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Hello Ckrose77 Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a really well-written piece of literature It makes me think of The Lord Jesus Christ as He walked to the hill, carrying His cross to be crucified oh so many years ago. Perhaps that is what you are talking about. I did see one tiny little mistake with your writing.

My my mouth dry and the taste of dirt entertains my tongue - yet I press!

You repeated the word "my" in this line.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Life with Physics  Open in new Window.
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Hello {suser:(seanfear} I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Wow I am impressed are you really a physicist, hell I have a hard time spelling it, much less laughing at someone for there intellect. I think this was a wonderful piece of writing, My favorite show in the whole world is "The Big Bang Theory", it is show I watch every night and refuse to miss, I've seen every episode several times each. Sheldon Cooper is the funniest genius on television. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of A CAN OF WORMS  Open in new Window.
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Nan Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I am so sorry, but I don't understand your poem? I think you are using the can of worms as some sort of metaphor, but for the life of me, I don't get it. The analogy was just lost on me.The title of the poem is appropriate , the item description is very helpful to the reader that is how I know you are speaking of pent up feelings and letting them out. or at least that is what I think you mean.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Hello Vanishing Vapor Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I r3eally liked this poem, I found it to be profound, and also eyeopening to those who do not think on the spiritual realm. I am a very spiritual and religious person, though not a fanatic. I believe in God and worship the one who made me. He deserves all glory and I adore and love Him. I meditate every day on the wonderful creations God has created. I am astounded by the beauty of the world.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Hello Tema Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I would personally like to welcome you to writing.com. I failed to give you a proper
Welcome when I reviewed your other piece. I run a contest in which a story written as a poem can be entered it is called A story-poem contest, I'd like to welcome you to write and enter a piece, I think you will enjoy it. This piec3e of writing is very sweet, it is a tribute song to your boyfriend who passed in 2013. I am so sorry to hear of your sad loss. It reminded me of the song You're in my heart you're in my soul that Rod Stewart used to sing. I'm not sure that was the title of it but your song reminded me of his song.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Hello Chris Breva Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I really thought you highlighted the prompt in an unusual yet effective way.
The title was appropriate and was the prompt. the item description tells us which contest this is entered in. what you said is endearing and sweet. You did a fine job and I do hope that you at least placed if not won the contest.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello The Lost One Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You surely put this piece of writing under the right genre listing, because I found it to be horrifying. The world has changed and now more than when you actually wrote this piece, with the pandemic, and if you live in the United States, The civil unrest and political atmosphere that is hot right now. I do not think the first line of your essay was a good one, because we are not Gods! We need to learn as a society to worship and pray to the one true God who created mankind and the universe. He is righteous and I give the glory of all life to Him. if more people felt this way, "TRULY" with their hearts and souls then the world would be a better place.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Tema Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think tyou are great, it is good for you to make your feelings known! You stand up for your rights and tell him you are woman hear me roar because what you say is as important as his opinion. You tell Him how it is. your song is powerful and I'm behind you. get out and vote if you are in the United States, you are every bit as good as him if not better.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of writting with me.
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Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You certainly deserve the ribbon which adorns your item. This was a magnificent read. I loved it, you tell it just the way it is. This type of prejudice person really makes me sick. I love people and I follow God's Law, I love all mankind as if they were me myself. The title of this item is so appropriate and good, the item description is also very helpful to the reader of the item. Good Job.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of Fate  Open in new Window.
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Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello w0lfbane Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Fate is the title of this poem and it is very appropriate for the writing,
Fate is something I believe in, I think it was fate that I met and married my husband. I thought this was a thought-provoking and very well written piece of poetry. You did a very nice job createding this piece, Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Eelectrissy Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I must say this piece of writing is not cut and easily understood.
The title is appropriate for the item, I can not make heads nor tales of the item desccription. Writ a Eel, What does that mean,, Is it even English... if not you should write out beside it the English meaning of what you are saying.
This was a romantic poem but I wonder if it is perhaps an R rated or higher piece of writing, the reason I say that is the last line.
Thank you for sharing this piece of with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Buried Treasure  Open in new Window.
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Don Two Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was a really nicely written piece of writing. The poem, entitled Buried Treasure, is a very good poem. The title is appropriate for the item. The item description was also very helpful. I enjoyed reading your poem. and look forward to reading future works by you.
I also thought that this item was very creative and artistic.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
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Hello An apple a day.... Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think you did a fabulous job on this item.th e title was appropriate and matched the [oem greatly. The item description was helpful. The poem itself was educational. I thought this was a nice piece of writing and I commend you on a job well done.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello Tema Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this song about you and your children was very well written and I enjoyed reading it.
is it meant to be a ballad or some other form, I especially liked the chorus as it showed how you desperately wanted to go back to when your children were young.
That would be a wonderful thing if we could go back to the time in our lives that made us the happiest.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Lisa Noe Author Icon*SMILE*

Hello asinder Author Icon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer. This was a fine and appropriate title for your writing. This was a usual conversation before the pandemic. now nothing is usual except for wearing masks and being afraid of dying with the virus. You really did show a real conversation and I thought it was just great.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello otokai, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using two quatrains and two couplets.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is without warning, the crisis abducts you.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this item rhymed and flowed well

*Exclaim* punctuation: the is punctuation is correct as is the grammar and spelling.

*Sun* tone: the tone of this poem comes off as sounding sad.

*Strawberry*Title: The Title,"Dawning", is appropriate for the poem.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a unique piece of writing. very good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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*Poseyp*Title: The Mistletoe berry

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*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I am very happy that you entered my contest. Welcome to writing.com, entering contests id s great way to get in the groove of things around writing.com. I didn't mind entering the poem for you, but I do hope you now understand how to do it, because some of these contests won't let enter that way. I thought your poem was well written. It has a lot of poetic devices in it. you used assonance and alliteration, rhyme and rhythm. I thought that the story was very original and imaginative. I liked the poem and I think you did a very good job on it.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any with your writing. I thought you really put a lot of effort into your poem, you did a good job! *Thumbsup*

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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*Poseyp*Title: A Horse's Whinny

*Poseyp*Author: Anna Marie Carlson Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. You may have had a little bit of trouble entering with the bitem:XXXXXXX within two brackets {. I am glad you entered though. This was a really nice little poem. I enjoyed it and it taught me something about a whinny. I wish you luck and hope you enter again for September.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I saw no mistakes. you have a very creative piece of writing. The story value was very nice and the poetry worked well.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This poetry was structured as a paragraph.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme was the love you have for your mother

*Moon* Flow: I thought it flowed really well from the beginning
The spelling and grammar were both up to par.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am not a good judge of punctuation but I guess yours looks fine.

*Sun* tone: loving tone was used, your poem had a lot of emotion and feeling in it.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "I Love Mom," is appropriate and is the whole theme of the poem.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think you did a really good job with your words.
I think however,, it could look more pleasing if it were written using stanzas,


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured as on long verse with a repeated line throughout.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is the coming of the Lord and being with him.
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*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seems correct to me

*Sun* tone: the tone seems a little urgent

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Don't get left behind!" is taken from the poem it is the repeated line.




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about our God and His Son.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello J. Y. Sun Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the Haiku are all structured correctly with five syllables
seven syllables and finally five syllables per stanza.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: you have created several Haiku with several different themes
usually it's good to stick to nature, animals and such.

*Moon* Flow: this was far too broken with the punctuation there was no flow


*Exclaim* punctuation: I am not sure but I don't believe you use punctuation in a Haiku,you could probably ask Dave Author Icon at the Poet's Place, he could tell you for sure all of the rules for all forms of poetry.


*Strawberry* Title: The title, I'm not sure but I believe "Haiku Again" would sound more appropriate and leave off the punctuation in the title.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I suggest to keep writing these using nature as an inspiration, do not use punctuation in the Haiku. and keep practicing. you'll do great if you just keep at it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Smitten with a kitten

*Poseyp*Author: Brenpoet Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this was a beautiful and touching little poem. it was just precious. I love cats and I know that both dogs ansd cats can fill a void when we are so upset or sad. They are great, my Dog, Chewy, saved my life from depression. I thought this was a wonderful story and I am happy that you all found each other.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I thought the title was simple and sweet. I saw no mistakes of any kind.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of Solace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Still Iam Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you have created a very nice piece of straight verse poetry.

*Butterfly2r* Theme:This was about what you were thinking of when you
wrote this item.

*Moon* Flow: I did think that your writing flowed writing flowed well, you also had good spelling and what seemed to be proper grammar.


*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was good or I think it was I am not well versed in punctuation rules. but I think it is okay not to use it when writing poetry.

*Sun* tone:the tone seemed even

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Solace",, was appropriate for the item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jay O'Toole Author Icon, I am your reviewer of this piece this evening, my name isLisa Noe Author Icon. I thought that this was poignant beautiful and patriotic.
I loved it. As one who sacrificed her father for our glorious country, I commend you on writing this item. I thank you for sharing this item and tell you to keep- writin g and I'll keep reading and God Bless You.


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