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This is a call to protest. I do protest this!!!I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I am sickened by this item I just read. I think it is Blasphemy and I hope people will not go and see this, I hope it is banned in America, though it will not be because of our bill of rights. I for one will not be seeing it and my theater will not be showing it in my home town because if they did, it would be the last movie they showed ever... they'd be shut down because people would refuse to go there. I live in the Bible belt of Kentucky and we will not stand for this.;....
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I came across this Traditional senryu on writing.com's read and review items list. I think You should create a new title for the item, it would be more appropriate than the form of poem it is. Also you should tell something about your poem in the item description location. The poem itself is well done and correct. I am with you, the air conditioner is the best invention.
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I came across this item on writing.com's read and review item list.
I thought the title was curious but very appropriate for the poem.
This was a very creative and imaginative piece of writing. If this was a contest entry I bet you got their attention. I thought the ending was sad though because you meet your end.
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I came across this item on writing.com's read and review item list.
This is an unusual and very sad story about your friend, I truly hate to hear of his sufferings. I'm so sorry for you both, it is hard on loved ones as well, as I know I've lost many to that nasty disease.
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I thought this was the most beautiful thought. I love the lake of healing waters of love. so perfect and true. This was a well written piece of writing,, you are very talented. I think this is a special piece, which I hope everyone tries to read this one.
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I came across this item on the read and review list of writing.com.
I thought the title was so very appropriate for this lonely poem.
The item description is very well done, and is helpful to the reader of the poem.
You used all of the words in the list appropriately and all were used.
I thought you did a real good job with the prompt/// Just Perfect
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I thought that this short biography of Max Griffin was very interesting and also very complete. I am impressed with his accomplishments in writing a textbook in math. That must be so difficult, I am terrible in math and I always have been. I can barely do fractions and percentages and no further....dumb uh!
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I came across this letter entitled "From Mother to Daughter", on writing.com's read and review list of items. I thought it was an endearing letter. I loved the item description, it was so cute. You explain a lot about what you do in these various organizations, which is helpful to the reader. I did see one mistake however,
I manly spent time someplace a bit more quiet.
I mainly spent .... you forgot to put the letter i in the word mainly.
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I came across this item on writing.com's read and review list. I thought that it was just delightful. What treasured childhood memories you must have. I too have such sweet memories of childhood. You and I are the lucky ones it seems.
so many have only fear and tears as memories.
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Hi Monsoon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy 12th anniversary Power Reviewers! I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I thought this was an interesting little short story. I usually tend to read poetry but this popped up and I liked the title and was curious about the item description. I think this might have been a close encounter of the weird kind. Was it a dream?
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Hello Averren ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope you are having a wonderfully blessed day today.
I know one thing: we unfortunately all remember the day famously known only as 9-11. I so much wish it didn't mean what it has come to mean. It's peculiar when we have an emergency we dial 911-----which has always meant emergency.
now it has a double meaning. I was on my way to go to a college class when it happened. Your writing was very eloquent I thought you really turned back time with your words.
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Hello Jakrebs ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful morning, I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today. I think this was a wonderful addition to the Seven Deadly Sins Contest, I believe you have a wonderful sense of humor and it is a great addition to anything. I laughed so hard after reading this and I read other pieces of your work which were equally as funny. I think you are greatly talented and deserve the golden award ribbon which cascades near your title.
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Hello RigbysRoads,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this wonderful evening, I do so hope you had a blessed day today.
I just loved what you wrote, the title was perfect and very appropriate for the item. The item description made me think that you may have been inspired to write this item because of some song you may have heard of Dylan's. He sure had some nice ones, and is an inspiration. You have been a member of writing.com
\since August 2, 2007, That is longer than I have been a member. keep writing you're doing great.
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Hello cheshire, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today.
I love veterans day, because my daddy was a veteran of 24 years of the Vietnam war, He served both in the air force and the army at different times. He died as a result of agent orange, which was a chemical used to kill weeds in the jungle of Vietnam. It ended up giving him cancer of the lung. I miss him, He so loved this country of ours. I appreciate all of those who recognize his service to our country.
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Hello C. Don ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day today.
I used to work in a nursing home when I was training, it is such hard work. It is, however rewarding in so many ways. People are so bad to overlook the aged and the handicapped, and forget about them, they are jewels in our crown I believe. Your poem is so wonderful I thought it was well written and very interesting it was also highly emotionally charged.
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Hello checkmate! ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day today.
I think that this must have been a tough task to create such a long going metaphor between love and math... Not two things I would ever connect since I really do terrible in math. You did an awesome job though. I really thought it was perfect even the title was MATH ENVY lol. It was v ery appropriate for this poem. I also thought that the item description was very appropriate and helpful to the reader.
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Hello Write-fully Loti,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month, As of August twenty -seventh, you will be a member of writing.com for eighteen years, wow that's really something! what a milestone. I loved this beautiful little love poem, written for your valentine. It put's me in mind of a Poem by a well known author by the name of Helen Steiner Rice, The poem is called, "Love's Magic" . .
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Hello Max Griffin 🏳️🌈, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month, As of august firfth, you will be a member of writing.com for around
eighteen years, that is really impressive. I love this contest I recently entered it for the first time and was pleasantly surprised by how much you taught me in reviewing my item, I learned to engage the reader more I think because of your review. This contest is an excellent way to practice your skills in writing for audiences who want to feel as if they are a part of the story.
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Hello Quick-Quill ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month, as of the twenty-seventh of August, you will be a member of writing.com for around eighteen years, wow! That's powerful stuff!
I enjoyed this little item Your superpower is to control gravity, that's great...
I like your plot. it is very imaginative and creative.
Keep up the good work reviewing and I'm sure you'll be flying high!
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Hello Winnie Kay ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month, As of the sixteenth of this month (August), You will be a member of writing.com for ten sweet years. We are so happy to have you as a member of our wonderful community of writers. I liked the title of your poem, I found it to be appropriate for the item and the subject is very interesting...
the form
[The Neville Form]
heptastich (a poem in 7 lines)
metric: L1, L4 & L7 are iambic tetrameter and L2, L3, L5 & L6 are iambic trimeter
rhyme scheme: abbacca.
Is very unique and a perfect choice for this poem I thought.
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I would like to wish you a very happy one year anniversary today, I hope that you are having a blessed day today.
I thought that the title was very appropriate and that it was one that would draw the readers in to read your poem. I also thought that the item description was helpful.
If I could tell you one thing
It's that I've learnt alot
For an 18 year old girl
I know much you do not
In the above item a lot should have a space after a.
I also think it would sound better if you wrote...
learned a lot...
Thank you for writing this item it is very well written and highly emotionally charged. Lisa Noe
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Hello Mark Mark Tiwo , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this early morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day this day. I loved your poem, I thought that it was very well written and very comprehensive. The title is appropriate for this item. The item description is very helpful for the reader I thought. I loved the part where you show the vast difference between the various people who travel this road such as; the soldiers to the toddlers, to the elderly and so on. You did a very good job on this item.
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Hello Mark Tiwo, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this early morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day this day. I loved your poem, I thought that it was very well written and very comprehensive. The title is appropriate for this item. The item description is very helpful for the reader I thought. I loved the part where you show the vast difference between the various people who travel this road such as; the soldiers to the toddlers, to the elderly and so on. You did a very good job on this item.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
Hello Maria Mize , I came across this little item while I was reading writing.com's read and review list. "Love is" The title sounded familiar to me, but that is because I have a similar poem by the same name. Though my poem compares love to various other things; the two are very much alike. I liked your poem, I feel it, you used emotion in writing this piece.
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Hello G. B. Williams, I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read, I found this item to be of great interest. I think everyone, both black and white should read this item called "Black and Blue".
I empathize with you and your history and all of those like you, but you are exactly right... there is absolutely no way on earth I could ever possibly know what type of life you have lived as a black person in America. I do not know what it would be like nor can I guess what it must feel like to have people look at me as something less. Or to have some police suspect me just because my skin is a bit darker than theirs. It is a sad state of affairs and it is not just in America but in the world. I pray that God in his wisdom will find a remedy for this injustice in our world. I know that we are judged by the company we keep, and I think unfortunately all blacks are judged by a handful of people as being bad or less than, which of course is absurd. I am sorry for your issues, which you have had to endure. I ask you please, in the same vein, do not judge all whites as those who have brought forth this infectious hate.
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