we could go back to the time in our lives that made us the happiest.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello grawitch I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You start off with an excellent title for your poem. It has a helpful item description. I thought the in rhyming was very good and creative. I thought that you really applied your talent to this piece of writing and it shows. I did not see any mistakes of any kind.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!



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