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WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW
Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Stallion, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning. I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today.
I so much loved your poem, it is a beautiful tribute to our Lord Jesus Christ, my master and King. Our beautiful savior, you have given credit in a wonderful way I think. Your title, "Jesus", is just perfect and so very appropriate for this item,
I think you have written a great item description describing what the poem will be about, it is very helpful to the reader of the item. The poem has a terrific rhythm, it actually sounds more like song lyrics, with all the repetition, which I personally thought helped the sound of the poetry. I also thought that the poem flowed so very well from the first word to the last. I am a Christian and it makes me proud to see a fellow Christian write something which Honors Jesus so much.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
Hello Don Two, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
b Structure: this item is structure using just one verse,
Theme: The theme Cabin Fever
Flow: the item flowed well and the grammar was good as was the spelling.
punctuation: the punctuation is good as far as I can tell,
tone: anxious
Title: The title, "In this House with Fever", is appropriate especially since the Virus is running rapidly.
Suggestions: I think you did a great job creating this and I think we can all relate to it.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello amrighter, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
{e:t{e:Butterfly2r} Theme:hink} Structure: this poem is structured using
three quatrains and one tercet.
Flow: This item flows very well, it has good grammar and spelling, and I think you put a lot of effort into it. tone: comfortable tone.
Title: The title, "Alone In the Silence ReWrite", I think I would have said: Alone in the Silence, A rewrite.
I added the comma and the word A and lowercase rewrite.
but that's just me, You do what suits you best.
Suggestions: I read both poems and I liked the rewrite best. it shows more effort I thought. The theme of this item was silence and being alone.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello netty, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: just written in a verse very simple and plain
Theme: Speaking of God
Flow: the item flowed well with a good rhythm.
punctuation: punctuation was lightly used but correct.
tone: loving and strong
Title: thetitle of this poem, "When I Speak of HIM", I like how you honor our God by putting HIM in all caps. it shows great respect on your part.
Suggestions: I do have a suggestion for you, I think that all of the pronouns which refer to God should be capitalized.
like He, His, and Him. just as God should always be and Lord, and so on. I thought that this was a beautifully written and respectful piece of literature, I loved it.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello DoXx, The Renegade Monkey, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: This item is structured using five stanzas of various lengths.
. Theme: knowing what path to choose.
Flow: this poem is a little broken up, it seems it could read more smoothly.
th punctuation: You really do need to use some punctuation with this particular poem. it may stop the confusion and make it a little smoother,
tone: confused
Title: "Paths" is the title and I think it is a really good title and very appropriate for the item.
Suggestions: I saw a few mistakes which you really should fix.
Is there anything to even loose anymore
In the above sentence, the correct word is lose...
not loose...
That right now just seems to bright
In the above sentence the correct word is too not to
I think this shows that you really put a lot of effort in writing this poem, and the subject is a good one, and you follow it well just go back and read it out loud and then you will see that you need to make a few changes. Take my advice and make the changes I suggested and be sure to use proper punctuation, it will make a big difference. You keep trying this was an excellent attempt.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing your writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. What a lovely and beautiful love story. I found it to be so very romantic. This is a long courtship and marriage.
That is fabulous and surprising in this day and age. you got married the year I was born. I love the story value of this story-poem.
Suggestions: I can't really give you any suggestions for improvement, I thought it was a nicely written story-poem, and so sweet.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This is a very creative piece of poetry. I thought that the story value was excellent and the poetry was a cinquain.
I like that you used your imagination, although I have always loathed snakes. You did a fine job creating a wonderful story poem.
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes, the spelling and grammar were both great and I believe the punctuation was equally okay.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a well written story poem.
I really think you got the idea of story poem. It is a good story value in this and an excellent poem. The flow, rhythm, and rhyme were all equally good. I liked this item and I thought it was very creative as well as imaginative, good job.
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with it and frankly can't offer any suggestions for improvement.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
Hello Brain KC has a spinal cord, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewer Group. I found this item on writi ng.com's read and review items list. I thought that this was a well written piece which would be perfect for autumn. I love the sight that this poem presents of blowing, flowing leaves. it is a beautiful sight. Thank you for sharing and God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. Wow you guys aren't going to make this simple for me are you? This was very well written and it is so challenging for me to pick a winner with all of these excellent entries. I got a fright with your item.
I thought that it was imaginative and creative... very well done!
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing it was just great
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This is an excellent likeness to the Raven, I loved it my favorite of alk if Poe's works, that and the "Black Cat".
This was creative and flowed very well had the best rhythm of all poems In existence, I believe.
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with this work and it is deserving of five stars I believe.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
Hello Quihadi, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I found this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I think this is a lovely poem, and a haunting statement. I am Chritian
and I love anything that is written about my Lord. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully talented piece of work with us. God Bless You.
Hello Guriya, I am your reviewer today, ljsanoe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I found this item on writing.com's read and reviewing list. I thought that this wss a well written piece of writing. his is a Spiritual poem and I love that. thank you for sharing this item with us. God Bless You.
Hello Jatog the Green, I am your reviewer today Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewer Group. I thought that this was a well written little story-poem. This is from the Superman fame. The mild manner reporter and his lovely gal,
Lois Lane. Thanks for sharing this piece of writing with us. God Bless You.
Hello {suser:(beyondwords}, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I think that your writing is "beyond words"!
It is so lovely, I can so much envision the beautiful rose streaked sky of which you describe. It is a lovely description indeed.You have heard about writer's painting pictures with their words, well you are Van Goh or some very artistic fellow who has created a masterpiece with mere words. Thank you for sharing and God Bless You.
Hello Beholden, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers. I found this item on writing.com's read and review page.I thought that this was so interesting and for me, educational. Your poetry is very good, I am surprised you didn't get first place. You deserve all of the recognition you get from this item, it is very well done.
Hello MirandaCookies IS IN COLLEGE, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I came across this item on the read and review items list. This is the perfect time for such a dynamic poem, it tells it like it is.
Hate is running ramped in this Nation and it doesn't help that we have leaders who insight it. Your poem sadly is true and there is a division in our nation right now. I look forward to the day when we have one type of person A loving, caring, decent, and acceptable person of any color. Let us call that person an American. with pride not shame.
love each other, God is our Father and He created us all. God bless You.
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