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Hello SeanFhear Author Icon , I found this item on the story-poem forum, however I am currently on hiatus due to illness, so I am not judging the contest right now. However, I did read and am going to review this item. I thought it was a very well written item and I gave it 4.5 stars, which it richly deserved. I liked your story poem I thought that you did a fantastic job creating it. I have read your work before and will, I'm sure, read it again and it is just up to what I would expect from a talented author.


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Hello C. H. Townsend Author Icon , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review pages while I was seeking something of interest to read this evening.
I liked the title of this item and I thought that it was very appropriate for this particular item. I thought that the item description was both good as well as being helpful to the reader. The body of the poem was well written and it spoke to love being discovered. I thought it was a sweet and melodic sounding poem.

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Hello E. G. Daniels Author Icon , I came across this item and it looked tremendously interesting to me, so I thought I would give it a look see. I thought that you did a fantastic job with the subject matter. I really liked what you had to say and the way you said it. I thought that the title was excellent and was appropriate for this item. I equally thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader. I am sorry that you don't see yourself in a more positive light, you are a special person because God made you so. You have talent for writing and that is a precious gift from the Lord. The only little thing that I saw which was a mistake were the following:

the last word should be anyway not anyways. there should not be an s on the end. c:black}

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Hi Northwood Author Icon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item while searching for something to read for our review raid this evening. I saw this and thought I'd give it a look see. I thought that this was a cute little poem and It brought to mind when I was a youngster, I was always under foot in my house, I was hyper and I'm sure I drove everybody crazy with my silliness. My parents were great and loved me very much but I was a lot to handle I'm sure.


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Hi Northwood Author Icon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read for our raid. I saw this and was really just taken away. It is funny and sweet I just loved it. My favorite part of this poem is the following stanza:


A slug trail up my trouser leg,
and pigeon poo on my hat.
And if you think I smell a lot,
I was scent marked by the cat!

I thought that this stanza was so amusing and cute. You really did use your imagination and made a very clever little poem I thought. The title was excellent and very appropriate for the poem. good going.


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Hi Tazman Author Icon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this item while I was searching for something to raid for the Power Reviewers Group today. I kind of like Bob Dylan at least some of his stuff. I used to work for an oldies radio station as an announcer so I heard his stuff often. He's a little man and kind of unkept looking to me. which I guess a lot of rock singers are, but then again he is not rock he is more folk or something similar of the sixties. Your poem was a real honor for him I thought. You must really like the guy.


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Hi {suser:killerlover18 } and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! This was a heart-felt poem I believe, and I always like it when people write from their heart, it makes the poem so personal. This poem is about the truth and how sometimes the truth can hurt you. I thought that the title was very appropriate for this poem and I also thought that the item description was helpful. you did a fine job creating this item. You seem to really have a flair for writing about the truth and an emotional side to it as well.


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Hi Kingfisher Author Icon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I'd like to wish you also a happy Account Anniversary today.
I found this item on the anniversary page and I thought I'd give it a read.
I really liked this Item, it is well written and you really did do wonders with it. The evil creeps at night, wow it was awesome. The title was very appropriate for the item I thought. You did a great job and deserve five stars I think.

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Hi Kat Author Icon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I'd like to wish you also a happy Account Anniversary today.
I found this item on the anniversary page and I thought I'd give it a look see.
I thought this was a great piece of work. You did fabulous, I could almost feel myself in the icy cold water and the pain of the cold shooting through my body.
It was well described and well written. I am so glad you were pulled out in the end. This was an awesome read.

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Hi rainbows Author Icon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I'd like to wish you also a happy Account Anniversary today.
I found this item on the anniversary page and thought I'd give it a look see.
I am glad that I did, it was really great. You consistently write good poetry, as I have read some of your work before. This was well written and well rhymed, and I love rhyming poetry, or traditional poetry. The rhythm on this poem was also great and it has an appropriate title. very good!*Thumbsup*

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Hi and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I'd like to wish you also a happy Account Anniversary today.
I found this item on the anniversary page and I thought I'd give it a look see.
It is profound and awesome, I really liked it. I thought you used alliteration well, without overdoing it. I also thought there was just enough rhyme to make it seem more poetic. I like the way that you used these poetic devices. This was a unique look at society I thought.

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Hi queen.dimples and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I do so hope that you are having a blessed day, as I am having on this day.
I found your poem, "You", while I was searching for something to raid. I thought it was very sweet.
I also thought it was good to write down what is in your heart. I did see a couple of mistakes, but they are very small and easy to fix.

You hold me tight
and i bury me face
i think i'm in love
but i got nothing to say

first of all the pronoun I should always be capital, even I'm.
also in the second line it should read "bury my face"... not me face
I would also change got in the last line to have...


as you can see they are minor mistakes and can be easily fixed.


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Hello PAPA CASON Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed and beautiful day, as I have had today. I am just enamored with this quite beautiful piece of writing. It was a blessing to read. I thought that first of all the title was excellent and very appropriate for this nice poem. I also thought that the item description was quite good and helpful. The poetry was well rhymed and had a great rhythm the subject was perfect in my mind, as I love spiritual writing. You are an excellent writer an d I would have given you more that five stars had I been able to. I give you five *Thumbsup**Thumbsup**Thumbsup**Thumbsup**Thumbsup*
I would most definitely suggest that all people of all ages should read this lovely and well written piece of writing. It is BEAUTIFUL!!!



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Hello pooholla Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day, as I have had thus far. I wanted to read this little story that you wrote called, "Dad", I was very close to my dad before he died and I loved the relationship we shared.
I try to read all about the father , daughter relationships that people encounter. I find yours to be quite curious, you don't really come out and say that you are miserable though you do show that you are quite angry with him for drinking. I'm sure he probably loved you, but for many reasons people develop drinking problems and when they do, they often hurt those closest to them. Usually never even realizing that their actions have such a negative effect on those near to them. This is what you had to contend with and for that I'm sorry for you and your family.



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Hello Stuckintime Author Icon, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed and beautiful day, as I have had today. I was really taken away with your wood carving story called " The Workshop". I found it to be just thrilling and interesting.
with a surprise twist at the end. You have a really good talent for telling a good story. That is a real treat to read especially a thriller, this close to Halloween also. You really amazed me with your ease of writing. My favorite part of this story was the following:

The toymaker almost froze to the spot when he turned to run away from the talking head. Behind him a marionette, his own creation, was moving toward him. The strings floating in the air as though it was being controlled by the invisible arms of the jester.

It was holding his knife, waving it in his direction in puppet like swings of the arm.

“How could you,” The jester’s head continued to call out. “That was my wife!”


I liked this part the best because it was surprising and thrilling. I really enjoyed my read.
I thought that the title of the story was appropriate for the item and I also thought that the
item description worked well.

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Hello the prodigal son returns 2024. Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. I thought that this poetry was very important and carried with it a very powerful message, Of how humans can spare the lives of tiny living creatures if they just would. I believe it takes more courage to allow an entity to live rather that to kill it just because you can. I believe the most power is achieved by giving rather than taking.
We as Humans have dominion over all of the creatures given to us by God Himself. But we show more strength in allowing a bear to live than we would in shooting him dead I think. all creatures have a right to life just as we do. It is important that we do not kill more than we need to feed on. actually we need not kill anything as we could survive solely on fruit and vegetables.



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Hello QueerlyAsexual Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had. I liked the title of this item it is what initially attracted me to read this piece. I also believe that the title," The Cowardly Wolf", is very appropriate for this item. I find that the item description is also very helpful to the reader/reviewer. I can see the resemblance to Li'l Red Riding Hood idea. I so much enjoyed reading your poem and I also felt as if you did a great job creating and writing this little story poem. I think that you have a real knack for telling the story of a relationship. You seem to relish a good fight an d to discuss differences in your writing. It is always an interesting thing to have a writer who is so open and free with their writing.



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Hello logan Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. I liked what you wrote in your poem, "Empty Heart", I did see several tiny mistakes with some of the writing so I am copying your poem as you wrote it and beneath it I will make corrections, your words will be in red.


There's and emptiness inside my heart to tell the story i don't know where to start

i met a girl who's eyes sparkled like the night skye.her hair flowed like a waterfall in

a bright blue stream she brought peace and joy to me my eyes filled with so much glee

but alas my heart broke i grew too close and she drifted away my life once filled with happiness and warmth now drew cold and dark my heart once full is now sad

with nothing to fill my empty heart.

There's an emptiness inside my heart, to tell the story I don't know where to start.
I met a girl, whose eyes sparkled like the night sky. Her hair flowed like a waterfall in a bright blue stream. She brought peace and joy to me, my eyes filled with so much glee, but alas! my heart broke, I grew too close and she drifted away. My life once filled with happiness and warmth ; now drew cold and dark, my heart once full is now sad, with nothing to fill my empty heart.


If you will notice I corrected a few misspelled words like sky, and I capitalized the pronoun I. I also changed all of the punctuation by adding several commas and others. It makes quite a difference.


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Hello Mary Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. You are a fabulously terrific writer of poetry. I love to read poetry and I read a lot of it, so I know what I like when I read it and I seem to have taken a shine to your poem, "A Poem for Writers". I liked the fact that you dedicated this poem to all writers. I enjoyed reading your poem and I thought that the title of the poem was very appropriate for this particular writing. I also thought that the item description was a perfect place for a dedication to writers. I find that you show a great aptitude for writing poetry and You have a good talent for writing period. I bet that you enjoyed writing this poem and then dedicating it to your fellow writers.

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Hello thea marie Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. Your poem, which is a revision of "Alone is Not Lonely", which you wrote is a very entertaining and enlightening piece of literature I thought.
You did a wonderful job writing about this an d I enjoyed reading it for sure.
My favorite part of the writing is the following:



By myself for a time
Not lonely at all,
Just alone.

I thought that this part was so telling and very meaningful. You are by yourself yet you are not at all lonely your just by yourself. You did a very lovely job creating this poem which I thought was very powerful and also it was very important. The revision was noticeable and I thought it was a very telling difference in each poem.


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Hello dclowe Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day. This was a very nice and well written piece of literature. I enjoyed the read and would highly recommend it to everyone. Your title, "Lonesome Gods" , is very original as well as being very creative. I am a Christian, therefore I believe only in the one true God, the Creator of Man. I always enjoyed reading Mythology and learning about the ancient Gods. I found it to be so entertaining as well as being interesting. The stories were always very creative, which I did always enjoy greatly. This poem was very well written and also very enjoyable for me to read. I would suggest all people who like Mythology or Poetry should certainly read this piece of writing. You did a very fine job creating it.



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Hello rjsimonson Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day.
I surely was taken with your pretty and thought provoking piece of writing, called "Smell The Flowers", it was a simple title for a very interesting read.
I thought that the title was very appropriate for this particular item. I also think that the item description said it all, and it was very important and helpful to the reader. I enjoyed reading your beautifully written piece of poetry, You did a fantastic job creating this thoughtful poem. I especially liked the way you changed colors in the poetry it added an interesting flair to the writing. I think this writing was so simple but held with it an exceptionally strong and powerful message. to not miss what life has to offer.



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Hello Squeekachu Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope that you have had a blessed and wonderful day today. I chose to read and review this item because I was interested in what New Horizons is teaching you. I have to admit I am lost and confused as you do not tell the reader what the purpose of this exercise is about. I did recognize many of the names you chose, as they were taken from a variety of television shows. I do not understand what you are trying to accomplish with this assignment. The writing or the variety of sentences are well written, however as I do not know what you are doing I'm lost. You have chosen to write about the television show NCIS, and I also recognized several of the names; such as Alex P. Keaton from the '80's sitcom. If I were you I would write in the item description what the purpose of this exercise is.



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Hello Bill Kinahan Author Icon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope that you have had a blessed and wonderful evening today.
I enjoy reading poetry and when it is of a spiritual nature I love it even more.
I believe wholehearted in God. I admire anyone who writes of their love of God,
Religion and of a spiritual feeling. To share one's feelings about such things proves a love of Christianity. I thought that you wrote a well balanced and sweet poem. The title was very appropriate for the poem and I also think that the item description was somewhat helpful to the reader. You seem to like to share your feelings through your writings. I enjoyed reading your writing and I commend you for the subject matter in which you chose to write on. I believe that you have written a very lovely piece of writing.



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