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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using about nine lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this poem is your sacred place

*Moon* Flow: I thought this item flowed well. The spelling and grammar were both good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation were okay

*Sun* tone: the tone is smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title, " In my sacred place," is appropriate for this item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a very pretty poem. I truly liked it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Closing in  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Amber , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure:
this item was structured using long verse

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Feeling as if the walls are closing in on you.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed well with good grammar and spelling

*Exclaim* punctuation: There was no punctuation used in this poem, which is okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone is sort of depressed

*Strawberry* Title: Thetitle, "Closing IN" , is appropriate for the item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Odessa Molinari , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: a few lines of writing,, to describe a beautiful location.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The Travelog for Bard's Hall


*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and it sounded like a dreamy albeit expensive place to visit.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone was prideful
*Strawberry* Title: The title"L'albergo Rigoletto," is a good title for this item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: It really sounds as if you are advertising for the place, which there is nothing wrong with that, We like what we like.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Bonnie and Clyde  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



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Hello Elaine Pitts , You requested that I give you a review of this item, "Bonnie and Clyde", I thought it was well written,

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it is about ti ill-fated
lovers, who robbed and killed together. A pair who were infamous.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well and it had good grammar and spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: the tone was loving and smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Bonnie and Clyde," is predictable but works well with this item. I thought you did a fantastic job and I would like to tell you if you like to write story poems like this one you could enter
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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Antithetical Jottings by RenownPoet/ House akuve abd a snoopy moon

*Poseyp*Author: Brian K Compton

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought, as usual, you entered a really good read. I enjoyed your little poem and I thought the story value was good and clear. It was a nice and comfortable feel to it,

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I thought the grammar and spelling were okay and it was well rounded.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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for entry "Puns of the Year" 
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello sinbad, I came across this item on the newsfeed page and thought it was so true and so funny. You came up with some really good ones. I can't really say which pun I liked the best I did like the one about the alcohol on your hands and your liver. it was pretty funny. I know that I have washed my hands so much that they look like a dries old raisin or something.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello webtoot, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using ten stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: meek-keepers' miracle

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and had good spelling and grammar.


*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation looked correct to me.

*Sun* tone: outstanding

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Miracle of the Meek-keepers," is appropriate for the item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: There were no mistakes that I could find. You did a very nice job creating this item.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Nearly An Angel  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: You structured this item using six stanzas.


*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is the love you have for your daughter.


*Moon* Flow: I thought this item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were both good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay as well.


*Sun* tone: the tone is very loving.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Nearly an Angel," is appropriate for this item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: This item was very
well written and I enjoyed reading it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Mary Had a little lamb

*Poseyp*Author: weisblaize

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. Hey I also entered that Mary had a little lamb contest, that was a lot of fun. It was hard coming up with something dark to say. I liked your poem it kept to the prompt well. And it also followed all the rules.
*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did see a couple of tiny mistakes... first:

And told it all her woo,

it should read "...and told it all her woes
The next two I don't know if they are errors or if you are just purposely misspelling the words for some reason. Jezus' is Jesus and non is Nun. but all in all, you did a really good job.
*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.5)



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Hello Laurie Razor , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using only three lines , like a Haiku.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: It had a hard tune to understand.
. "Blind, Explore, Distraacr
*Moon* Flow: there was no flow to it.

*Exclaim* punctuation: there was no punctuation.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, the title was appropriate fir this poem
I would not use these colors it makes it hard to read I think.



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Review of Only Now a Tiara  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Don Two , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This is a sonnet of fourteen lines only one verse long.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Finding something precious after ten years.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this poem flowed very well, I enjoyed reading it and the grammar and spelling were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to the best of my knowledge the punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: loving is the tone.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Only Now a Tiara," is appropriate for this poem.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this sonnet was well written and good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you have structured this item using seven quatrains

*Butterfly2r* Theme:A worthwhile day in American History- spending spree

*Moon* Flow: Your poem flowed well, with good rhyme, and rhythm. The grammar and spelling were both up to par.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "An American Idiocy: Tender and Sweet", I believe the title is a bit long, I think I might leave off the ":Tender and Sweet" part.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: just try to shorten the title a bit, otherwise this is an excellent poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of What If?  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Sum1 Is Home! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: your poem is structured using six stanzas. aabbccdd etc.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is what if things were different would we have love.


*Moon* Flow: I thought that your item flowed really well, the rhyme was good, and the grammar and spelling were also good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: the tone is inquizitive.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "What If?, " is perfect and appropriate for the piece.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions because I did not see any mistakes.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Crayons10* Structure: The structure of this item is four quatrains.

• Written in abcb, 8-6-8-6 forma



{:moon} Flow: I thought the item flowed okay and the grammar was fine. the rhythm is good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation looked okay to me

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Slice of Pain: award winner"
I personally think is too much. "Slice of Pain" by itself would have been more than enough, the "award winner" just makes it look like you are tooting your own horn.
and in my opinion, is not needed.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: just leave off the "award winner" and it will improve your work. you can add that to the bottom of the page in an author's note.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello kimbro1, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure of this review is just perfect, it is easy to read and it is complete.

*Butterfly2r* ThemeL this is a self-review of Dare+Double-Dare= Fire.

*Moon* Flow: This really doesn't count in a review of this sort.

*Exclaim* punctuation: Used properly, as was spelling, and grammar
I thought that this was a thorough and good review. I did think that the title was a little bit longer and makes you stumble when reading.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Dirty Laundry  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Hera , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: written using only one verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is dirty laundry

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed well and the grammar was correct as was the spelling.


*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is also correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: subtle.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Dirty Laundry", is appropriate for this item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a well-written piece of poetry, I know that it is some form, but I can't recall which one it is.



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Broken heart  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This piece of poetry is structured using three quatrains and a couplet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is that your wife left you with a broken heart.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were correct.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I guess the punctuation is correct, I am not much at that.

*Sun* tone: the tone is sad

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Broken Heart," is appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: This is a sad poem and I wish you well, I hope you find a new person who will treat you well, as you deserve to be treated.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: You have created this poem using eight quatrains...


*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this poem is love
and how we treasure it.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed really well and the grammar and spelling were both correct.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was equally correct I believe.
*Sun* tone:

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Love holds many Truths," is appropriate for this item..



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a well-written piece of poetry.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Aubrey's Play , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: You created two stanzas in this poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is that we are never alone.

*Moon* Flow: ought that the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: You chose with this poem not to use puctuation, which is okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone is soft and even.
*Strawberry* Title: The title, " You Never Walk Alone," is appropriate for this item.




*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you did a good job creating this little poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Dear Old Santa  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Jatog the Green , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is a villanelle, one of the few poetry forms I recognize at first sight, with the repeatin g lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this item is Santa in the street to meet the kids.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the poem flowed very well and the grammar and spelling were all good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seemed correct as well.

*Sun* tone: the tone was upbeat

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Dear Old Santa," was appropriate for the item.

*Dragonflyp* Image: the little Santa image was cool.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a well put together poem, I really enjoyed reading it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Muse on Steroids  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello fyn , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

n, *Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this item was poetry
the grammar and punctuation, spelling were all good. the language is very descriptive
*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing

it kind of made me feel , the way you described it in such terms.
You seem to have a lot of talent and it shows well. I liked your poem, even if it was kind of gross. I guess it is to each his own ...

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Halloween  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello D.B. , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using just one small verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this well-written poem is Halloween

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were perfect.

*Sun* tone: the tone was smooth

*Strawberry* Title: nthe title, "Halloween," is appropriate for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: You made me feel as if I were out on Halloween night good work showing and not telling about the sights and sounds of Halloween.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of They Come  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.5)



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Hello Sox and Sandals }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using one verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this poem is about the Reaper coming.

*Moon* Flow: I thought your poem flowed well and had proper grammar and good spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was not used in this poem, which is just fine.

*Sun* tone: the tone is anxious

*Strawberry* Title: The title of this poem, "They Come," is an appropriate title for the piece.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I didn't see any mistakes, This is a good poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Party Central is a place where you can go to find some trinkets and to find a lot of merit badges and is a fun place where you can find contests. and new things. There are plenty of games and contests. there you can find a day by day schedule for fun. I think this was a perfect idea to have such a place for us to go, I just love this site!

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Review of Me and only me  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser:(elexislafay}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do hope that you are having a blessed day.
This item, "Me and only me," is a very well written piece of poetry. I really enjoyed reading it. I think it shows that you take pride in yourself and have confidence in yourself... You are not cocky just have a good dose of self-esteem.
that is a great way to be. Me, I am just the opposite, I feel no matter what I do I can never measure up in anything. Your writing is excellent and I think you should be pleased with that.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: the only suggestion I have is in the item description you need to capitalize the pronoun I.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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