Hello noahwayy I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our December Winter raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I do hope you will live, make the choice of life over death, Choose Jesus and He can lead you in the right direction before I found Him I tried to overdose and He saved me in more ways than one. I love Him freely and He also loves me and He loves you too, just ask Him to come into your life and forgive you and He will.
I thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello THANKFUL SONALI Looks Ahead I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our December Winter raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I thought that this piece of writing was just splendid. you are a good writer. I think that the title is very appropriate for this item. You also did a good job on the item description, as it describes the item very well. you did a great job creating this item.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello fatiha2 I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our December Winter raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
The title of this piece of writing is just perfect for it, it is so appropriate. I think although the item explains itself, it still needs to have a item description which can explain or describe what the writing is about. I am a neat freak myself and I can't stand it when something gets out of place.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Mritika Oneshi I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our December Winter raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this is a very sad piece of writing. It made tears well in my eyes as I read the words. I still, gratefully, have my mom but I would surely die without her. I think you wrote a ghostly beautiful poem for your mom. I did see a few mistakes with it...
for instance, you don't have to say for every time in each sentence so I would remove that If I were you. Also in the following sentences :
wish to have your warmth hands on my head once again,
So that i can forget everything and sleep for once again.
Dear Mom..
I wish so badly to go where are you now right now,
but you didnt raise me to give up even no one with me now.
first, it should be... warm hands...not warmth hands
then you should always capitalize the pronoun I.
you need an apostrophy between the n and t in didn't.
and as I said earlier remove the word for in ...for once again.
Hello Rhyssa I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our December Winter raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a pice that I came across on writing.com's read and review list and I found it to b e a well-written piece and I enjoyed reading it. you have good writing skills and I can see them in your writing. the title is appropriate for the item and the item description is helpful to the reader.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Lobelia is truly blessed I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our December Winter raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
What a tremendous statement you have made with this poem. I just adore what you have written, it has such a strong meaning. It is highly emotionally charged, the energy this poem shares is great... you have a great talent and you do well by sharing it with all of writing.com.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello sinbad I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our December Winter raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I can only dream of what it must have been like in the 1950's. I always wished that times were like that now, so different and so good. when neighbors were friends and the phone something not everybody had, and those who did were connected to a wall-jack. shootings in schools and churches were unheard of.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Hello THANKFUL SONALI Looks Ahead I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our December Winter raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was a sort of sad piece of writing, it sounds like you are really beating yourself up over making a choice to keep a maid. You should forgive yourself, forgiveness is what your grandma would want I bet. Most people would probably took advantage of having a maid, you didn't hurt someone on purpose. thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello x The T Lady x I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our December Winter raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This item is so adorably sweet, I just loved it. You captured my attention , my mind, and my imagination with your superb writing skills. I enjoyed this immensely.
I do so hope you have other writings which are as precious as this one is, as I said, I just love it.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
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Hello ZeeNe, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary snowy and cold evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed holiday season today. I see that today you have been a member of writing.com since December 3, 2008, which is about eleven years as a valuable member of our writing.com family. We are blessed to have you. I chose this title, "Unconditional Soul,'" because I am a Christian and I always read everything which is about the soul in anyway. I think that the title is very appropriate for the item which you wrote. I also think that the item description is very well written and describes what the poem is all about. I found this item to be very well written and also I found it to be very deep and emotionally struck. I think you show promise as a writer and I liked this piece.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello David Burke, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this snowy and cold evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed holiday season today. I chose to read the title " Yeti Man" because It is unusual and It is something that I have heard of my whole life. I don't know if big foot really exists but I sure have heard of him always. You have now been a valuable member since
December 3, 2008, which is about eleven years. That is great that you have been a member of our writing.com family for so long. I wander if the yeti cooler is named after the Yeti "Big Foot"? ya think! lol This is a very unusual subject on which to write a poem.; however, it is very cute and I think you have done a very nice job creating it. You created a funny little poem about a cooler and a yetti good work.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Kilee James , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this snowy and cold evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed holiday season today. As of Now You have been a valuable member of writing.com since December 3, 2011, that is about eight years. We are so happy to have you as a part of our writing.com family. I chose the Poem "disguise", because I thought that the title of the poem was just enchanting. It is an appropriate type of title for this item if you ask me dear.
I do believe that you need to write something more of a description of the poem where the item description goes... saying that " a poem that came to me." is not appropriate or helpful to the reader. You need to describe the poem to the best of your ability for the reader. The poem itself is well done and I think it is good.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello nysoul , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this snowy and cold evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed holiday season today for you and your family. I see that you have now been a valuable member of writing.com since December 3, 2012, which is about seven years, that is the same number of years that I have been a member of writing.com. I chose the title "one soul" because I am a Christian and I believe strongly in the soul and how it is the essence of who we are.
I do believe that the title is appropriate for the writing. I also think that you did a very fine job creating a nice and helpful item description, which will help the reader.
The subject is very nice and I liked the romance that is directly involved in the poem.
I give you a
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello lone wolf , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this snowy and cold evening, I do so hope that you have had a very blessed holiday season today my friend. I see that as of today, You have been a valuable member of writing.com for about nine years... since December 3, 2010, wow what a feat that is amazing and you are so welcome to be part of our writing.com family. I chose this title, "Today", because it was just very simple and interesting I thought. I think that the title is appropriate for the item and I equally think that the item description is helpful to the reader of the item. I think this is a very deep and interesting piece of writing. you show promise as a talented poet. The subject of the poem is very well chosen and you did a fine job creating this piece of writing. I give you a
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello idalca , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this wintry evening, I do so hope that you have had a very blessed holiday season this day........
I see that you have been a valuable member of writing.com since December 3, 2008, which is about eleven sweet years with us as a member of writing.com. I chose "At The Cross" to review because I am a Christian and I love my Lord Jesus, He is my Savior. This is a poem about the death and Resurrection of Jesus Christ. In your Item description of the poem you misspelled the word resurrection... as resurection... you left out an r in the center.
I would check that throughout the poem if I were you. The title is appropriate and well done. I liked the poem and I think you did a very fine job creating it and if I were you I'd do a quick edit of it for spelling.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Nessy ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you have a very blessed Holiday season for you and your family. You have now been a member of writing.com since December 3, 2010, that is nine years as a valuable member. I think this was a pretty cute little piece of writing. I really liked the title, it has spunk "Santas got "issues"". That is very appropriate for this piece of writing. I think you need to put an apostrophe after the a and before the s in Santa's in the title. I think also that you did a great job creating the item description for the item. It is helpful for the reader of the piece.
You make Santa seem like one cool dude but he seems like everyone else with problems and stuff. I liked what you wrote and I will give you
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello spacejammer ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a very blessed holiday season. You have now been a valuable member of writing.com since December 3, 2003, that is about sixteen years and I am amazed at such a long membership. I chose to read "Time" because it was just a simple little title and the subject was one I am curious about, as I love to know how people feel about how quickly time goes by. I really enjoyed reading your poem and I thought that you really did the subject justice. I feel as if time goes by so extremely fast and the older you get, the more quickly time moves. That is my opinion any way.
I did not see any mistakes with your poetry, I thought that your grammar was proper and the spelling was correct. You did a fantastic job with the poem.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello quitrider , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this snowy morning, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today. I don't know the first
thing about horses or their reins and stuff, but I think Horses are among the most beautiful of all of God's Creations. I think that you chose an unusual subject to write about.
However, that is just great, as it is not overdone you know. Your poem is very nicely written and intelligently created. I enjoyed reading it and I would certainly like to tell you it was worth the stop by. You have been a valuable member of writing.com since December second 2002, That is seventeen lovely years that you have spent with the writing.com family. Do you have many horses? that is a great inspiration, but to come up with the rein poem is very good. The title is appropriate for the item .
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Annie ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I hope that you have had a blessed day today and more in the future. I thought that this was an astonishing alphabet poem. You wrote it for an alphabet poetry contest, I do so hope you placed or won it. I noticed you have a big blue ribbon on the title.
This is an awesome little alphabet poem. The title is very well thought out and also it is very appropriate for the poem itself. I found that though the item description doesn't tell about the poem itself, it does tell that it was written for the alphabet poetry contest, round number ten. This is your fourteenth anniversary here at writing.com.
and you are a valuable member of writing.com and this review is your gift for tyour anniversary today December first. Your poem was excellent.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
Hello bob county, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. ahh!!! tiz the dirty ole mind of a dirty ole dude!...
lol....meant for those not taking life too seriously I suppose.
The title is appropriate and the item description is funny. You must surely have an awfully good sense of humor and I can appreciate that.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello SomaSilver, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I thought that the title of your poem was very appropriate for the poem, the subject matter is a popular one for readers and for writers. You did a good job creating this item, it was very nicely written. I liked your poem it had a little touch of sympathy to it ...
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Tim Chiu, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
Again we meet and I find that you have written very nice and well written poetry. I do so enjoy reading your writing. This is so good. I think that the title is appropriate for this item I feel as it this item is unique and a good subject which everyone can identify with.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Cynaemon , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I think you did a good job creating a laugh out loud moment for all of those science geeks out there, just joking science is so important. The title of your item is appropriate for the item and the item description tells that it was for the poem a day challenge in 2005.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello SomaSilver, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
Maybe you should play hard to get, it might work better>>> you never know. If this person is not texting you perhaps you should give him the cold shoulder. Nevertheless you don't need to beg someone to be your friend/lover, let them see how great you are and then let them chase after you...
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Hello fyn, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
You have captured the perfect winter scene with a pup and a couple, I feel as though I am there feeling the Ice pellets drop down on me and hearing a fire crackle and seeing a sweet dog curled up at his masters feet asleep. That is such good writing, you really show the scene and set it well.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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