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#4553829

Review of Changing Places

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a super poem about moving, I have moved more times than I care to recall, when my father was in the military, then when I got married I haved moved about three
or four more times. I will probably have to move again in about a year or so. You didn't leave out anything It is a lot of hard work to move.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4553810

Review of Nineteen Candles

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Rated: E

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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You are touched with talent and you share it with us all. This is a very nice tribute to the Story Mistress and Story Master, Wrutubg,com is as special a place as you could ever want to find. I am anxious to see what you write for the twentieth birthday bash...
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4553807

Review of The Center Ring

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hello {suser: } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was a ZaniLa Rhyme, which consists of 4 lines per stanza. The rhyme scheme for this form is abcb and a syllable count of 9/7/9/9 per stanza. Line 3 contains internal rhyme and is repeated in each odd numbered stanza. Even stanzas contain the same line but swapped. The ZaniLa Rhyme has a minimum of 3 stanzas and no maximum poem length. I am so glad that you added the form identification with the poem itself. I thought you followed the rules well and did a great job on it.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing I I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun!

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#4553739

Review of Love her in a way she loves

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

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Hello {suser: } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I thought that this was a very sweet poem indeed. and your message was a good one.
I would like to give you a suggestion though...
If I were you I would also reword the last two sentences to make more sense.
your message is a good one though.
Do love in the way she loves to be loved.
This line sounds better as:
love her in the way she wants to be loved.

Thank you for sharing this piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4553736

Review of A Good Meal

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Rated: E

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Hello {suser: } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I bet that turned out to be a very special dinner indeed. A pet whether it be a cat or a dog can add so much to a person's life they can cure loneliness for sure. They are a pleasant company and a nice dinner companion. I thought your little poem was very creative and very well written. Good Job!
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4553735

Review of Kipuka

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hello Kåre Enga in Montana I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Wow! are you from Hawaii, you are lucky if you are, it is the most beautiful place on earth. I have only seen it on television but it is breathtaking and beautiful.
I would love to go and see what you are talking about crossing the lava field to reach an oasis on the Hawaiian Islands. You must feel blessed to experience this.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4553734

Review of My World

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Rated: E

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Hello {suser: } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
oh what a pleasant look at a beautiful and lovely world, it sounds like you have pictured a perfect world for yourself. What a special little poem this is, It sounds as if you have a happy and wonderful place in this life to call home. when you are in this place it is hard to leave, is it not?
hank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4553733

Review of Batman as Badman

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Rated: E

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Hello {suser:vassie \} I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I really don't know what to say about the subject of your little story. I realize it is just for fun however many people are dying because of a similar pandemic right now, I realize you do not mean any disrespect or anything. but It might not be wise to write about it in a manner that depicts victims as bad men. Your writing skills are very good I would just suggest that you not depict the victims as badmen.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4553712

Review of Pick Me

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Rated: E

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Hello willow I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a beautifully written piece of literature, I love to read poetry and you have written a very nice piece for me to enjoy. I thought that the item had veery nice rhymes and a good rhythm it also had good spelling and grammar, the whole poem was the cats meow! You did a sensational job and I liked your work.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4553708

Review of Baked Bean Casserole

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Rated: E

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Hello Chris Breva I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I thought that this baked bean casserole recipe. I think I will try it, however I do not know how much ketchup and mustard to add. do you maybe start with a tbls. or tsp. or are you talking about maybe 1/4 cup or something? I just love baked beans..
}Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun

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#4552950

Review of Future on the edge of Technology

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Rated: 13+

| (3.0)

Hello King

, I just came upon this item on writing.com's read and review items list and I see that there is nothing printed in your item. It is supposed to be a chapter about Amanda Young, who is a high schooler living in 2054. However, there is nothing!
The title, Future on the edge of technology, seems as if it would make a good chapter for a story, but I don't know if the chapter was deleted or what, Nothing is there.
Thanks and God Bless You, Reviewer, Lisa Noe

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#4552780

Review of Caged

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Rated: E

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Hello Lori J , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item was created using five stanzas

Theme: the theme is do caged places protect us?

Flow: this item flowed well and the grammar was correct and properly used
and there were no misspelled words that I can seer.

punctuation: the punctuation is correct as well as far as I could tell.

tone: with quiet desperation

Title: the title, "Caged," is a good title and appropaiate

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552766

Review of Corona

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Rated: E

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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this poem is structured using one stanza, this poem is called a septet. it was written for writers cramp.

Theme: The Corona Virus

Flow: the poem really don't flow due to the fact it is so brief,.

punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to me.

tone: the tone is serious

Title: the title, "Corona" is the name of the disease or virus.

Image: this poem creates a kind of picture with its words.

Suggestions: this was well done good job.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552764

Review of Morning Wakens Pure

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Rated: E

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ello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: T his poem was created using five cinquains, I liked the form of poetry you chose to writ in.

Theme: the theme is the thoughts of a beautiful morning

Flow: the poem flowed really well, and the
spelling and grammar were also correct.

punctuation: The punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

tone: the tone is pleasant

Title: the title, "Morning Wakens Pure", this is very original and appropriate for the poem.

Image: I envision nature at its finest.

Suggestions: the writing is so good and creative.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552760

Review of PLYMOUTH ROCK

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Rated: E

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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: these two stanzas, kind of make a triangle.

Theme: kind of a bout history and the national bird is it chicken or eagle, lol

Flow: the flow of this poem is good.

punctuation: to the best of my knowledge, the punctuation looks correct.

tone: the tone is fun

Title: the title,,"Plymouth Rock", in all capital letters, which makes you seem to be screaming it to me.

Image: I can envision a chicken and an eagle.

Suggestions: I heard of a turkey being the national bird and I know that the eagle is, but the chicken, that's just crazy, lol

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552757

Review of "Thoughts"

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Rated: E

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Hello CAW , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this itsm is written in paragraph form.

Theme: Dreams vs reality

Flow: this item flowed very well and the grammar was correct as was the spelling.

punctuation: The punctuation was also correct to the best of my knowledge.

tone: the tone was regretful

Title: the title, "thoughts", was appropriate and worked well for this poem.

Suggestions: I thought that this was a very well-written piece of writing You should be pleased with the outcome of this one.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552748

Review of Trust in Gems: The Critics’ Choice

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is structured using three quatrains for a total of twelve lines.

Theme: The theme is Sports showcase great athletic prowess, but politics are just scary and ugly

Flow: The flow is good as is the grammar.

punctuation: the punctuation seems correct to me I believe.

tone: the tone is strong

Title: The title is, Trust in Gems: The Critics Choice, " . I thought that the title was a bit to long..;. I would choose either "Trust in Gems"
orf The Critics Choice", but I would not combine the two. but that's just my opinion.

Suggestions: I thought the poem was well=written and interesting,

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552744

Review of The PBA’s Slam: So Filled with Jewels

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Rated: E

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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you have created this item using four quatrains

Theme: A tribute to Jason Belmonte, the PBA star

Flow: the flow of this poem was very good and it had a good rhythm. The rhymes were also very well done.

punctuation: the punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge

tone: the tone was upbeat.

Title: The title, " The PBA"S Slam:So filled with Jewels," I thought it was a bit long and complicated,,, something simple would have worked better.

Suggestions: This was a well-written piece of poetry, I thought you did a fantastic job.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552547

Review of What About Now

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Rated: E

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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is structured using three sestets and a cinuain.

Theme: the theme is heartbreak and surviving afterward.

Flow: the flow was very good with a touch of rhyme and some rhythm.

punctuation: the pu nctuation is correct as is the grammar.

tone: the tone is surviving sadness

Title: "what about now", which makes you question now what do I do?

Suggestions: There were no mistakes and I thought that this was a well written thoughtful and emotional piece of poetry.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552546

Review of Effective VS Affective

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Rated: E

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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item contained two tercets,

Theme: the theme was the difference between effective and affective

Flow: the flow was great and the grammar appropriate

punctuation: the punctuation is correct

tone: the tone is educational

Title: the title, "Effective vs Affective

Suggestions: this was a good grammar lesson and an important one,
many people make the mistake of confusing the definition of the two.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552544

Review of FREEDOM—a ghazal

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Rated: E

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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this item is A ghazal, which consists of couplets having a well- defined rhyming pattern and, often, refrain.

Theme: this was about freedom of thought and expression

Flow: I thought that it flowed well,

punctuation: the punctuation is correct and well done.

tone: the tone is stern

Title: the title, "FREEDOM--a ghazal", screams out for freedom and lets the reader know what the tone of the poem will be. and it also carries with it the form of poetry this is.

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Suggestions: I thought that this was a well written and talented piece of poetry, you did a great job sharing your feelings.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552481

Review of Purple Dawn

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Rated: E

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Hello {suser:(tattsnteeth2}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you structured this item using a quatrain, two cinquains, and a tercet.

Theme: Memories

Flow: the item flows well and has a nice rhythm.

punctuation: the punctuation is correct I believe.

tone: this was smooth and free

Title: the title, "the purple dawn", is very good and appropriate.

Suggestions: you did a very good job creating this well-written
piece of writing.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552328

Review of Springtime Writing

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Rated: E

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure:ove Otto a 9-line poem with 8 syllables per line and a rhyme scheme of a, a, c, b, b, c, d, d, c

Theme: started about springtime and then about writing,

Flow: it really didn't flow because it's only nine lines.

punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to me.

tone: the tone is fun

Title: The title is unique, "Springtime writing", this is appropriuate.

= Suggestions: I have changed ideas while writing before also.
it is a pretty cool poem.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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#4552325

Review of Pretty Fly (for a fat guy)

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

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Hello fat_hiker , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: you structured this item of writing using around nine stanzas of various lengths and a few single lines in between.

Theme: this is a parody of "Pretty Fly (for a white guy)", instead talking about a fat boy.

Flow: The flow was okay and it did a good rhythm, for the most part this was a fun piece of writing.

punctuation: I really did not notice much punctuation

tone: the tone was fun and free

Title: The title, "Pretty Fly (for a fat guy)

Image: I can envision an overweight man at the dinner table, stuffing his face.

Suggestions: I thought that this was a nice parody, I never heard the song though so I can just guess what it might sound like.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of The Miracle of Love and Happiness

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hello Sharmelle's Expressions , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

Structure: this poetry was created and structured using four long

quatrains, or stanzas with four lines each.

Theme: the theme is love and how it spreads and how happy it can make one feel.

Flow: The item flowed well and I thought that it was very creative and beautiful.

punctuation: The punctuation was correct to the best of my knoweledge.

tone: the tone was happy and loving.

Title: The title, "The Miracle of Love and Happiness", is very appropriate for this piece of writing.

Suggestions: I thought that this wa an upbeat and sweet piece of writing, you show a lot of talent and you show a special ability to make one feel what you are saying.

Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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