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Hi Legendary❤️Mask Author Icon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I think your writing is very good it is nice to be inspired by another writer's writing. There is no telling where or what will inspire our own writing, I personally believe that it is a compliment to be inspired by another's words.
I think that your title is a good one and it works well with this writing. I as a professional writer, myself can identify with what you have said.
Thank you for sharing and God Bless You... have fun!
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Rated: E | (4.5)





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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
ThisThis is a piece of writing which I liked very well, I think you had fun writing this little poem, which is an absolutely delicious piece. The item description wasted no time letting you know who was the most important to the test. The two of them will waste time fooling around until the door closes and we're sad. The audience is always angry with the cast, even though it is' I recall driving down the road and passing out while driving, it made me wreck, as I hit a tree, it flipped my car over on its side.I was nearly killed. sorry for rambling but your poem, brings so much to my mind.
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Hello JM Jr. Author Icon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Author Icon. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I think that this was a well written piece of writing.
I was touched deeply by the words you used. It makes me wonder if this is a poem of a dying person or what? The title is good, The rhyme was perfect and the rhythm was also very good. You had all the right stuff to create a winning
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Hello Vanishing Vapor Author Icon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Author Icon. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I loved your story poem, it was really so very good. I enjoyed what you had to say about it. I hate that a cat came and ruined the boy's dream and killed the little rat, though I hate rats, the way you told the story it seemed more like a hamster or something cute like that. Your title was good and appropriate for the item. I can easily see how you won a contest with this piece of writing. It was so very good.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Hello Phantom Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful afternoon, you have been a valuable member of writing.com for eight years now. I thought that this was a very strange question for your poll.
I took it, I chose the Greek goddess and god robes. I was shocked that the most chose choice was to be nude, and then with a bathing suit.



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Hello Avid Writer ~ God is My Agent Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this beautiful October afternoon, you are celebrating your sixth anniversary today, congratulations. I enjoyed reading your little weather report nearing the spring of whenever you wrote the item. I see you were saying it was unseasonably warm for the winter. I do not know where you are from but in Kentucky of the USA, It is October 3, and is in the 90's still. I'll be glad when we get a break from the heat myself. Now that is unseasonably hot.
good writing.



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Hello IMarie9008 Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful October evening, this is your first anniversary so congratulations for being a valuable member of writing.com. I thought this was a very uniquely written poem. I liked the way you faded the font into a smaller and smaller size. you did a good job and I thought that the title was appropriate for the item.



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Hello Elliot Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful October Morning, Today is your three years anniversary. I read this item and I think you are probably having trouble dealing with an ex partner. That must be terrible, I can't imagine how horrible it must feel. Your poem was very explicit, I do think you went a bit far by taking the Lord's name in vein, we could have understood how upset you were by you just saying damn.



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Hello bertadez7138 , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine October evening, You have now been a member of writing.com since October 3, 2018, a full year, congratulations a milestone, your first.]
Your poem is about how a relationship can end over a partner assuming facts which you both have not discussed. Or that was my take on it anyway. The title is appropriate for the item and I get the item description as well. good writing.



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Hello Duke. Raoul Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine October Evening,
You have now been a valuable member of writing.com since October 2, 2017, for two sweet years. glad to have you. I found this little acrostic poem in your portfolio this evening and thought I would give it a read. I thought it was descriptive of what it was I guess, it was hard for me to follow or read. But I chose the subject so it is my fault I should have known by the title what it would be like. The title was appropriate for the writing. If I were you though, I would change what you wrote in the Item description and describe the poem. we all ready know that it is a poem so just say an acrostic about .....
and then follow by telling in your own words what your poem is about. I think you did a fine job creating this piece just go back and create a new item description.


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Hello Amar Author Icon,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this wonderful October evening, I see that you have now been a valuable member of writing.com for three short years, since October 2, 2016. Glad your with us.
The title is strong and very good and appropriate for the writing of this poetry.
Also, The item description is very helpful to the reader of your writing, which is very good because this is what makes a person decide whether they will continue on reading or not. I thought the poem spoke of great achievements and pride which is just wonderful, I don't like it when we feel underachieved. It is a sad feeling, don't you think? The thing that stood out to me the most is that you used the lower case of the pronoun I, you should always use the upper case when referring to yourself as I.



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Hello mike Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine October evening,
You have now been a valuable member of writing.com for three short years since October 2, 2016.
I came across this little poll in your portfolio, so I thought I would take it and see what it was all about. I am afraid to say I really did not get it--- It was confusing to me and I am sure to many others as well. I voted for magic, but to tell you the truth I don't know why? I don't know if I wanted it to be as large as a planet or as small as whatever--

Growing size

Greater than one city

More than one earth

Greater than a universe

Or greater

Shrink the size

How small you want

you got five votes for magic, which is 50%; three votes for pill, 30%; two votes for Laser remote control, 20%; Zero votes for laser Laser, zero votes for potion; with a total of ten votes, 100%
I really did not understand the poll even though I voted.




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Hello Muppetz Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine October evening,
I see that you have been a valuable member of writing.com since October 2, 2015 or for four years.
I enjoyed reading your writing, I love reading poetry, especially poetry that is about good vs. evil, and spiritual or religious type writings. I do have a question for you however in the following excerpt:


Aristrotel called it fate
Heaven and hell contend
Visceral and obstreperous
Yet grandiose
A celestial triumph I commend.

should the name you are speaking of be Aristotle instead of Aristrotel?
I'm really not too sure who you are speaking of, but if it is who I think it is you misspelled his name.
I think you should speak in more simple terms so that the general public can understand what you are talking about, the words you use are fine but most people would have to look up a few of these words.



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Hello sean_hayes,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this wonderfully beautiful October evening, I hope you are blessed today, You have been a valuable member of writing.com since October 2,2010, for nine short years. I read your stuff before and I have to say you are quite talented at writing beautiful and meaningful poetry. I really enjoyed reading this item although it was a very sad ending to the poem. Did I understand it correctly, did the man hear his own voice echo back at him and then get mad and jump from a high cliff into the deep ocean below? That is what I think you mean anyway. You should by all means feel proud enough to sign this piece it has a story and is very ingenious. I think that the title is very appropriate for the poetry and I liked it. I also think that the item description should contain a bit of information about the poem to entice your readers to keep reading.

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Hello Brittany L. Engels Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful October afternoon, I see that you have been a member of writing.com for ten short years, you are a valuable member of the site. I thought that this was a wonderfully delightful piece of writing, I really enjoyed it and loved it very much. I know these are strong words, what makes me like it is your inclusion of God in the creation of the poem. You give Him credit for being near always and the wind is His breath and the thunder His voice. I thought you showed much talent when you wrote this piece of work. I the title was excellent and very creative, it is appropriate for the item I also thought that the item description was also very creatively written. You really show so much promise, please keep writing as you do show such talent.



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Hello Saisri Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this beautiful October afternoon, I see that you have been a member of writing.com for about thirteen years or so You are a valuable member and I love your tribute to our soldiers, you have a few of these poems and they are all very pleasing to me. I am the daughter of a Vietnam Veteran and He served in the Air force for twenty-four years in addition. He died as a result of his service to his country. I am proud of him so I waste no opportunity to brag about him. He got agent orange and died in 1986, He was only 44. In my mind he should still be alive and with me, He would sure have much to say about the condition of our country today. He so loved this nation. Your poem is beautiful and I loved it. you did a fabulous job creating it, I think the title is perfect, it is a tribute to the soldiers.

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Hello Terri Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This beautiful October afternoon, you have been a valuable member of writing.com since 2006, which is, I think, thirteen years.
I'm not to good at counting so don't hold it against me if I miscounted. I found this to be a very valuable piece of literature, I would like for everyone to read this because there are so many who have, what society considers as "broken minds", Anyone who we consider to be a little different or to march to a different drum is considered odd or broken. actually that is not true. It takes a person who marches to a different drum to stand up and be heard, what if Dr. Martin Luther King had not marched to his own drum where would people be today. And what about those Pilgrims who stood up and said no more to a vicious and selfish King, where would all we Americans be right now. What about George Washington, They loved him and wanted to name him King of America but instead he said no we need a new system. so there are not always problems with those we society says is broken because if we march to their drum we work miracles.



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Hello cubert Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This beautiful October afternoon, I believe you have been a member of writing.com for about sixteen years today, congratulations! I really didn't know what to expect from your title of this item, I was so pleasantly surprised.
I really liked this piece of writing. You did a fantastic job creating this poem. I didn't see any mistakes in it at all. I especially liked the last stanza, It was my favorite. I thought from the title that you were going to try to describe the color, but instead you wrote a breath taking piece of writing that made me wish I had a touch of that talent. I do think if any improvement could be made, it would be with the item description. Perhaps tell us a little more about the poem, talk to us like we don't speak English and try to explain it in a very few words.
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I have to tell you how very lovely this item is, it read so emotional to me and I really just loved it. I think the Lord is always with us no matter where we may find
ourselves. I was taught that God is everywhere, He lives within me so I know he is always wherever I am. you are a gifted writer, as this is beautiful.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Hello keoshortstack, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Author Icon. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I did not exactly know how to take this particular piece of writing. The poem rhymed very well I found it to be both sad and comforting. The part that made me think twice was where you say you had a blade in hand.... It made me think you were going to do something desperate that you shouldn't. I did like the part where you say you will be on the roof and be hand and hand. That's a beautiful thought.


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Rated: E | (5.0)


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I really enjoyed the pros and cons of this wintery poem.. I love snowmen and snow angels, they are both so very fun to create I guess the pros. I love snowball fights with friends and warming by a blazing fire while drinking hot chocolate. But there are the cons as well. like slick roads, freezing temperatures, falling ice cycles,
and of course catching a cold and stuff. I thought you used great details with your writing. I look forward to the first snow of the winter right now.
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Rated: E | (3.5)


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Hello Xeno Author Icon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Author Icon. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I had a little bit of a hard time with this poem, I felt the tenses were off, I don't know if you're talking about the present or the past. I would suggest going back, reading this poem out loud and then deciding whether or not it needs some work.
The subject was great and the writing of the poem was good, but I just couldn't quite get over the tense of the poem. The title was appropriate for the item Fate is a good strong title. Just go back and work on the tense of it.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Author Icon. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I liked this little poem, it has great meaning. I like most things that come from one's faith. I am a very spiritual person and try to pattern my life in a good and decent manner, as I think the Lord would do. I am so far off right now, I hate to admit it, but it's true. But blessings come to those who believe in God, I know, to me, my blessings are my family. Your poem was terrific and I thought the title was perfect. I hope you really enjoyed participating in Lexi's Poetry Challenge.
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Hello patricia1962 Author Icon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Author Icon. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I enjoyed reading this poem, I thought that it was out of sight.
That was the only thing I saw wrong with this item. You wrote that it is a short story when it reads more like poetry. I don't guess it really matters. Unless someone tunes in to read a short story and is disappointed that it is poetry instead.
I think the title is good and it is appropriate for this item. The item description is also very helpful to the reader.
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Hello 💙 Carly: poems & novel Author Icon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Author Icon. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. Carly, I wonder what the dark shadow represents in your poem, is it a certain person, or evil in general? I liked the poem it has a serious almost spooky tone to it I thought. It made me feel uneasy as I read it, I expected something unholy to jump out from under the table and grab my legs or something. It is very good writing when you make someone feel your writing as they read it. well done*Thumbsup*


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