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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating ,I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com.
I have never seen this form before and I really liked it. I see it called for eight syllables, I think that you did a wonderful job creating this item.
I liked the title and I thought that it was very appropriate for the poem.
The item description was also very helpful.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Hello Tim Chiu ,I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com as I was searching for something of interest to read. I really liked this little poem which is about your gifts to your girlfriend. I think it is a sweet gesture that you buy for her what she prefers.
This poem had a good rhythm and it rhymed really well. I think that it is an overall perfect little poem.

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Hello Maryann ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary a day late, sorry for the delay but I', behind on everything as I just got out of the Hospital after having a seizure. I found this little item in your portfolio, I thought that it was a really well written poem.
The title is majestic and appropriate and the item description is also very helpful. I really do think that you did a terrific job creating this item. You did an excellent job writing this.

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Hello JTJoseph ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this glorious day, I do hope you are feeling blessed today, as I am. This was a lovely acrostic poem dedicated to your mother on mothers' day. I love my mom so much and I feel great to still have her with me. I do hope that you still have yours as well. it was a lovely poem.



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Review of For a Dear Friend  
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Hello Samantha Quade ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this gloriously beautiful day which God has blessed, I do hope that you are feeling blessed today as I am. I think the title of this item is very good and I feel that your friend was your inspiration to write this. Your friend should read this little poem it would be endearing to her. I think the item description was helpful to the reader as it told us what was going on in the poem.



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Review of Ducks in the Pond  
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Hello AspiringAmanda ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this delightfully lovely day, I do so hope that you are feeling blessed today as I do. I loved this little piece of poetry, "Ducks in the Pond", I thought that the title was very appropriate for the item and the item description was also very helpful. I love ducks I used to have three ducks a white one and two black ones.
I really loved my ducks but a dog got in to their pen and killed all three of them. It broke my heart. now I just go to the lake in the summer and feed the ducks there some bread. They really appreciate it I believe. This poem was a delightful little glance into the world of the ducks which reside in a pond. I can't get enough of these ducks, I had a little baby white duck that would follow me around like I was her mama.



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Review of The Sum  
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Hello SKYDOC ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this bright beautiful and sunny morning, I do so hope you are feeling blessed today as I do. You have been a valuable member of writing.com since April 17, 2007 so for about twelve years. Don't they go fast?
I thought that this poem was a perfect example of humanity and the emotions we get carried away with sometimes. You did a fabulous job creating this item. I love poetry and I think you chose to write about a good subject. my favorite part of your poem is the following:


I am that which comes
As tears, reason, and pleading end
As humanity, compassion, and love are swept aside

I am what all fear
Man

This was a fantastic ending to a powerful poem about emotions of human beings. I think that you have a great talent for writing poetry.


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Review of Sore Thumbs  
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Hello psplaya ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this bright and sunny and beautiful morning. I do hope you are having a blessed day, You have been a valuable member of writing.com since April 17, 2006 you've been a member for about nine years. I thin k the title of this item was cute and very appropriate for this item. I also thought that you were very helpful to the readers in your item description as you tell us that it is about video games and your addiction to them. My nephew has a serious addiction to video games and the marvel items. His easy to buy for because you can get him anything with marvel on it or something to use on his xbox or ps2 He especially likes the games that refers to ww11. I thought that this was a perfect poem for you to write,my favorite part is:

He can only take a few more hits and his energy will be depleted.
Mission completed.
Game defeated.
So let me grab another.
Oh brother.
Here we go again!




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Review of Before the Winter  
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Hello James (Himura) I do hope that you are having a very blessed day
,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, You have been a valuable member of writin g.com since April 17, 2001, that is a total of about eighteen years congratulations on that. This is a lovely little short poem which you wrote about love and the seasons. I thought that you did just a fantastic job
creating this perfectly delightful little poem. I thought that the title was very appropriate for this particular piece of poetry. The Item description was very helpful for the reader as it told what the poem is about in your mind.
My favorite part of your poem is the following:

You and I will walk that road together,
I'll show that all the dreams are true,
if you only let `em be before the winter.

I love the way you show togetherness in this item.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Shannon ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a blessed evening.
I thought that this was a terribly romantic piece of literature. You created a nice and very exotic piece of work. I thought that the title was very appropriate for this item. I also thought that the item description was very helpful for the item. this is a fantastic piece of work an d I believe that it deserves five stars for this piece of work. this was not a very long poem but I felt that it was very meaningful. It is a poem about two lovers who have a tremendously loving relationship. Your anniversary is April 11, 2006,, which is about thirteen years of being a valuable member of writing.com. We are lucky to have you as a member of writing.com.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Voodoo Dreamer ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you have been having a blessed day today. I thought that the title of this item was a little bit peculiar but it really does work. The item description is very appropriate and helpful to the reader. I really did like this item and I thought that you did a fantastic job creating this item. I though that this item was very original and you did a fabulous job with it. I don 't like thieves I was robbed recently and everything I own was stolen . I thought the rhyming was good and it also had a very n ic e rhythm I thought. This piece was a great piece of literature, your subject matter was perfect. I thought that it rolled off of my tongue just beautifully. You did a great job writing this item. it is great.*Thumbsup*



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Review of time to unwind  
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Hello Rhyssa , I came across this timeless poem on the read and review pages of writing.com. I think it is a wonderful description of a way to unwind.
I see that in 2015, it was a finalist for a Quill award. I congratulate you for that. It is an awesome poem and a good thing for people to take in to consideration at the end of a day. If it were mine I believe I would capitalize the title, which by the way is appropriate for the poem. I think that the item description was also helpful to the reader.

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Hello , I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read on the read and review page of writing.com.
I Have heard of this form of poetry before although I have never attempted to create one myself. I thought that you did a fine job creating this one, I really liked the subject I Love all things spiritual. I even named my Poetry book "Spiritual Awakenings".


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Review of No excuses  
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Hello Elayne ,
I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, I think this is a fine thing to ask yourself, it is important for ourselves to follow our goals and Our dreams. We should first love ourselves is what the saying says. I believe I've heard it that way any how. but it is also important to have a loved one and to put them first. I am personally in the thought that we should put our loved ones first. I guess it just depends on how you were raised or if you have a significant other as to how you live your life.

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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon ,I just finished reading this item where I found it on the read and review items on writing.com. I liked it I found humor in it and I thought it was a real good item. The rhymes were great and it had a good rhythm and flowed real nice as well. I commend you on this great piece of humor, your work is valued. I enjoyed reading this item and look forward to reading more from you in the future.

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Hello IceSkatingSugarCube , I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on the reading and reviewing pages of writing.com/
I think that spring makes everybody happy. The sun shining bright and the scent of beautiful flowers. I am happy to see the depressing winter go away. The cold, the snow, no song birds, and so on. The only good thing about winter is the holidays and the end of it. Your piece is well written and I did not see any mistakes with it.

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Hello {suser:captain.marvel , I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com/
I thought that the title was appropriate for this item, I further thought that the item description was helpful to the reader. I thought that this was a very nice piece I did, however, see a few mistakes that tripped me up a little bit.
if you will notice the following and read them out loud.

Pretty. That's what they whisper as I walk don the grand staircase.

My mother meet me with a smile and she takes my arm

Scars, callused hands, I notice when I allow him to take my own, tall, muscled figure, and an alert, battle ready stance, a warrior. I study him in silence for a second or two and right before allowing it to become awkward he says, "Have you ever been to he Frozenlands?"

If you will notice in the first line above don should be down, you simply left out the w.

also on the second line meet should be met because it is past tense what you are writing about.

If you read the next lines you will see that if read out loud it doesn't really sound too well. It is hard to read. There is something about all of those commas perhaps you should rewrite it in two sentences, kind of breaking up some of this.

If you will notice right before you say Frozen lands the word is the not he, you left off the t in the word.

That is all of the corrections that I have for you. They are mostly just minor little type O's

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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, I think that you have a good sense of humor or you wouldn't have written this cute little poem. I think that the title is appropriate and that the item description was also helpful for the reader/reviewer. You did a fantastic job creating and writing this item. I really enjoyed it. I always seem to enjoy the poetry that you write.
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Hello isokarifrancis , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, I think this is a strange quote I understand the last line however the first line is a blur in my mind. I think that by applying cosmetics, means trying to change who you are. The title of the item is appropriate as this is a quote and if you say so it's words of wisdom. I think that I need the first line explained to me.
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Hello Brooooks ,I found this little sample of your writing on the read and review pages of writing.com. I think it is a really nice example of how you write. I found one thing about your writing a little peculiar. The fact that the whole item is written in present tense. I found it to be very different, not wrong per say but just a little off putting if you know what I mean. I'll give you an example:

The little girls looks to her grandmother with watery eyes. “Life will get better, you remember that.” Her grandmother holds her tightly.

The above example is good but I would think it would be like:

The little girl looked to her grandmother with watery eyes. "Life will get better, you remember that." Her grandmother held her tightly.

Do you see the difference? also you don't need the s on the end of girl, because it is not plural. I think you write well, and it is not incorrect to write in present but it is just a little different and sounds better in past tense. But by all means write it the way you feel most comfortable it is your work and you should feel happy with it. I think the title is appropriate and very creative. I also understand that this is just a scene from a short story therefore you go back and read it out loud and see which sounds better.


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Review of Autumn Passage  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, This is a wonderful Triquain chain poem. I like that you tell what type of poem it is and give a definition. It helps the reader to learn. I loved this poem about nature and the beauty from season to season. The wonderful colors of Autumn and Spring. I look forward to both seasons and summer as well with all the floral colors. Winter even has color if you take in to consideration the white snow and the beautiful red of the cardinal against the snow.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Antheia ,I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com this afternoon. I really thought this was a solemn piece, I had a little bit of a hard time following the idea behind this item. Is he dead or not? I'm sorry but you spread his ashes in the ocean but then you tell him he was never really gone... I don't understand unless you mean he is still alive in your heart, and if so you need to write that somewhere in the item. I like the idea of your item and think it is well written but I just got lost a little bit at the end.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Ran Maeve , I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read on writing.com. I thought that this was a fabulous piece of writing, it was short and sweet but very well written. The title of the item was perfect and appropriate for the item. The item description was very helpful to the readers. I liked this item , especially how the words were shortened and contracted. You did a fantastic job *Thumbsup*

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Review of Barrier  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Jack Ferguson , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, I was looking for something of interest to read and Here I found it. I liked the title and I thought that it was appropriate for the item.
I thought that the item description was somewhat helpful as it tell the reader that it is about a person you thought you knew, but really did not.
I think that the poem was very curious , why did the girl seem to shy away from the man in the poem. The way it is written we think she was badly hurt emotionally by a man in the past.



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Review of Softly now  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Antheia ,I came across this item on the read and review pages on writing.com. I would like to welcome you to writing.com and tell you that we are a tight nit community of writers. You will probably find that you become addicted to this site. We all do! I want you to know if you need any help with the site to just let one of the moderators know. This is a wonderful little piece of writing. It is short but it is also from your heart, which makes it lovely.


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