Hello annamc, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: you structured this piece of writing using nine lines which most of them contain an internal rhyme or two.
Theme: theme was your thouyght on a horse I believe in the chilly winter weather, I didn't theing the entire theme was really clear.
Flow: The item flowed well with good grammar snd spelling.
punctuation: the punctuation was correct I believe.
tone: the tone was also not clear.
Title: the title, "Snowy Cold Rain," is appropriate for the item.
Suggestions: I thought you did a good job but I think you could add a line or two and don't worry so much about the rhn\yming it seems to interfere with the clarity of the poem.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello {suserthis afternoon:pantherrose}, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary I do so ho0pe that you are having a very blessed day today, The title is good and appropriate for the itej. but I take issue with them killing God., it is not possible, so I just want to inform you that it iw impossible to murder God He just can not be killed it is not plausible.
this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello whiterainlbow, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary I do so hope that you have a wonderfully happy account Anniversary today.
The title of the writing of this item is called,"I Am", it is an appropriate piece of writing. I thought this was a very telling piece of poetry.
The item description is also very helpful to the pie
thank you for sharing the item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello IMarie9008 : }, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , I do so hope that ypi have a wonderfully blessed day today.
This was a sad poem, about our mon=ther, I could not stand it if my mom were not in my life, she is myU best friend.
I love her so very much. I thought that your l3etter was a very well written letter highly emotionally charged.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello {suser011:leannj}, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful afternoon. I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today, You have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since October 2, 2011, that is about nine years with us. We are glad to have you. I think the title, ""Epiphany", is appropriate for this particular piece of writing.I also think that the item description is helpful to the readers if this item, This item is very well written and is showing a lot of your emotions.
AS your writing is highly emotionally charged on this day.
I think that you are showing a lot of talent. this is a wonderfuo puiece oif wreiutriunfg
thank you for sharing tfdhis item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You and your family during thyiws trying time.
We are all in thias together p all we can do is pray to God to release us from this virus.
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Hello happyartust, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this beautiful afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a very blessed day today., Today you have been a valuable member of the writing.com family for ten wonderful years. We are ao happy to have you with us. This item that you wrote for us is a very nicely written piece. Your poem was very unique and I enjoyed reading it very much. I felt as if the title, "Broken Glass", is very creative as well as being very appropriate for the item. and in addition to that, the item description was also very helpful to the reader of this item. You show a good poetic quality to allo of tyour work and I think you are a very talented poet.
keep up the good work.
I thought the piece was well rounded and I really did like it. Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello BIG BAD WOLF Happy July 4th!, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning. I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today.
I thought this was a neat looking item. The title is appropriate for the item. and the item description is okay. Your writing is good using a list to describe all of the different food that will be shared during a Thanksgiving meal. The poem was a fair attempt at writing poetry. you used a lot of poetic devices to write this piece of poetry. The assonance was used but there was no alliteration in this particular piece of writing. I also noticed no rhyme. Its rhythm was also very nonexistent. but it was still a very well-written piece of poetry and I enjoyed it tremendously. I love Thanksgiving, my favorite part of it is the great company we share with our family.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello CrystalPrater, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this =evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. aa id Ixrivwe 2, 2005, you have been a valuable member of the writing.com family for fifteen years, wow that is a milestone/ I can really relate to your writing, this is a poem about growing older, unfortunately, many of us can relate to this poem. I personally feel that getting older is painful, I have arthritis and it is a very painful disease suffered by many older adults. There are also many other conditions suffered by people as we age. forgetfulness, diabetes for many, and so on. One notable disease is dementia, depression, and sorry to say neglect and abuse of the elderly, it happens more often than many people think. I think you have a very nice writing style and the item you wrote shows how quickly life goes by.
I thank you for sharing your talent with us all here at writing.com, you keep writing and I'll keep on reading, God Bless You. and have fun with your writing.
Hello Dr M C Gupta, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: the item is structured using three quatrains and a couplet you have created a sonnet.
Theme: talking about making amends and living the straight and good.
Flow: the item flowed alright, the grammar was okay as was the spelling.
punctuation: punctuation was correct.
tone: the tone is eratic
Title: the title, "Amends: a sonnet" is appropriate for the item,
I do not think that you need to write sonnet as part of the title, it takes away from the item.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a nice story-poem, but I have to say I did have a little bit hard time following it. The grammar and spelling all seemed good. The title was appropriate for the item.
Suggestions: I would suggest that you read this story poem
out loud to yourself and see what you think about it.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
Hello {suser:(soledad_moon}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: The item is structured using ten lines.
Theme: the theme is describing bubble gum.
Flow: The item flowed well with good grammar and spelling.
punctuation: The punctuation is correct.
tone: the tone is delicious.
Title: "Chew on this" is a very clever title and it's appropriate for the item.
Suggestions: I enjoyed your look at chewing bubble gum.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello elmoustafi, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item is written n paragraph form.
Theme: the theme is self-improvement
Flow: I thought the item flowed well and was delightful
punctuation: the punctuation was okay.
tone: the tone was upbeat I believe.
Title: The title was, "What I feel angry about" and it is appropriate for this work.
Suggestions: I saw one small mistake with your work
But now I have learnt my lesson and I hold my self accountable for everything.
The word is pronounced learned with an (ed) not a (t), but that's fine it's just a small mistake, we all make them.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello fyn, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item was structured using seven stanzas
Theme: The theme was a birthday castle which in the end would flush lol.
Flow: The item flowed well and had good grammar and spelling
punctuation: the punctuation is also correct,
tone: the tone was light
Title: The title,"Prompt Sept,6," I believe a better title is in order for such a good poem. something like "The unintended Castle," or something perhaps a bit better that you could come up with. really would add to the item.
Image: I can just vision your castle.
Suggestions: this is a really cute piece of writing. If you would like you could enter something like this in my contest
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Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
Hello Redtowrite, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: you created this item using nine quatrains
Theme: the theme is how we forget the elderly I believe.
Flow: the item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were good.
punctuation: thre was correct.
tone: the tone was sad for me
the Title: the title, "An Amazing Birdcage," is so good and appropriate it is sort of a metaphor isn't it.
v Image: It brings to my mind very clear pictures of the people I used to care for when I was in training to be a nurse.
Suggestions: I was really saddened by your poem but that is good maybe it will cause more people to remember about these dearest of people. This poem was beautiful and needed to be said.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello TheBusmanPoet, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item is structured using seven lines
Theme: the theme is the cat eventually learns it can't catch the dot
Flow: the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were good.
punctuation: the punctuation is correct.
tone: the tone is coming of wisdom smooth laid back
Title: The title, "Realization," is appropriate for the item.
the Image: the image that is brought forth is of a kitten chasing a lite..
=t Suggestions: This is so cute and true, my dog licks and paws at the cursor on my computer.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Jabberwb, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item was structured using eight couplets.
Theme: Look Out for Rock City or Ruby Falls.
Flow: the item flows well with good grammar and spelling.
punctuation: the puntuation is correct
Title: The Title, "Ruby Falls % Rock City," is appropriate and really caught my attention, as I traveled my whole life between Biloxi, Mississippi, and Harlan, Kentucky, and I knew I was getting close to Kentucky when I saw all those barn signs. Lookout Mountain Next Right or what have you.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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