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Review of MOM  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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This is an informal review I am writing to you because I want to share with you our similarities. I too am best friends with my mom, I love her more than life. She taught us well and we also had God as the center point of our lives. I like that you wrote this story which was inspired by a hard-working, loving, Mom. I think your writing was straight from your heart, which is the best and most interesting writing there is, if you ask me. I saw a few little type o's here and there, but they were so insignificant that I didn't even take not of them. mostly it was a dropped letter at the end of a word. a quick read through by you and you should be able to catch it easily and repair it.
I love your writing and think you need to write more things from your heart.
Thank you so kindly for sharing this item with me. it was wonderful.


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Review of Triolet poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is structured where you have a definition as well as a history of the form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this is a history of the triolet form of poetry.



*Exclaim* punctuation:the punctuation seemed to be correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone was educational I guess you would say.

*Strawberry* Title: the title was appropriate as it is what the entire thing was about.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think you did a good job introducing this form to readers who might not know anything about it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers Open in new Window. (E)
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#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review of Raw and Easy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: I don't see how you create this pattern with your poetry, it does make it easy to read though.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it is a poem in general about your life and purpose.

*Moon* Flow: I thought, because of the way that it is written, it comes off sounding a bit choppy.

*Exclaim* punctuation: as usual you use no punctuation, which is just fine in poetry.


*Strawberry* Title: the title is a bit unusual, but it works with the unusual poem.

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of I WOULD RATHER  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello bLackSphere77 Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This was written and structured in one verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it was an unrhymed piece very inquisitive.

*Moon* Flow: It flowed well with no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation, for the most part, looked to be okay to me.

*Sun* tone: again it was an inquisitive tone to the poem.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is very appropriate for the item.

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*StarfishB* Suggestions: I noticed the following:

I would rather be the prisoner than the caprurer

I see that both times you misspell the word captor,, also in the last few sentences you need to double check the punctuation. I am not sure about it. Just check it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers Open in new Window. (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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*Think* Structure: this poem is structured using tercets and couplets

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is happiness or lack there of.

*Moon* Flow: I felt it flowed well without any unnecessary stops or pauses,

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seemed to be correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone was soft empathetic, if that is such a tone,

*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate as it is what the poem is about.

*Dragonflyp* Image: it brings to mind the sad things that can happen in one's life.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I that you did a very good job creating this poem it was very well written.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



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Hello Rhyssa Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: There is a structure of three, six-line stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it is about plot bunnies and how painful they are

*Moon* Flow: The poem flows very well has a pretty good rhythm and good rhyme as well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: it is a smoothly written poem, has a witty bit to it I felt.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate for the item. as it is what the
item was about.

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*StarfishB* Suggestions: I really have no suggestions for you because I didn't really see any mistakes.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers Open in new Window. (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review of Nature's kiss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Onenessinall Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is structured using twelve lines in a sequence of two each.pairs

*Butterfly2r* Theme: remembering a kiss from a lover but it is just the jungle

*Moon* Flow: it flows well and uses many poetic devices,


*Exclaim* punctuation: you are not consistent in how you use the punctuation throughout the poem. some lines you use it and some you do not.

*Sun* tone: It has a smooth tone,kind of witty I thought.

*Strawberry* Title: liked the title and I found it to be very appropriate for the writing.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision you in the lush jungle and a snail on you.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I would suggest that you always capitalize the pronoun I
throughout your poem. and that you be more consistent on the punctuation.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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Review of Alas, my lass!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



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Hello ,Ben Langhinrichs Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure is three four-line with one being a quintet lines stanza. I think you did a good job with this.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The end for her, was the end for him as well.


*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well without any awkward pauses anywhere.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was spot on.

*Sun* tone: the tone was even

*Strawberry* Title: The title was a lay on words, which I liked.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I think this brings out a lot of imaging in my mind

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers Open in new Window. (E)
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#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello 💙 Carly: poems & novel Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This was a very brief little piece of writing containing
only two stanzas or qautrains, but it is a powerful personilization piece.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This poem was written for day 12 of the birthday bash contest. it is a personal insiration for the writer's life.

*Moon* Flow: This poetry flowed swell without any unusual stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: This particular poem was written without the use of punctuation, which so many are written this way.

*sunp* tone: I feel like the tone of this poem come across as being proud and strong...

*Strawberry* Title: "architect of my own design", this is an appropriate title for this poem, it shows that you are in control of your own life and you create what happens in your life.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I see you as a strong and independent person who doesn't need anyone but self.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: you have good self-esteem and it shows in your writing.
your writing is good and strong.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review of Forget-Me-Nots?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)



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Hello Soldier_Mike Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: it is structured as a very short story. or a conversation.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: choking on a donut was the theme of the item and how flowers do not always help when you are forgetful.
"The title, "forget-me-nots?" is a clever play on words.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision some forget-me-not flowers in a vase near a donut on a saucer which you choke on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes, you did a good job creating this flash fiction.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers Open in new Window. (E)
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#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review of My Own Sins  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure is like that of all of your work very few words per line, leaving many lines in tow.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is of a man who is contemplating paying for his sins with hell. I think

*Moon* Flow: this flowed from word one until last word

*Exclaim* punctuation: I do not know about the punctuation, I don't recall seeing any of the punctuation used in this item. which is fine. it was consistent.

*Sun* tone: as usual it was depressing and dark in tone.

*Strawberry* Title: The title "My Own Sins", speaks to what the entire poem was about. It is about your sinfulness. This brings all of your poems to my mind as they are all similar.



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers Open in new Window. (E)
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#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review of Faceless Lies  Open in new Window.
Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: Your structure is one long verse and it is laid out into a design sort of.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: trying to escape a fate that's not your own

*Moon* Flow: very good flow with no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is not formal, there are some but for the most part there is not.

*Sun* tone: the tone is sort of dark or at least I felt it was

*Strawberry* Title: The title "Faceless Lies", is very good and appropriate I really thought it was good and original.

*Dragonflyp* Image: this is sort of a depressive type of poem, that is what it brings to my mind, someone who is trapped and wants out.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: You did a good job creating this item. It is original, but the format is so much like all of your other pieces of writing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers Open in new Window. (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review of Last Lunch  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item has five stanzas with no certain number of lines per stanza.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is of a last meal

*Moon* Flow: there is no unnecessary stops or pauses in the item

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be consistent and correctly done.

*Sun* tone: the overall tone of the poem came off as a bit dark to me.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate for this particular poem. it is what the whole poem is about really.


*Dragonflyp* Image: the image brought to my mind is one of a person eating poison in his or her lunch.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you wrote a good little story poem and
it was easy to follow.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers Open in new Window. (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review of April Winds  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure of this item is A Cameo , an unrhymed 7-line poem

*Butterfly2r* Theme: An April Day in Las Vegas with winds and all.

*Moon* Flow: there was hardly any flow to the item, as it was so brief.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am the world's worst with punctuation so you might ask someone else about that, as far as I know, you did it correctly.

*Sun* tone: I thought that this item was very smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title of the item was perfect as it was what the poem was all about. It was very appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: to me it brings to mind a brisk breeze blowing and tossing stuff around.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This is a well written poem and I think you picked the perfect form in which to write it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers Open in new Window. (E)
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#2200209 by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon

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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Hello Tim Chiu Author Icon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Author Icon. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
This is a poem written to show how you are feeling good about an unknown future.
or at least that is what I think it is about. I think that the title is very appropriate for the item and I also think that the item description is helpful for the reader.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


 
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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Hello Brenpoet Author Icon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Author Icon. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I loved this beautiful piece of writing, though I love all things that are written about my Jesus and those who have faith in Him. He has saved me so many times in so many ways. heart, soul, and health He has saved me. I was nothing and in me He created something, I had no talent but through me He chose I should write.
I love Jesus.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


 
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Review by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

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Hello Jaiam Author Icon, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: I see that you use four quatrains followed by a single line.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: I loved the theme, It is about God and how through Him all things are possible. You have to love Gods, but if He doesn't answer your prayer the way you want Him to don't stop believing in Him, He knows what's best for us.

*Moon* Flow: there were no interruptions in the flow of the poem.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am the world's worst at punctuation but it looks to me like you did very well.

*Sun* tone: The tone of the poem seems to me that it was written with love and strong emotion and faith.

*Strawberry* Title: The title says it all, it is so very important and it is the message of the whole poem. it is very appropriate for the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: if I close my eyes I see an angel helping Jesus. I don't know why but I just do.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a beautiful piece of writing and if I could I would give it 5 stars.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Rated: E | (4.5)



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*Poseyp*Title: Season's Greetings (Part One)

*Poseyp*Author: Logan Author Icon
*Poseyp*Type: poetry
*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: hello stipey, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
This poem tells a story, which I really like. Story Poems are very enchanting I believe. I came across this little piece of writing on writing.com's read and review items list this afternoon. you have a good start with part one of this little story poem.
*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:

And up there in the starlit sky
Santa’s sleigh soars true
Through the wind and rain it flies
The deer pull it through


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I saw no mistakes.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Lisa Ann Noe
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Review of Winter Feelings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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*Poseyp*Title: winter feelings

*Poseyp*Author: jubshaw Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem, I came across this piece of writing on writing.com's read and review items piece. I hate winter as well, I think the cold damp weather hurts my bones very badly. I also think the dreary days are very depressing. You really did capture the death of winter. The kind of spooky feelings that come along with the damned season. Of course, I guess we all need a season of rest,

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Oh, winter will you last so long
With dreary rain and colder mist
Oh, how I wish that you were gone
And Spring would put on me it's kiss


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I have no suggestions you captured it just fine.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Rated: E | (4.5)


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*Poseyp*Title: The Holy Spirit is the Power of God

*Poseyp*Author: REV DR OLSESKI,JR Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
I usually would tell you that your message is too brief but in this circumstance, I believe you have written volumes of words with one simple line. I love it!

*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:
God used his great power to create the heaven, the earth, men, and beats.

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*Poseyp*Suggestions: I am afraid in your haste you left out the s in beasts.
I f.und your writing to be of the utmost importance for people to read.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me, I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of A Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



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*Poseyp*Title: A Dream

*Poseyp*Author: Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poet

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello prosperous Snow, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list.
I really enjoyed this piece of writing, it reminds me that one day my Jesus will be back and peace shall prevail throughout the world. I am a Christian and I believe this with all of my heart He will return and peace shall prevail.

*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:
Let us bid war adieu,
and hate eschew.
Peace the team!
No dream!



*Poseyp*Suggestions: I have no suggestions for your writing as it is beautiful.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me, I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of Prologue: Entry 1  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)



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*Poseyp*Title: Prologue;Entry1

*Poseyp*Author: Championrqr Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Prologue

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your item today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent writer.
I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list.
I thought that you did a fantastic job describing a creature that we have never seen before. It also seems to be very unusual and unique in its appearance. I
think you are showing great promise as a writer of science fiction.

*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:
The creatures are designed to scare off their prey so they can take what the prey had but are frightened at the slightest sign of danger.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you at this point.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me, I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of Floridian Evil  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



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*Poseyp*Title: Floridian Evil

*Poseyp*Author: Stik to My Own Beat Author Icon

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list this afternoon. This is a neat and unusual piece very well and probably pretty difficult to write.
The message is a bit insulting to tourists though, who help Florida's economy very well. I do like the way you spell out tourists at the end of each line of your poem.
That is a difficult thing to do and tskes talent to so it.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I just think you should be thankful for tourists, who keep everything lively.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me, appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Rated: E | (4.5)


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*Poseyp*Title: Speechless under the moon
*Poseyp*Author: Lou-Here By His Grace Author Icon
*Poseyp*Type: Poetry
*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet. I came across this item on the read and review items list. I thought that your writing was very sweet and romantic. I love New Orleans I used to visit there very often, it isa a very romantic city for sure.
*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:
Other tales today. I am thankful for memories.
No other thoughts can capture me like you.


*Poseyp*Suggestions: you might want to put the word the before memories, that is just a suggestion from Grammarly.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Rated: E | (4.5)



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*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
*Pawprints**Pawprints**Poseyp*First Impression: I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet. I came across this little piece on writing.com's read and review item's list. I thought the title was a very good idea and it fits well with the poem. I also think that the item description is very helpful and that you met the requirements of the prompt below:

*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:
“The confidentiality sphere encapsulates every candidate.”


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I thought that you wrote a very coherent and simple poem for all of us to read and enjoy. and you met the prompt very well

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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