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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello DarkJoy ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have now been a member of writing.com for about eleven years today. I do hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had.
This was a won derful look at your insight into having an eating disorder.
I think that you did a fantastic job creating this piece of writing. I hope it was helpful to you to let your innermost feelings been known, I guess it may be cathartic for you. I thought that the title of this item was well suited to the writing and very appropriate. I also think that the item description was so very helpful to the readers of this piece. It is such an awful thing that you suffer from an eating disorder, I have read many items where people often suffer due to some other reason , I hope you can get a handle on this illness.



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Review of Immortality  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello InItToWinIt ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, you have now been a member of writing.com for about thirteen sweet years and we are happy to have you as a valued member.
I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today, as I have had.
I thought that the title was an excellent choice for this piece of writing it was also very appropriate. I also think that the item description was very helpful to the reader of your poem. This was an extra nice poem about being immortal or of feeling that way with someone you love. this is what I got out of it anyway. My favorite part of your writing was the following:

Immortality is we
And the future says we’ll last
Can’t you see, now we are free
Live life on a lane so fast
Now here we are, standing over them all
Now here we’ll stay, seeing them fall
Because forever here we rule, forever here we remain
Immortality is only ours, for no one else to obtain

I liked this part because you feel as if you will go on forever. I liked the rhyming of this as well and it had a nice little rhythm.



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Review of Alice  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello BlueJay ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I see that you have been a member of writing.com for about thirteen years, that is an outstanding feat. I do hope you have had a blessed day today, as I have had. I liked the title of your little poem or limerick, I thought that the title was very appropriate for this particular piece of writing.
\Limericks are among my favorite of all of the poems. I like them because most of them are very humorous and I like the way they rhyme as well.
I think that you need to give a little bit better item description for the poetry, however, It is very important to the reader that they know what is going on, but I guess this works as they can read for themselves I suppose. I think that you created a wonderful and fun little ditty for your readers it has four stanzas to it which makes it special I thin k.




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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Derrci ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have been a member of writing.com for about fourteen years, that is a masterful feat. I do hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day as I have had. I thought that this was a great little love poem.
I love poetry and I do believe 5that you did a great job creating this poem, "Something Out Of Nothing". My favorite part of your love poem is the following part:

You rearrange these empty atoms
Into a certain indescribable sequence;
A code specific to your influence.
And even if all this is nothing
- Hollow universe of false existence -
You make me feel real.

I liked it the best because it is showing the feelings that you have. I believe you feel like something special or at least that is what I got from this piece of writing.



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Review of An Angel Guide  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Annie ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I hope you have had as blessed a day as I have had. I'm sorry for the slight delay in writing this review, However I was quite busy yesterday on your real account anniversary. I must say, though that this was a real treat to read.
I liked it, it was so well created. I liked the title an d I thought that it was very appropriate for this piece of writing. I love poetry an d this was really good. I thought that you also did well with the item description as it was very helpful to the reader to know what was going on in the poem.
My favorite part of your poem was the following:



If not for the choice

To obey the voice

I would not be here.


I liked it best because it talked of her obeying the voice, and it showed you are still alive thanks to the guardian angel.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello PLA* ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day, as I have.
I thought that this was a magnificently written piece of writing. I so much enjoyed your talent and I must say I really loved this piece of poetry. I felt the love lost and the loneliness in your words. My favorite part of your poetry was the following:

There came a gentle whisper, and the voice; it eased my dread. It spoke of peace and forgiveness and this is what It said; "Fear not my child. True love will never end. An honest heart can surely break, but I promise you that it can also mend. I know how much you've hungered, I've felt your relentless thirst; but there were souls in greater need; I tended to them first".

I thought you really out did yourself in the above stanza, as it was beautiful.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Seeing Her Beauty Again
*Poseyp*Author:Tim Chiu
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*Poseyp*First Impression: I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet. I thought that this was an amazing and lovely poem. You did a great job creating it without rhyme. I really liked it. You really do have a great amount of talent for creating and writing poetry, I've read things that you have written many times and I always am impressed and always like them. You should be very happy with your creation.




*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of Genie as a gift  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Nada Philippe (a.k.a: R.H.N) , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today as I am having. Thanksgiving is close in America and I am so looking forward to the big brown turkey. I thought that this was a powerfully wonderful look at your poetry. Your writing is surely very good. I Thought that the title was very appropriate for this particular Item. I also thought that the teaser or the item description was very helpful for the reader. You tell a unique and strange tale about a genie. I thought this ended on a very extremely sad note.
You show a great talent and aptitude for writing poetry, it is my honor to read your writing and tell you how well I think that you can write. I was extremely impressed with your word choice and with the ease of your writing.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello GerMac ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this fine autumn day it is crisp and beautiful here which always puts me in the best of moods, I do so hope you are having a blessed and lovely day, as I am havin g. You are a very terrific writer of poetry. I bet you can really play a wonderful piano concerto. I thought the addition of the partner in the kitchen baking bread really did add a tremendous amount of feeling to your wonderful poem. I love to hear music and I thin k it is a great subject on which to write poetry. "Keyboard Lightning" was a wonderful title and it is also very appropriate for this item. and the item description or the teaser which ever you choose to call it is a great addition for the reader to get in the mood.
I think that your poem was written from the heart, which I really like.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello GerMac ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month as your anniversary will fall on the thirtieth of this month. I chose this item because I have read many of your other ones and I had not yet read this one. I find that you are a very talented poet and writer. I thought that this was an amazing piece of writing. you included all of the elements of writing, mentioning the feel, sight, sound and so on. You described the scene so very well. my favorite part of the writing was the first stanza:

In the wee hours of the evening I am awakened
by the howls of coyotes and the chirps of crickets,
The utterly fresh air tantalizes my nostrils,
The balmy breeze kisses my eyelids,
An occasional light flashes in my window
as a vehicle passes by.


I liked it the best because of all of the distinct description of the scene.
I felt as if I were there spying on you and could actually feel what you felt.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello bobturn ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This evening, I do so hope you have had a blessed day today as I have had.
It is cold and wet here in Kentucky, USA today, I hope you are staying warm.
I came across this contest while I was searching your portfolio for something of interest to read for your anniversary. I have never heard of this contest before, and I think it looks like a very fun and neat contest. It is a Poetry contest in which you paint a picture in words using free verse. It is a contest of a very different sort, I liked this contest it is just great I believe. I would suggest that people enter and try to vie for the top prize. The entries must be free verse poetry of seven to forty lines long. There are so many poetry contests here at writing.com, however I believe this one rises above the rest.

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Review of Homeland  
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Hello Chryseis47 ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I came across this poem in your portfolio and I just couldn't resist reading it. You see, I love to read poetry and I especially like to read the kin d of poetry that is ripped from your heart, which this certainly appeared to. I can't imagine what you must feel after having to deal with a man of such brutality. I have often been glad that when my father died my mother never remarried. Although I do wish her the happiness I just can't see me accepting a new father at this point in my life. But she richly deserves happiness with the man of her choice. I'm just glad for myself that she didn't choose to go that way. She devoted her time and resources to her family and I respect and love her for that. I'm so sorry for your experiences.



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Review of Rejected  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello SeanFhear , I found this item on the story-poem forum, however I am currently on hiatus due to illness, so I am not judging the contest right now. However, I did read and am going to review this item. I thought it was a very well written item and I gave it 4.5 stars, which it richly deserved. I liked your story poem I thought that you did a fantastic job creating it. I have read your work before and will, I'm sure, read it again and it is just up to what I would expect from a talented author.


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Review of Song of love  
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Hello C. H. Townsend , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review pages while I was seeking something of interest to read this evening.
I liked the title of this item and I thought that it was very appropriate for this particular item. I thought that the item description was both good as well as being helpful to the reader. The body of the poem was well written and it spoke to love being discovered. I thought it was a sweet and melodic sounding poem.

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Review of Dolls  
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Hello E. G. Daniels , I came across this item and it looked tremendously interesting to me, so I thought I would give it a look see. I thought that you did a fantastic job with the subject matter. I really liked what you had to say and the way you said it. I thought that the title was excellent and was appropriate for this item. I equally thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader. I am sorry that you don't see yourself in a more positive light, you are a special person because God made you so. You have talent for writing and that is a precious gift from the Lord. The only little thing that I saw which was a mistake were the following:

the last word should be anyway not anyways. there should not be an s on the end. c:black}

in the above excerpt
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Review of Superpowered News  
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Hi Maryann, I think this was a great newsletter.
It was so very helpful to all of the members of
Writing.Com's Power Reviewers Group. It was very much a winning newsletter, as it gives detailed instructions to newbies and other members on the technique of reviewing for our wonderful group. I thought this was one of your best newsletters yet. Thanks for all that you do for the group. God Bless You!

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Hi Northwood and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item while searching for something to read for our review raid this evening. I saw this and thought I'd give it a look see. I thought that this was a cute little poem and It brought to mind when I was a youngster, I was always under foot in my house, I was hyper and I'm sure I drove everybody crazy with my silliness. My parents were great and loved me very much but I was a lot to handle I'm sure.


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Hi Northwood and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read for our raid. I saw this and was really just taken away. It is funny and sweet I just loved it. My favorite part of this poem is the following stanza:


A slug trail up my trouser leg,
and pigeon poo on my hat.
And if you think I smell a lot,
I was scent marked by the cat!

I thought that this stanza was so amusing and cute. You really did use your imagination and made a very clever little poem I thought. The title was excellent and very appropriate for the poem. good going.


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Review of Ode To Bob Dylan  
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Hi Tazman and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this item while I was searching for something to raid for the Power Reviewers Group today. I kind of like Bob Dylan at least some of his stuff. I used to work for an oldies radio station as an announcer so I heard his stuff often. He's a little man and kind of unkept looking to me. which I guess a lot of rock singers are, but then again he is not rock he is more folk or something similar of the sixties. Your poem was a real honor for him I thought. You must really like the guy.


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Hi {suser:killerlover18 } and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! This was a heart-felt poem I believe, and I always like it when people write from their heart, it makes the poem so personal. This poem is about the truth and how sometimes the truth can hurt you. I thought that the title was very appropriate for this poem and I also thought that the item description was helpful. you did a fine job creating this item. You seem to really have a flair for writing about the truth and an emotional side to it as well.


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Hi Kingfisher and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I'd like to wish you also a happy Account Anniversary today.
I found this item on the anniversary page and I thought I'd give it a read.
I really liked this Item, it is well written and you really did do wonders with it. The evil creeps at night, wow it was awesome. The title was very appropriate for the item I thought. You did a great job and deserve five stars I think.

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Hi Kat and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I'd like to wish you also a happy Account Anniversary today.
I found this item on the anniversary page and I thought I'd give it a look see.
I thought this was a great piece of work. You did fabulous, I could almost feel myself in the icy cold water and the pain of the cold shooting through my body.
It was well described and well written. I am so glad you were pulled out in the end. This was an awesome read.

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Hi rainbows and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I'd like to wish you also a happy Account Anniversary today.
I found this item on the anniversary page and thought I'd give it a look see.
I am glad that I did, it was really great. You consistently write good poetry, as I have read some of your work before. This was well written and well rhymed, and I love rhyming poetry, or traditional poetry. The rhythm on this poem was also great and it has an appropriate title. very good!*Thumbsup*

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Hi and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I'd like to wish you also a happy Account Anniversary today.
I found this item on the anniversary page and I thought I'd give it a look see.
It is profound and awesome, I really liked it. I thought you used alliteration well, without overdoing it. I also thought there was just enough rhyme to make it seem more poetic. I like the way that you used these poetic devices. This was a unique look at society I thought.

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Hi queen.dimples and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I do so hope that you are having a blessed day, as I am having on this day.
I found your poem, "You", while I was searching for something to raid. I thought it was very sweet.
I also thought it was good to write down what is in your heart. I did see a couple of mistakes, but they are very small and easy to fix.

You hold me tight
and i bury me face
i think i'm in love
but i got nothing to say

first of all the pronoun I should always be capital, even I'm.
also in the second line it should read "bury my face"... not me face
I would also change got in the last line to have...


as you can see they are minor mistakes and can be easily fixed.


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