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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Spirit-Angel , I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and I just read this very unique little poem of romance. I thought that it was so different I like how the last word in one line rhymes with the first word in the next line. I don't know what form this is but it is certainly unique. Thanks for sharing this with me. Lisa Noe *Cat*

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Review of the wind  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello jeannine ,
This is such an appropriate time to write such a frigid poem about the wind. There is an artic blast right now which is freezing us to death.
I thought that the timing on this poem was right on. It was creative and very nice.
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Review of Tipsy New Year  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had. I think that the title of this item was very appropriate for it.
I also thought that this item is well written. You did a great job, all of the prompt words were used and the stood out in the poem. I liked your item, I thought that it was fun.

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Review of The Appeal  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had. This was a great and very different kind of story. I really liked it.
You did a wonderful job creating it. I like the thought of the dead rising up and taking revenge on his killer and the person who put him up to the killing, his wife. I really think that you did a fantastic job with this surprise ending.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello ~WhoMe???~ ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today as I have had. You have been a member of writing.com since January 8, 2006 that is thirteen years which is a great milestone for you, congratulations and we are lucky to have you. I think the title of this item is very appropriate for this item. I also think that the item description is very helpful for the readers. I think that the item was very well written. I think you did a great job creating this particular item. You are writing about friends I guess. As you state that you were inspired by them when writing this particular item.
I like to read your writing, I find that you are a very talented writer and I do love to read poetry so I think that you have done a great job.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Love Scars  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Simply Adore ♥ ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today as I have had. You have now been a member of writing.com since January 8, 2004 Wow that is fifteen ;years a great milestone I would say. Much longer than I have been. I thought that the title of your poem was very appropriate for this item.. "Love Scars",,is a great name. This item was written for the Kansaspoet Poetry contest. You say that this was a prompt poem however, you don't tell the reader what he prompt is. I think the poem is well written and I wonder if you won the contest, as there is a ribbon of red attached to the item.
Love is a wonderful thing to write about, whether it is a good relationship or a relationship that has gone bad. You did a great job creating this item.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Words Left Unsaid  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Rainbow Writer ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,
this evening. I khope you had a blessed day as I did. I see that you have been a member of writing.com since January 8, 2007, that is about twelve funfilled years that we have been fortunate enough to have you amongst us.
I came across this poem in your portfolio and I thought 8it needed to be reviewed, I am fortunate enough to have had a very close relationship with my father in my life. We were like a team He called me his shadow, as I followed him everywhere he went. He passed away in 1986 at the young age of 44.. I miss him everyday as I'm sure y0ou miss your own father. I think that your poem is just so sad, I'm sorry that you had the misfortune of having strong words that you are left to recall. It is a sad thing, but I'm sure your father knew that you loved him and that is what he took with him. your writing really touched me.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of You and Me  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Stephen ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning, I hope that you are having a blessed day today as I am having. You have now been a member of writing.com since January 6 2006, for about eight years, wow that is awesome. I just read "You and Me", I thought that you did a great job creating this poem about a relationship that ended on a sad note. I think that the title was a very appropriate on e for this item. and I also think that the item description is very well suited for the item.
I think it is a hard thing to en d a relationship on a good e nding now days.
I am fortunate to have married and still b e happily married to my first boyfriend thirty three years later. The part I most understood was the following:

We've spoken briefly since then
You seem no more mature
Now I am the grownup
And still you seek a cure

I pity you now sadly
I think you'll never find
The courage or the confidence
To free from this bind.




thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello PlannerDan ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have been a member of writin g.com since January 2, 2004, that is an impressive amount of time, much longer than I have been. I hope that you have had a simply blessed day today as I have had. I appreciate reading your lovely poem about your son going from trucks and toy soldiers to marching down the isle for his wedding. That must make you incredibly proud of him. He, I believe is the second of your children. congratulations to you all. I thought that this was a beautifully written and poignant piece of writing. I love to read about people and how they love to watch their children in their more memorable moments in life. my favorite part of your poem was the following stanza:


For you’ll always be our youngest of two,
And because of that fact, you’re a little bit special.
And our prayer, on the day that you wed, just for you,
Is that someday too, you may quietly marvel,
As YOUR precious child lets you watch, as they play.

I like where you bring this stanza around to play full circle with life.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Night Song  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello {suser:1starsong] ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, your anniversary will be the day after Christmas, but I won't be around that day.
I will wish it to you now if that is alright. I really liked this particular poem, it was beautifully written, as you are in a habit of doing, I think you did a wonderful job creating it. the rhyme was excellent and the rhythm was also very nice.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello The Milkman ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope you are having a wonderfully blessed day, as I am.
This poem was beautifully written. I thought you really made a point of telling about the girl on your mind. You should let her know how often you think about her, you never know, she might reciprocate. I noticed that you did not rhyme the first stanza but the second was nicely rhymed and because of that, it was my favorite stanza:


My day goes on envisioning her face,
my day goes on drifting in space.
Mind wanders to her distant side,
body goes along for the ride.
Eyes closed, what's she dreaming about,
these feelings, make me shout,
above the clouds, above the rain
"Does she feel the same?"



the last stanza was both rhymed and unrhymed some lines rhymed and another was not. I really liked your poem, I thought that it was romantic.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Snow Dance  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

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Hi Eliot and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I loved this sweet and endearing piece of poetry. I think that you did a fantastic job creating this long distance love affair of the snow dance.
The title was quite unique and very appropriate for this item. I see that by the item description it is written for Eunelle. I think that this was a lovely piece of writing , my favorite part of it is the following:


But soon my legs grow weary
As the wind begins to weep
The bitterness I dream
While fitfully I sleep,


I like the rhyme and the loveliness of your unique words.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hi Zuly and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I think this is a poem about death and it is very well written, you did a really fantastic job creating this one of a kind poem. The title is so appropriate for this particular piece of writing. However I would add a little bit more to the item description if I were you. I think this is a very original piece of writing. My favorite part of the item is the following:



I want to die on a cold winter night.
Let the rain wash the pain away
Let the lightning guide my path
I want the tears of my loved ones
To get lost in the heavy rain.


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Review of WINTER OF LIFE  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Hi Dr M C Gupta and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! This was a wonderful piece of writing. I enjoyed reading about your vivid dream. I think that the title is appropriate and also very nice. I also think that the item description is somewhat helpful to the reader. You are a really nice writer of sonnets, as this one won a contest. My favorite part of this item is the following:



Then the wind started screaming
And I woke up from sleep.
In the winter of my life
It had a meaning deep.


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Review of Seasons  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Hi Shannon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! This is a wonderfully written piece of writing. it starts with the spring of the year followed by summer, fall, and finishes with winter, as it follows all of the seasons of the year with a description of brief detail.
my favorite is the spring which is the first stanza:

Blooming flowers raise their heads
In ample fields of fragrant grasses
Rainbow colors, nature's bedspread
Springtime's here, but quickly passes
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I think that you did an outstanding job with this.
The title was appropriate and the item description was helpful.


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Review of On the Waterfront  
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Hi Eliot and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I think you did a fantastic job creating this poem Which is entitled "On The Waterfront". I do think the title is appropriate for this item.
I also think that you needed to write a little bit more in the item description telling more about your thoughts on the poem. My favorite part of your well written poem is the following:

Be the singing of new psalms
caught in the timbre
of holy wind and fire

I thought this was just a beautifully worded stanza, good Job *Thumbsup*

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Review of Pot Belly Stove  
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Hi Kings and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I thought that this was just a wonderful sentimental piece of writing.
it really brought a smile to my face... as I recall my grandfather's home of old.
He used to heat his home with a black potbelly stove stoked with coal, which he mined himself. He was a coalminer in eastern Kentucky you see. I think your wonderful nostalgic poem was just great.

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Hi 🪽intuey🕊️ and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! This was a wonderful parody of "Twas The Night Before Christmas".
I thought that it was a very sweet and endearing piece of writing. You did a great job creating it. I like the kind of comical and humorous edge it had.
You really did do a fantastic job, it really made me smile. It is a wonderful gift to make a person smile with your written words.

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Hi Starr* Rathburn and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I thought that this was a very beautiful yet very sad piece of writing.
What is so sad about it is how true and how often this scenario occurs. It is terrifying to know that there are people that may live right down the street from us who have nothing to eat or who is being abused. I think this work of fiction was eye opening, which is just what is needed with this subject.

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Hi Holly Abidi and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I think that this was a genuinely great idea for a writing project.
You gave us ten different ideas about which we could write. I think that Christmas is the best time to shine light on the Christ, which is what it is all about. Write a story about what you would do if you were fortunate enough for Him to visit you on Christmas. What would you say to Him? Would you invite Him in or shun Him? This, to me, is the best story a writer could write about for Christmas. Your ideas were all great too, I just thought I would add this one as well.

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Hi Writer of the Winds and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I have never been a big fan of the song, "The Twelve Days Of Christmas".
However, I do think you did a wonderful job creating a mother's version of the song. My favorite was the last one. I have always gotten tired of having to repeat the same lines over and over again, that is why It is low on my list of Christmas songs to sing. Yours is very cute and I think that you did a wonderful job creating it.

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Review of Unlucky  
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Hello Dave ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, you have now been a member of writing.com for about thirteen years, since 2005. That is much longer than I have been, I do hope that you are having a very blessed day today as I am having.
I just read "unlucky", your poem that makes me feel as if you are looking into my own life as I am the most unlucky person I've ever known . It is quite the amusing little piece of writing.. I really did enjoy it very much.
The title was so perfect and appropriate for this piece. The item description was helpful to the reader as well. my favorite part of this item is the following:


My wife’s naggin' me into the ground,
and my IRA’s not very sound--
worst it’s ever been.
All hell broke loose when
my girl friend caught me messin' around.

I thought it was very funny.



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Review of Canyons of Light  
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, Today you have been a member of writing.com for about ten years, wow what a feat that is, you've got me beat by a few. I do hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had.
I think that you are an excellent writer, this item won best structured poem at the 2010 Quill awards. I congratulate you on winning. This is a beautifully written piece of writing. I do so love what you have to say especially the following:


The sun meanders lazily across
the sky, each minute painting
new cave art on the towering
edifices , unappreciated by
the inhabitants, but beautiful
in the eyes of the universe.

You have painted a wonderful picture with your words. I also think that the title is very appropriate for this piece of writing.



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Review of My Retreat  
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Hello Αλεξ ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have now been a member of writing.com since 2008, about ten sweet years, and we are grateful to have you as a valued member.
I do hope you have had a blessed day today, as I have had.
I think that the title you chose to name this piece was very good as well as being very appropriate for the item. I also think that the item description for this item was very helpful to the readers of this piece of writing. I thought that you chose a wonderful description of a place to go when you are stressed.
We all have someplace in which we choose to hide when we are stressed. My favorite part of your item is the following:


Waterfalls pour into pools,

And bathe in the silver moonlight.

The tall trees create a canopy.

I walk into it timidly,

Afraid of waking up.

I loved the thought of this description, it sounds so beautiful. It is a place where I too would choose to go when stressed.




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Review of Promises  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello sparrowxscarlette ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have now been a member of writing.com since 2007, that's about eleven years today. I do hope you have had a blessed day today as I have had. I thought that this was a fascinating piece of literature. I love to read poetry, It is my favorite kind of writing. I thought that you did a very nice job creating and writing this item. I liked the title that you called this piece, I thought that it was so very appropriate. I also thought that you did a good job with the item description as it is helpful to the reader of the piece.
This is an item about a person who is not able to make a promise to another person. I think that is a sad thing, myself. my favorite part of this item is the following:

We're ripping ourselves to pieces
i don't see where this'll end
its a new personal thesis
to watch blood descend.

my only suggestion is for you to always capitalize the pronoun I.



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