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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Kat , I came across this item on the read and review page, I was immediately taken with the title, "NOT THE RIGHT ONE FOR ME", I felt that it was appropriate and great work for this poem. I also think that you did a wonderful job with the item description, It is very helpful to the reader.
I am so sorry that things did not work out for you both. I bet it broke your heart and also made your blood boil over, when you saw him with another person.
I would go home and probably cry. Though I don't know because I married my only boyfriend I ever had and we have been married happily for thirty-five years.
Good luck in the love department, we all need someone to love and someone to love us.


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Review of Insanity  
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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Hi Angel and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I do so hope that you had a wonderful Valentines day today and I hope you spent it with your love. This was a strange poem about Insanity. I thought that it was a good look at a person's thoughts on the subject. I liked the title
and I thought that it was very appropriate for this particular poem. The item description was also very helpful to the reader/reviewer. You did a good job creating this poetry about one's feelings about the mind.


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Review of Broken Pieces  
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Hi Healing Minx and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day, I hope you are spending the day with your valentine. I think this was an excellent poem, I love the way you have strong faith in God and you know that He is always on your side, because He Is.
I also have strong Faith, I could not exist if it were not for my love of God.
Your title is very appropriate, and the item description is also very helpful to the reader. My favorite part of your poem is the following:

My yoke is easy and my burden is light.
I’ll hold you through the long, dark night.
The battles of your mind I’ll help you fight.
In place of confusion and doubt I’ll give you strength and insight.



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Review of GROWING OLDER  
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Hi skycloudnz and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day, I do hope you are having a glorious day with your Valentine. This poem grabbed my attention because of the title, I fear that I myself am "Growing Older". The title is very appropriate for this particular poem. I think that it explains itself therefore the item description is right on. I know what you mean about the greed, and the youth going wild. But in all honesty didn't we all pretty much go wild when we were young? This is a nicely written poem and I give it the old *Thumbsup*. My favorite lines were the following:


Progress is still hampered by personal greed,
The world should be better for those in need.
An economy based on dollars alone,
Needs people put into the woeful tone.



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Review of A Cry For Help  
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hi Healing Minx and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines day, I hope you have a wonderful time with your perfect partner. I thought that the poem you wrote was so sad, "A Cry For Help", was a wonderful choice for a title. It is very appropriate for the poem. Your item description is also very helpful to the reader. I felt as if this poem was about someone hurting down deep badly due to abuse, my favorite lines were The ones where you showed your faith in God. I really liked that and I say you are special and strong. I hope your the rest of your life will be blessed.




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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hi gocreate and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines day, I hope you have a special someone to spend your special day with. I liked the title of your poem, "ON the path to forgiveness".
You know the person who gains the most by forgiveness is the forgiving person.
a person who holds a grudge or hates only gives themselves a heavy heart, which is harmful to only you. Besides God tells us to love our enemy and pray for them, always offering forgiveness. I think you did a good job on this little poem. My favorite lines were the following:


‘Forgive them ‘it said, ‘let go of the grudge’ it ordered.
For no grievance is peaceful to your tender soul.
‘Go, face your troubles,’ it commanded. ‘Go on’
Let not a drop of hatred overflow from your bowl.

I enjoyed reading this poem and recommend it to all of the readers.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hi Shar ~ Happy 24th Birthday WdC and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day today, I hope you have a special someone to share your day with. I thought the title was a little cute but also very strange, as I don't think this was about a little turtle. I myself have COPD, I also got it from smoking at age thirteen. I too am on oxygen so I really can relate to your problems. I wrote an article that was both published in our local newspaper as well as in my portfolio here at writing.com, you should read it, I think it could help you. It is highlighted in my port, It is entitled "The terrible cost of smoking." I applaud your efforts at writing to keep others from going down the same path as you did, by smoking.

This turtle not only has difficulties walking
But now she needs Oxygen when she's up and about.
This turtle can take the Oxygen while talking
to all her, medical providers and she does not have to shout.

In the above stanza, I am a little confused by the last two lines.
I believe the comma in the last line is confusing, perhaps it could go after medical providers or remove it all together.


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Review of My Best Friend  
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Hi LegendaryMask❤️ and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day today, I do hope you have a special someone to share this lovely day with. I think you must, judging from this poem.
This was a very lovely and special poem and I do hope you shared it with your spouse. I liked the title and I thought that it was an appropriate title for this poem. The item description is very helpful to the reader.
my favorite line from your poem is the following:

Not in front or behind each other, but side by side as one.

I think that marrying your best friend is a perfect Idea, I did that and we have, so far, been married for thirty-four years. We could not be happier.


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Review of Procrastination  
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Hi gocreate and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day, I hope you have a special person to spend the day with. This poem was appropriately named, And the item description was helpful to the reader. I do not know why people feel the need to procrastinate, I love to rush through my chores so I can feel free when they are done, it makes me feel great to get the jobs done. My favorite part of your poem is the following:


And thus when I realised my folly, I wept
But wiped away my tears, and got up to do my best,
Never more did I keep work for another day,
Once a lesson, forever at bay.

I like it the best because you finally get it done.

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Review of Choosing Happy  
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Hi LadyLeo and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I hope that you have a Happy Valentines Day today, I also hope you have someone special to spend it with. The title of your poem is very well set and very appropriate for this poem. I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader. Your poem made me smile as I am filled with happiness because I have my family with me. My favorite part of your poem was the following:

Having a happy life is a mindset,
You think it is hard but it's not;
It's always just around the corner,
Now go rediscover what you forgot.

You are so correct it is a mindset and many people do not remember how to smile.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hi Tim Chiu and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I hope you are having a wonderful Valentines day and that you are spending it with you lady love. I thought that this poem was just wonderful.
I loved it! You are a talented writer and I have read your stuff before it is always quality writing. I thought that the title was appropriate for this perfect and lovely poem and the item description was very helpful to the reader.


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Review of Awkward Moments  
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Hi Sylvia Sun Sol and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! May I wish you a very happy Valentines Day today. I hope you have a special person to spend this day with. I liked your title and I feel that it was very appropriate for this particular poem. I also thought that the item description was helpful to the reader. I think we have all had these awkward moments in our love lives. I've been married for thirty-four years and my husband and I still have those types of moments in our marriage. But we are extremely happy with one another. the only thing I can say about your writing is that you should always capitalize the pronoun I when referring to yourself.


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Review of The Descent  
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Hi Ray Scrivener and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I would like to wish you a happy Valentines day and I hope that you have someone special to spend it with. I also entered the contest of which this picture was a prompt. My poem was much different than yours. I think that you did a very good job creating this poem of fear and a person tormented by their own demons. My favorite lines of your poem are the following:


Shadow my steps, oh sinister shadow.
Tighten your leash so I choke out a gasp.
Winnow these sins; oh please specter, winnow.
Strip my spirit bare within your harsh grasp

this is a scary look at someone who has been trapped in their own hell.

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Hello Dorianne ,I came across this wonderful little poem in the read and review pages. I thought that this was a beautifully and well written little poem. I really did enjoy reading it. I love traditional poetry, which rhymes;
It makes it flow so well. The title was excellent and also very appropriate.
The item description seems to be very helpful to the reader as well.
my favorite part of this adorable poem is the following:


Little star up in the sky,
how you please my loving eye.
I know I must go straight to bed
but watch you twinkle, I want instead.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Hello Spirit-Angel ,I came across this item while searching for something to review this evening. I found it to be a masterpiece. I love the idea of a memorial for those lost in the holocaust. This was a beautiful and amazing poem. This was a nightmare for our entire world when this happened.
We need to talk and write about the tragedy so it will never be able to ever happen again. Your poem is an eye opener and it is so important that people, especially young people learn about this horrible time in History.


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Hello Dorianne ,I came across this item while searching for something to review in the read and review section. I thought that the Title was just great and very appropriate for this item. I have been in a few devastating storms in my life, Hurricanes and such and snow storms too. I feel as if the item description was also very helpful to the reader. I liked what you wrote and my favorite lines were the following:

Siting on the seat of a child’s swing was a beautiful
Bird, a male cardinal.
He burst out into a vibrant song and then flew away.
I knew that his hope was to remain elusive from staring eyes.
His song was one of joy and no doubt his mate was close by.
Now my day was over and
It seemed that everyone had survived the storm.




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Hello murf , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have been a member of writing.com since February 3, 2003, for about sixteen years, that is amazing and you certainly have me beat. I thought that the title of your short story was appropriate for this story. I also thought that the item description was helpful to the reader. I really liked the ending of your story it was pretty cute. I guess the job does have it's perks. Nudity!




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Hello Elisa: Middle Aged Stik , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have been a member of writing.com since February 3, 2002, which is about seventeen years, we are lucky to have you as a member.
I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today. I am so glad that you shortened this parody of Twelve Days of Christmas or School Board Gifts, because you are correct, after a while it does become a bit redundant. I wonder which state you are talking about? "Martin County". This was a well rounded and very well written take off on the song.



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Hello Barefoot Bob , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have been a valuable member of writing.com since February 3, 2002, about seventeen years. I think that is an enormous amount of time to be with us here. You have written a wonderful Haiku, poem about the environment.
I thought that it was very sad, it reminds me of the horrific oil spill in the Gulf. I can't believe what we humans are doing to this glorious planet, which Our Good Lord provided for us. I think this was an eye opening poem.



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Hello Linda J. Wolff ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I see that you have now been a member of writing.com since February 2, 2015, which is about four amazing years, you are a valuable member and we are lucky to have you. I liked the title and I believe it is appropriate for this poem. Your item description is helpful to the reader and I thought you did a good job creating this little poem. my favorite part of it is the following:

i will wait,
until everything vaporizes,
as the wind clears,
the haze from your skies.

i am patient that way.



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Review of Hummer's Garden  
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello ClarityofClouds , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon,
You have now been a valuable member of writin g.com sin ce February 2, 2016 a total of about three years.

We are so happy to have you with us as a member and I do so hope you are having a blessed day today.
The title of this item was excellent and very well appropriate for this item. I also thought that you did a wonderful job with the item description The reader should find this to be v ery helpful.
I thought that this was a wonderfully fun poem to read and I also thought that it was a little bit of a tongue twister in places. I found that you used several poetic devices to help create this well rounded poem. it had alliteration, assonance and I just thought it was a lovely subject on which to write.
I think you really did do a great job. *Thumbsup*



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Review of Arendelle  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello bertiebite , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, You have now been a member of writing.com since February 2, 2011, which is a total of about eight years. You are a valued member and I do hope that you are having a very blessed day today. I thought that the title of your little poem waS v ery well founded and appropriate for it as well. I thought that the item description was especially helpful to the reader of the poem. I so enjoyed this well written piece of literature.
My favorite stanza of the -poem was the following:


Sweet Arendelle,
hide not thy path from me.
Moonlight reveals the blessed way,
an entrance there! Ahead the moon shines white
within the forest dark.
Guiding me to once again behold
thy pleasant vales and glens,
with wonder and delight.

I thought that this was just a wonderful description.


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Review of Facing the Day  
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Hello JOY-on LOA , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, You have now been a valuable member of writing.com for about ten amazing years and we are so glad to have you as a member. I do so hope you are having a blessed day today. I thought that the title of your poem was very appropriate for this particular poem, which I thought was kind of cute. I can just envision you trying to sleep, while the birds are on the outside perching and singin g keepin g you awake. I can just see and hear you scream for silence as you slam the window fiercely down. The poem is a very real thing that I bet a lot of people can identify with. my favorite lines from your poem are:



My harsh wail of "QUIET!!!" echos through the wood.
And the birds abandon their perch...
As my window slams down.

very good *Thumbsup*


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Review of Spring  
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Hello Chantelle Quigley-Dimeo , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning, You have now been a valuable member of writing.com for about ten years, We are so lucky and happy to have you with us here at writing.com. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today. I liked the Haiku poem you wrote for the Spring Haiku contest. I love a Haiku, as I think they are straight to the point without wasting a bunch of words. It is a wonderful oriental form that I can really appreciate. You did it just right I thought. I love the spring it brings forth such happiness and beauty with the Dogwood trees and Eastern Red buds in my home of Kentucky. I also love the
wonderful daffodils of yellow and white and even the on es with the orange middle. I can look forward to the spring it is in the sixties here in my home today. So much better than the deep freeze of the other day we had.



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Review of Nomenclature  
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Hello Skewed ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this lovely morning, You have now been a valued member of writing.com for about fifteen years, since February 2, 2004. You sure do have me beat. I thought that this item was very well written and although I didn't understand the title, That's on me. I think you did a great job creating this tid bit. It is a very unusual subject to write a poem about,, but I do love the unusual. I think that you did pick a winner to write about.; My favorite part of your little poem was:

If there be such a word
Then 'twas first announced
As the song of a mocking bird
In the first things you pronounced.

I liked the way you rhymed your work, I always like the standard old rhyming poems. You did a great job creating this poem I say Kudos to you.



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