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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! This little poem was very brief, what form is it? I do not recall the type it is. I love to read about Ireland because that is where my ancestors come from, or at least most of them. I thought that the title was ok and it was appropriate for the poem. The item description was also very helpful to the reader/reviewer. Your thoughts of Ireland and Saint Patrick's day are very well formed and I liked the overall poem it is well written.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Oldwarrior and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! May I just say I Loved this wonderful and beautiful poem about finding a lass and a pot of gold. It really was a well put together poem, I saw no mistakes and I loved the rhythm and the rhyme, It flowed wonderfully.
I thought that the title was rich and well chosen as it is appropriate for this particular poem. I think that the item description is also well written and helpful to the reader/reviewer.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I love a good limerick, They are usually pretty cute and humorous.
I thought yours was very good. I loved it and enjoyed reading it. I've read much of what you have written and I know that you have a lot of talent and I can appreciate it. The title was unusual but also appropriate. Since this was written in a book which holds several different items, you did not have a item description. I really appreciate your talent.

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Review of Sons of Erin  
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Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I see that you have written a nice little limerick about Saint Patrick's Day. All the various countries celebrate this as a Holiday to celebrate the Saint who brought Christianity to the country of Ireland.
I liked the title of your cute little limerick and I do believe you have a helpful item description. I can really appreciate your talent, I've read many of your works in the past so I know how talented you really are.

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Review of Irish Heaven  
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Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I think you are doing a really good job writing these cute little limericks, they are so much fun to read. This is the second one that I've read this evening. This was written for a contest, I hope you won or at least placed in the limerick contest. I love the title of this poem and I think that it is appropriate. The item description is very helpful to the reader/reviewer.
You are a talented poet and author so keep on writing.

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Hello Tim Chiu ,I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages. I must say, I never would have thought that jeans would be a subject for a poem. It works though.
The title is great and is appropriate for the item. The item description is also good and helpful to the reader, as it tells what the poem is about.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Mush , I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read and review this evening. I thought that you did a fantastic job on this essay. Gandhi was a great man and you've chosen to pick him to write about, that says a lot about you. The title is very good and also very appropriate, I thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader/reviewer. My favorite part of this essay is:

.( For example in USA in 2008 there was a rate of 11.6 % of deaths from suicide while in 2017 the rate went to 14% )
So basically behind Gandhi's phrase: " Poverty is the worst kind of violence " is hidden a message of equality and of respect towards the human as a human and not the human as their yearly income.

I really do think that you chose wisely in writing this piece.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com while I was searching for something of interest to read this evening.
I liked the title, it is appropriate for this particular item. I think that the item description is nice and helpful to the reader/reviewer. I liked the subject it was a romantic poem written for your girlfriend and I think she probably liked it very much if you showed it to her. My favorite part is:

You have touched my being
With emotions so rare
That my heart grows airy and light
With the captivating chorus
Of starstruck angels dancing overhead



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Review of Sun  
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Hello Joy I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read and review. I thought that the title of the poem was excellent and appropriate for this item. I do believe that the item description needs to describe the poem to some extent. I see that this is written for the Writers Cramp contest. I thought that you did a great job creating this particular piece of literature. My favorite part is the following:


how beautiful life can be
when through cracks your smile enters
lighting up the clouds
from a majestic distance
in celestial energy

It is a wonderful stanza .

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Review of amends  
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Hello nancnancrevolution ,I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read and review. I like the title I think it is appropriate for the item, However I think it should be capitalized. I think that the item description was helpful to the reader/reviewer. I am so glad that you have gotten your life together by getting sober. That is a hard thing to do so congratulations and good luck.

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Review of Moving On (LJM)  
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Hello Katdembickjy ,I found this item while I was searching for something interesting to read on the read and review pages of writing.com.
I thought that this was very unique and different. I liked reading it very much.
I thought that the title was appropriate for this item, However I do believe you should have written something more substantial for the item description because that is what makes the reviewer decide whether they want to continue on with reading the item. This was a very nice piece.


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Review of HOME  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Afficiando , I came across this little item while searching writing.com for something of interest to read and review. I liked the title to start with, I think it Is warm and very appropriate for this piece of writing.
I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader/reviewer.
Home is where the heart is that's where you lay your head. I think where you are accepted and loved for just who you are. If I am away from home I feel uneasy I love to be home where I feel safe and comfortable.

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Review of in a tangled web  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Rhyssa ,I came across your item while searching the site for something of interest to read. I liked your title and I also thought that it was very appropriate. I do believe the item description is lacking a good description of the poem. You really do need to write something of interest to the reader describing this poem, The item description makes a person decide whether or not they want to continue reading this item or go on to the next item.
The item is original and imaginative a very well thought out creation.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Njoki kamau ,I came across this item on the read and review page of writing.com. I thought that it was a powerful poem about love which fizzled out in the end. It began very passionate and lovely, and ended with your broken heart. The item description is ok and the title is very appropriate for the item. You shared your feelings and opened your heart in this poem and I thought it was so well done. My favorite line was the following:


I dreamt dreams, dreamier than any I had had.

I can say that this is a well thought out line.


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Review of The Holocaust  
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Hello Schnujo's in Alabama ,I came across this item on the read and review page this afternoon. I thought that the subject matter was perfect for our times. I am glad you wrote this thought provoking poem. It is truly very haunting,, I am handicapped so I guess if I lived in that time in Germany, then I would have been killed too. That is a terrifying thought for me. I love all people and I'm very sensitive It makes me cry to think about what was done over there and how many people had to die, including our soldiers who went to help free the people. Your poem was nice however it was filled with facts and a little hard to follow. but I loved it anyway and I hope you are fine with four and half stars.

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Review of Howdy  
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Hello NicChang ,It is so nice to meet you I am a power reviewer which means I read and review quite a bit. I love it when we have someone new, you are a newbie and I welcome you to writing.com, there is so much to do here I think you will become addicted to it like most of us do. I've been here since 2012. I am already a moderator. If you are interested in joining a group, I would suggest . We have lots of fun there and the leaders are the best. I made friends here and so can you. You should by all means write a story or poem or a biography it would be great for you and be sure to post it in the shameless plug page. Do you know how to get around here. to post an item is not very hard if you need directions go to "Invalid Item"  and scroll down until you see the directions for posting a static item. I do hope you have fun!
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello +dollzell ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day. You have now been a valuable member of writing.com for nine wonderful years as of march 5.
I think that the title of this item was just perfect and also appropriate for the writing. I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader/ reviewer. The poem was very romantic in feeling, it was filled with emotion, which I believe is a great thing. The rhymes were very good and helped with a bit of rhythm. I can feel what you are saying and that is the mark of a real author. You communicate well with the reader. I loved the last stanza the most. The following was my favorite part of your lovely poem.

Yes we had moved on with our lives and families
At least we had love laughter wonderful memories
If the time comes when both of us are suddenly free
Beam yourself to twilight space,rendezvous with me.

The only thing that stands out is the last sentence on the above stanza.
If you would please notice there needs to be a space aftedr the comma and before the word rendezvous...



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Caroline Scott ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I hope you have a blessed day today. You have been a valuable addition for writing.com. This poem or letter to your future kids is just a wonderful idea. It is original and imaginative I agreed whole heartedly with the things you will teach your future children. I am a devout Christian and I believe this world has so much to offer and it is wonderful a true gift from God. I did see on tiny error with one of the lines here is the following:

Because, sweethearts, your maternal grandparents mostly likely did
And look where it got them
You are my children
And you are flipping brilliant!
I'll repeat this time and time again
Don't be afraid to cry in front of me
Mommy understands
And she will try her best to cry in front of you
EAT YOUR STUPID VEGETABLES!

if you notice in line one above you say mostly likely did...
I believe it would sound better if you said Most likely.




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Review of Surrendered  
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Hello Chuck ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine Monday evening. I hope you have had a blessed day. I thought that this was a well written piece of literature, Your words shine. I think that you did a wonderful job creating and writing this item. The title was appropriate for the poetry. I do think that a little more information is needed in the item description. You say this poem is about progress. You did a great job!\
My favorite stanza was the following:

When did I quit the earth?
When did I forsake the frosty dawn,
Vagrant fog and rising breath,
For Starbucks and stoplights?

I especially liked the second and third lines of this well written poem.
I commend you for such a nicely written poem. I would most certainly recommend
this poem to the readers. Very good!



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Hello ..LetMeThink.. ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I see that you have been a member of writing.com since March 3, 2010, you have me beat by two years as I became a member in 2012. I thought that you did a very good job creating and writing this particular poem. I really liked it. I am sorry that this happened to you. I wonder what they said about you though, because you did not say. It must have hurt you deeply for it to bother you still today. People can ruin your life with lies you know. I think at some point in our lives we've all experienced being lied upon. It must have really been bad it your so called friend turned on you like that. I think you did the right thing confronting her with it. Your title was great and a really good and appropriate title. Your item description was helpful to the reader / reviewer as well.



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Review of Fear  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello KyshaNycol ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today, as I am having. I really liked this little poem I thought that it was just great. first of all, the title was appropriate for the writing, and the item description was both, helpful to the reader/reviewer and very well written.
I hate fear, I believe it is one of those feelings that drags us down, but I guess we need it because if we didn't have fear the whole world would go crazier than it already is. Fear keeps people in check, if you know what I mean. I thought you had good rhythm and good rhyme with this poetry. I did see two small mistakes however.

You voice is dark and heavy, like a storm carried in the wind.
You've streaked me of my freedon, to your calling I gave in.
You taunt me with my failures, and feed me with your lies;
Preying on my weakened spirit; you are burden in disguise.

I think it would sound better if you said stripped me of my...in the second line.
Also in the second line you put freedon it should be freedom. but other than that it really is a quality poem.



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Hello Joey's So Hot He's Melting ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This evening, You have been a valuable member of writing.com since March 1, 2011, a total of eight years. I have you beat by one year, as My anniversary is January 29, 2012. I like the idea behind this item I love learning little known facts especially about famous people. I did find this item to be very interesting. I also thought that your item description is helpful for the reviewer/reader. I have read some of your items before and I think you are an accomplished writer for sure. I am glad that you entered this poem in your item. I found it to be very sweet. I love the formal wording of the age . We have lost our ways in speech I believe. Thanks for the entertainment this evening, as I love learning new poems and new facts.



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Hello a Sunflower in Texas ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have been a valuable member of writing.com since March first, 2002, which is about eighteen wonderfully glorious years. I thought the title was very appropriate for this particular poem, I also thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader/reviewer. You really have been a member much longer than I have been. I thought this was a pretty insightful poem about the city train. I only rode on a city train one time, when I visited Washington DC, and I must say that I truly enjoyed it very much.

People go by, seated in cars with windows that pass
To quickly to see,
So I pee with an unadorned window,
So the city and I seldon sleep.
Allowing seeking eyes,
But the train goes too fast....

I only saw one very tiny little mistake in your poem. If you will look above you will catch it for yourself. The word should be seldom not seldon.
That is an easy mistake just a little type O.




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Hello fyn ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today, as I am having. I thought that the title, "And," is a very appropriate title for this particular poem. I also think that the item description is very helpful to the reader/reviewer. This is an odd subject for a poem but I believe that you state your case very well. You have been a member of writing.com since March 1, 2005, you have me beat by a significant amount if time. I think that you are a very valuable member of writring.com "and" we are glad to have you as a member for the past fourteen years. I have read your writing before "and" I think that you are consistently a talented writer. I don't know why but this item feels like a winner to me "and", I give you Four *Thumbsup*



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Hello Pora ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do hope that you have a blessed day. I can start with the title.
The title was very good for a title for this particular poem. Next, the Item description does tell us what to expect from your writing, However in the description you always need to capitalize the letter "I" as a pronoun.
Now the poem itself is good and you have successfully made your point.
I did see an error or two, towards the end. Below I will show you your mistakes or at least I believe them to be mistakes.

Where size “godlike” fits you like a glove,
This admiration, adoration and infatuation with this goddess, this dove,
Would remain your cross to bear,
Your secret love

if you look above in the first sentence, You will see the word Godlike, you need to always capitalize a word that contains God.



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