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Review of Writing Prompt  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Cinnamon Roll ,I came across this item on the read an d review pages of writing.com. It appears to be a writing prompt and I think it is a very good one and it is very interesting at that. The title was appropriate for the item and the item description is also very helpful for the reader of this item. you came up with a great prompt, I bet it would make a terrific story.



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Review of Theme  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Vixey Todd , I came across this little assignment for the nanno prep while searching for something of interest to read in the read and review pages of writing.com; This is a brief bonus assignment. The title "Theme" is appropriate for the item I think. I do think that you need to write a better explanation or description of the item in the location left for the item description.


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Hello Lone Cypress Workshop , I came across this essay about God while I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com. I think that the title is very unusual and I liked it and I thought that it is very appropriate for the essay. I also think that the item description is somewhat helpful for the reader of the essay as well. I do think you need to go back through the item and edit it, as it has a few little mistakes in it. The pronouns which refers to God should always be capitalized.
other than that I think that you did a wonderful job creating this essay.


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Hello bob county ,I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com. I think this is a very unusual editorial. I have heard about cocaine being an ingredient in coke at one time, The soft drink is very popular, but is that why? The other part, about the Twinkies, I have never heard, that he was in an occult or had satanic beliefs, I don't know if that is true or not. I don't eat Twinkies because they are so fattening.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Although this is not a story I thought I would read it because of the title, I thought that it was very unusual and curious. It turns out that the title is very appropriate for the poem. The item description tells the reader what to expect when reading the poem and you did a good job on that.
The body of the poem is also very unusual and creative as well as original.
you did a fine job with your writing and I saw no mistakes.

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Hi Amelia Landstorm and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I enjoyed reading your autobiography, but may I offer a small suggestion you should by all means change the title to something more like " Me, My life until fourteen". Something like that would be much more appropriate I believe. Your writing is just lovely and you are an interesting person . I am so sorry to hear that you have tried to commit suicide, that is never the right answer, you need to first love yourself and love God, then find you a nice boy to fall in love with. I think your writing is very good especially for your age.
I do think you need to write the abbreviation of a state capitalized. and the following:

That was only a lie I made u though and in my eyes it was better that watching porn on my own free will but, my siblings new better and Branden showed my dad what I said during dinner and he asked me for my phone and called me into his bedroom and we had an hour long chat about why lying is bad and why watching porn is bad and all of that.

in the first line never abbreviate words in writing a book, you should be written out if that is what you are trying to say.


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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi elsworth123 and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this chapter to your story when I typed in chapters in the search. I think the title is appropriate to your story, I think you need to write a description of your story for the item description, it is very important to tell the perspective readers what the story is going to be about so they will know whether or not to continue reading on or not. I think your writing is delightful. I did see one tiny little mistake however:

"Well allow me to show you." Ren said pointing the device at Alex. She then flipped a switch on the device and said "I'll see you down there" while pointing to the ground infront of her socked feet and press a big red button on the device.

if you will look on the third line above you will see that you need a space between in and front. other than that you did a great job on this short little chapter.

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Review of Teenage Anorexia  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Future Mrs. B celebrates WDC and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I think your teachers at school had a very good idea giving your class this assignment, it is a good way of getting your class's attention on these subjects. I know an Anorexic and you did a very good job with your portrayal of one. The title was appropriate for the work of fiction and the item description is helpful for the readers of this work. I did see a small mistake with your work:

She then prescribes me on medicine to help me out and I'm rushed to the hospital where I will stay until I'm back to my normal 105 pounds.

it would sound better if you remove the word on between me and medicine in the first line, It is not needed. This is a frightening disease and many people have died from it.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi ♥tHiNg♥ and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I loved this story, It was heartbreaking and true in a historical standpoint. I like that you told it in the view of a feline, that was very creative and quite charming. I loved the cat's name. The title is very appropriate for the story and the item description is also very helpful to the readers of this work. It is terrible what humans do to each other, isn't it?
I am glad there was a Librarian to take in the cat, I just wish there had been someone to take in all the over six million people who died without cause.

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Review of Nostalgia  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello WalkSafe , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine evening, I do so hope that you have had a very blessed day today, as I have had. You have been a member of writing.com since May 6, 2018, that is one year today, congratulations it's great to have such a valuable member.
This poem was well rounded and very sweet. It was based on the song "Stressed Out", by twenty-one pilots. I think that the title, Nostalgia, was appropriate and very good.



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Review of All the Time  
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Hello Zeke , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today and always.
I just adored your poem it was simply just sweet. I love the Lord God and all He stands for, and I think your poem is just and beautiful. You did a wonderful job creating this lovely poem for our God. You are blessed to have the creativity to create this wonderful poem. I thought the part where you said that we are the Lord's, it was my favorite.



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Review of Nostalgia  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello JACE ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this fine evening, I know that this is a late anniversary wish but I would still like to catch up and wish you good tidings. I really enjoyed this Kyrielle Sonnet Poem for day six of the Fall 2010 Rhythm and Rhyme Poetry Challenge. I really enjoyed reading this wonderful piece of literature, I think that you did a wonderful job creating this piece of writing. The title is appropriate for the item. you did great



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Review of a n xi e ty  
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Hello Liona , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a fine and blessed afternoon today as I am having. You seem to be a person of very few words according to this piece of writing. it is not bad but anxiety is such a terrible and explosive subject that there are so many ways to describe it and to talk about it. To be jittery, to be hostile, to be panicked, and to be breathless and hot flashes, or chills at the same time. to not be able to get comfortable at all. to lose sleep, and to be grouchy to annoy those around you by complaining all the time. Anxiety and depression normally go together and are some of the worse things to have I think. I feel so bad for people who suffer or have to take medication for these conditions. it is awful.



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Review of Wolves  
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Hello Luna ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today as I am having. I just finished taking your poll on Wolves. I said I loved them, I am afraid of them, you know, I'm not stupid. but I think as long as they are not hurting anyone they are fine. I think that you tell us that the mammal is an endangered species and that they live in the western part of the USA. I seem to have been the only person so far who has taken this poll. here is a snap shot of the results of the poll:

I love wolves!
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Are you kidding me? I absolutely hate those filthy creatures!
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I don't like them at all.
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I've never given it thought.
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They're not bad.
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I kinda like them.
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I've done some research.
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Their so awesome!

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I believe you gave some good choices for the reader to choose from.
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Review of Just Dance  
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Hello SeanFhear ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today as I am having. I thought that this was a wonderfully well written piece of literature. I just loved it and thought that it really speaks to the reader. I like the one word at the end of each stanza I think it makes it really cool.
You have really done a wonderful job creating and writing this terrific piece of writing. I really liked it a whole lot. I hate to keep going on and on about how much I love your writing, because it makes me look silly. but I really liked this piece, as I said it really spoke to me. I think the whole poem is well done and that you have really done a really good job creating this piece.
I would recommend that anyone would like to read this piece.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello vampirequeen , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine evening, I do so hope that you are feeling particularly blessed today as I have. This is the second part of a three part poem, I have read them all now. I think you need a new title or perhaps just re arrange it like " Darkness" part two- you have seen. I think the way it is worded in the title is a little bit confusing. I also think that the item description should tell us, the readers, a little more about the poem. The poem itself is very well written and it looks as if you have put an enormous amount of thought into it. I liked it and think you did a good job. My favorite part is:



The purple of the night
The silence is pure
No ones here
The curse is the cure

Alone in the hunt
How did this come?
You promised me everything
Its time for me to run




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Hello Revelry new writings soon , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine evening, I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today as I have had. I enjoyed the poetry "A Concert Observation", This title is perfect and appropriate for the item. The item description is also perfect and very helpful for the reader. I thought the entire poetry was very well written and described the rock concert so very well. I don't like comparing these people to God or Angels or anything. but you did a perfect job creating the description of a concert. I've been to a few concerts like ZZ tops "Cheap Sunglasses", and Heart's "Dog and The Butterfly", Oh gosh I've just told you how old I am. lol. I liked the following lines in this poem the best:


Lights fade to black
and the show is over,
the band leaves this place behind,
moving onto another city, somewhere else.

Everything is quiet and calm again,
but: only for a little while!

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Review of Purpose  
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Hello C. S. Bell , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine evening, I do so hope that you have had a very wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. This poetry is an inward reflection of man, this is a powerful piece of writing and it is thought provoking and eye-opening.
I liked the title and I think that it is a very appropriate title for this piece of writing. I think that this is a wonderfully well written poetry.
my favorite lines are the following:

I fear and envy the droplets.
They have gained a purpose
It seems in their descent;
One that I only dream of mirroring.
I crave wholly for purpose,
Yet expect none.

I saw no mistakes with your writing and I thought that you did a really good job creating this piece of literature. I really enjoyed reading this.



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Review of DROWNING  
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Hello That 1 Poet , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine evening, I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. I thought that this was a wonderful and well written poem. The title was appropriate for the item and the item description was very helpful to the reader of the poetry. I thought that my favorite lines of your poem are the following:

I'm drowning in an ocean of thoughts, feels like I'm drowning but never die
My thoughts go all over the place & I can't stay afloat.

I have a true understanding of what you are saying in these lines. I know that many times at night I stay awake thinking of all of the wrongs that have been done to me. I feel as if I'm drowning and it is killing me but your right, I don't really die, I just wish I would sometimes.



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Review of Drink Me  
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Hello segue , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This fine evening, I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today as I have had. I thought that these lyrics were very original and very different. I think that the title is appropriate for this set of lyrics. I think that the item description makes the item a little bit confusing. This is very important as this is what draws a person in to the item to decide whether or not they are going to continue on reading this item. I think you have written some lyrics that are very good, I see where you give direction throughout the lyrics telling the reader to slow down or etc. my favorite lines were the following:

Thoughts of mine are
slipping down the pipe.
These are thin, I cannot grasp.
Whither away my soul
I cannot win, fate at last.

you did a very nice job creating this song.



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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Liona , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This fine evening, I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today, as I have had. I have heard the expression "your an old soul", for many years. when I was younger I really didn't understand it. However, now that I'm an older and hopefully more wiser individual, I believe I do understand it. I have always been called an old soul by many people. I am old fashion and believe in doing things in an old fashioned manner, I also believe in all of the older ways of doing things. I am a devout Christian, I believe so much in my Lord and that my soul was created from the beginning, and perhaps we relive our lives until we finally learn and complete whatever task God wants us to learn about. What was in the beginning will be in the end because there is nothing new under the sun.




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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Harry ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. I see your poem has been awarded I am pleased for you as it deserves it.
I loved the title. I felt that it was very appropriate for the poetry. I also thought that the item description is very helpful to the reader. I love dogs of all kinds, I have two myself, A Fyst, and Yorkie. I just think they are close to God. I thought that the fall of mankind from the Garden of Eden was shameful and for me as a human embarrassing, that we could not obey our Lord God.
my favorite lines from your beautiful poem are the following:


Forever since, the call of the wolf, the coyote, even
Man’s best friend the dog, upon howling at the moon
constitutes the angels’ wailing in sorrow in disguise.
Man forgot the meaning of the canine call all too soon;
today its purpose in unrecognized, hidden meaning lies.

I think you should be so proud of this wonderful poem.


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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Purple Wishing WDC Happy 24th ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine evening, I do hope that you have had a fine and blessed day. This poem is a Diamante form of poetry which was written for a contest.
I liked what you had to say about writing and being an author and what all that entailed. I used to work for a newspaper as a reporter and believe me the work was very detailed and multiple jobs to do. such as editing, copying, writing, interviewing, photographing, and so on and so on. It is a hard job but can also be fun. I think you did a very good and a very complete job writing this Diamante poetry about an author and their job. I think you must have a bit of experience as well to have a very nice detailed job. I liked your poem and thought that it was a well written piece of literature.



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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello JACE , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today ,
I really enjoyed the wisdom of your Tanka Poem, I appreciate that you gave an explanation of the form of the poetry. I hope that you did well in the Poetry Challenge in 2010. I like the Tanka form it is a Japanese form of poetry as you said which is related to a Haiku. I really liked your poem it was intelligently written. I believe that this was a short poem with a powerful punch. I love what you had to say with your words . Your words were music to my ears, as they were so intelligent.

This poem is well written and I really enjoyed what you had to say, I hate to con tin ue repeating myself but I can't tell you enough how well this was done. I think it's GRRRRReat!


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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon ,I came across this little item while I was searching for something of interest to read on writing.com. I thought that this was a very well written piece of literature. I liked the title it was simple and sweet. I thought that it was very appropriate for the item. I liked the item description, I thought that it was helpful to the reader. I like a Quatrain poem, it is one of my favorite forms. I hope you placed or won the contest which you entered. I thought it was a beautifully written poem.


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