Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I found this piece of writing to be so interesting it is very telling about you. You are a very deep and contemplating person it seems to me. You seem to really ponder the situation of everything. I don't think you need to be poking sticks at God or the Devil for that matter, they may poke back one of these days.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello KÃ¥re Enga in Montana, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I really liked this piece of writing, This poem was really well written and I enjoyed reading it. I thought that the title was just perfect and also very appropriate for the poem. The Item description was very helpful in telling the reader what the poem was about. You did a very good job creating this piece.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
The title of this poem is very appropriate for what you have written in the poem. I feel deeply sorry for you and your problems, I hate to think that anyone feels alone and feels so broken beyond repair. I hope you know that God is on your side please do not dismiss Him, He is real and when you know Him your life will improve be following His words. It don't mean you will never have problems again but if He is in your life, life is easier.
Things go smoother. God loves you, all you have to do is call upon Him and He will save you from your hell. Your poem is sad, you are in my prayers.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello SomaSilver, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I think that this is a very nicely written and very fun poem to read. I love the hugs and cuddles part, it is so sweet I think. I like things that are personal touches like that. It shows your personality, which seems to me to be funloving and sweet. The poem is just adorable in my opinion. It is the type of writing that I would write and then share with my husband.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Tim Chiu, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I think as usual you have written a very constructive and blessed poem that I totally agree with. I have read much of your work and I can always depend on you bringing it forward. As you are a blessed and talented writer. The title is appropriate and the item description is so helpful to the reader. I love the poem.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Emily, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I thought that this listed a very complete list of everyone who has competed over the years and Previous thirty DBC Winners. The title was perfectly suitable for the list.
The item description is very complete and very helpful for the reader.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello SomaSilver, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I thought that the title was appropriate for the writing. I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader, as it tells it is about a girl's dream. I just wondered if the first line is correct, if you go back and read it I wondered it should be robe instead 0f rope. You did a good job as the subject was interesting and the ending was very nice questioning it...
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Hello Moarzjasac, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I thought that this was a profound and frightening little poem. If this writing doesn't wake people up then nothing will I'm afraid. I thought that your words were eloquent but scary and true, oh so true, unfortunately. I think this is an important subject matter to bring to light to our nation at this time.
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I think that you are a brilliant poet. your words are so beautiful and lustrous, perhaps that doesn't make a lot of sense, but I just think your writing is so very well done. you should be very pleased with yourself. I wish I could write such a wonderful description as you do. your writing is great.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Have a sunshiny day!, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. Wow-what a creative, interesting and fantastic piece of writing.
I really did enjoy reading this writing, it was so great, it was imaginative, and I liked the way you spoke of our freedom, we are all so very blessed to have that of course. you did such a good job
I love it.
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Hello blurtic , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. just great, your poem was super duper dear I loved the way you speak of the shoreline it makes it sound lovely.
ou sound like you and your partner really had a very nice time during your romp at the shore. I did not see any mistakes with any of your work, you did great.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
Hello Tim Chiu, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I've read your work many times, you are a great poet I believe. I take it that you like animals. I love them myself. people should be so intelligent as to get by with the knowledge that the animals have. I know my little dog is so smart that he knows when I am going to go somewhere even before I get ready to go.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Rhoswen - Relentless Victory, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
The title is excellent and I think it is also appropriate for the item. I think you need to write a more complete and descriptive item description for the item description area.
It is very important to have it to be helpful to the reader. I thought that the poem itself was well written and you did a good job of creating it.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
Santa was really surprised eh? by a few months. You did a good job creating this item.
The title was really excellent and very appropriate for the item. The item description was very helpful for the reader of the item. It is getting time to read all of the Santa Clause Stories.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
Hello Rhoswen - Relentless Victory, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
The title is appropriate for the item, It is well written the item description is helpful for the reader. It tells of what it feels like to be free. to be free is to no longer be a prisoner, it is such a well created item you should be very pleased with your progress.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
Hello Elisa: Middle Aged Stik, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
The title, "A Walk in the Park", is very appropriate for this item. The item description is very helpful for the item. The item is about a party or celebration for the fourth of July or Independence day, and how it did not turn out well it was lonely or miserable.
The writing was very well done and to the point.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
Hello T.L.Finch, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
September 11, 2001, is a day that will never be forgotten in the United States. So many lost their lives on American soil in New York's Twin Towers. It was a day that brings tears to the eyes of nearly all who was alive during this time. These Americans died for absolutely no reason may God Rest their Souls.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
Hello Jacky, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I came across this item in your portfolio and I saw the title "Pictures", I thought it was appropriate for the item. Pictures are some of my favorite things to do my favorite pastime is to look at photographs. I especially love to look at pictures of my dogs and cats. They are like my little babies. I don't have kids so my pets are my children or my fur babies.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. EVIL that is how you spell Trump...lol no I don't mean anything you did such a good job writing this wonderful piece of poetry about the wicked miser which is trump. I'm sorry but I have no respect for no one who spreads hate the way that man does. The News is not FAKE
He IS! You did a fabulous job though good going.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
Hello Austin, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
This is a very inspirational piece of work, I love prose and poetry of all types.
The title of this item is very appropriate for the writing. I really liked reading this.
I would suggest writing something of interest about the item in the item description location. It is very important to write about the item to get people to continue to read on.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello icreate , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine evening, You have now been a valuable member of writing.com since November, 1, 2018 , for all of a whole year, well that's great it's your first great milestone. we're glad to have you. I love the summer and I have to say that you really make it sound wonderful in this lovely poem which you wrote entitled "Summer". I don't think that you missed anything. You had the memories of ice-cream trucks, swimming pools, sprinklers all of it it is all just such great fun. I love lakes, going to the beach, taking my dog for a walk on the walking trail and everything. I will have to say though as much as I love the summer the Autumn is my favorite time of the year. The temperature is perfect the leaves are changing and colors are breathtaking.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Stone Fox , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this lovely evening, I see that you have been now a member of writing.com since November, 1,2015, which is four years and we are so happy to have you as a member with our family.
I came across this item in your portfolio and I thought that the title really stood out a lot to me. I think it is a unique and very appropriate title for this particular item.
The item description is pretty simple to understand : fall from the sky back to reality.
This is helpful to the reader of this poetry I think. I thought that this is a particularly different and unique piece of writing. Though it is a work of fantasy I believe. You seem to like to write about that which is different than the common day things. I think that is just wonderful. Keep writing using your imagination...
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello SweetPea , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, You have now been a member of writing.com since Nov.1.2007, thats twelve valuable years that you have been with us, we are blessed to have you. I am blessed to have had to wonderful loving parents, who loved and treated me very well. I never had to worry about abuse by them or divorce by them or anything. However a year ago I was robbed by a man who professed to be my friend, He said he would watch my home for me so no one would rob me while I was away in the Hospital for a while. when I got home, He had stolen everything I owned and destroyed my house including stealing the wiring. I went to the police and not one thing was done about it. They blamed me for allowing him to stay there. That is ridiculous. but it turned out that He is an informant for the police or what people around here call a drug rat,,, he informs on people to the police. so because of that they did nothing to him even though what he did was a crime against me.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello GhostDragon , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, You have now been a member of writing.com since November 1, 2006, wow that's thirteen years hon, you are doing great. I hope you are having a blessed day today.
I chose to read Four Seasons because I have a poem about the same thing/ just a different form. You did a good job describing each of the wonderful seasons of the year. summer and it's sweltering heat and high grass, fall or Autumn with it's cool temperatures damp weather and leaves blowing from the trees and changing beautiful colors. Winter with its snow, frigid temperatures, ice and Holidays, and shall we not forget Spring, and its budding trees and flowers, rains and winds.they are all so marvelous I think, I will have to say that my favorite one is the Autumn or fall I love the Brilliant foliage of the trees where I live in Appalachia. The colors of the mountains is magnificent.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
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Hello myood , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, You have now been a member of writing.com since Nov. 1, 2006, That is thirteen years, wow were is all of your writing dear? I was hoping this would be an essay or something but it was one line, telling me how boring your class was. I take it you don't do a lot of writing, because there wasn't a lot to choose from in your portfolio. Surely in an English class you have been assigned some poetry or essays. Perhaps even a research paper. What would be cool is to do a research paper and follow up by writing a book on a subject of your choice. I can't tell if you have talent or not because you haven't written enough for a determination. I am curious, why you are a member of writing.com when you do not write, perhaps you just like to read eh?
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