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Hello keoshortstack, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I did not exactly know how to take this particular piece of writing. The poem rhymed very well I found it to be both sad and comforting. The part that made me think twice was where you say you had a blade in hand.... It made me think you were going to do something desperate that you shouldn't. I did like the part where you say you will be on the roof and be hand and hand. That's a beautiful thought.


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I really enjoyed the pros and cons of this wintery poem.. I love snowmen and snow angels, they are both so very fun to create I guess the pros. I love snowball fights with friends and warming by a blazing fire while drinking hot chocolate. But there are the cons as well. like slick roads, freezing temperatures, falling ice cycles,
and of course catching a cold and stuff. I thought you used great details with your writing. I look forward to the first snow of the winter right now.
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Hello Xeno , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
I had a little bit of a hard time with this poem, I felt the tenses were off, I don't know if you're talking about the present or the past. I would suggest going back, reading this poem out loud and then deciding whether or not it needs some work.
The subject was great and the writing of the poem was good, but I just couldn't quite get over the tense of the poem. The title was appropriate for the item Fate is a good strong title. Just go back and work on the tense of it.

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Hello patricia1962 , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I enjoyed reading this poem, I thought that it was out of sight.
That was the only thing I saw wrong with this item. You wrote that it is a short story when it reads more like poetry. I don't guess it really matters. Unless someone tunes in to read a short story and is disappointed that it is poetry instead.
I think the title is good and it is appropriate for this item. The item description is also very helpful to the reader.
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Hello 💙 Carly - aka Joan Watson , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. Carly, I wonder what the dark shadow represents in your poem, is it a certain person, or evil in general? I liked the poem it has a serious almost spooky tone to it I thought. It made me feel uneasy as I read it, I expected something unholy to jump out from under the table and grab my legs or something. It is very good writing when you make someone feel your writing as they read it. well done


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Hello keatonfoste, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I found this item to be a very straight forward piece, written by a serious writer, someone who really has something to say about life and how hard it is living it. I thought you did a very good job creating this piece, however, I did get confused about one little section of your poem. The following had me scratching my head wondering what you meant:

I do not write what can been proven
I wish to only write about the many untruths

I wonder if you mean what can be proven or if you meant what can't be proven. either way, you need to clarify it I believe.
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Item Title: The story of a dark boy

Author: Mark Riddle

type: Short story

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: HelloMark Riddle , I came across this little story while searching for something od interest to read on writing.com's read and review items list this Sunday evening. I really enjoyed reading your story parts of it really made me smile and I found it to be very well written and clear.
I thought you did a great job with the title it is appropriate for the story.

EXCERPT: “Oh, God! Wretched I am!” Mrs. Calhoun stamped her foot remembering the present, “He’s already a bad boy and I reckon my sister will show him how to BEHAVE. And Tom, you are going to get that boy back from the woods and teach him a lesson. Aren’t you?”

“No.” Mr. Calhoun smiled weakly, making another big blotch with his ink, “I’ll try to finish my letter and the other letter in queue. And let me hear that we are sending our boys to get well – educated and learn the manners of the City, rather not for the reason you prescribed.”



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Item Title: Interloper

Author: Zeke

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Zeke , I read this little item and I thought it was just great. I am so sorry to hear that you had a stroke and can no longer write. That is such a shame, as you are an awesome poet. I know that some people like the little yellow flowers and others hate them, me, I'm stuck in the middle. you did a fantastic job with this subject.

Suggestions: I saw no mistakes.


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Item Title: Kolkata Airport

Author: ABU SIDDIK

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello ABU SIDDIK , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list this evening. I do so hope you have had a blessed day today, as I have. The title of this poem is very appropriate and I liked it. The item description is also very helpful to the reader of the poem.
This shows two different sides of people who fly the airline. some appear healthy and others ill.

EXCERPT:
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Maybe they sell a plot
Or two cows or trees,
And are on their way to
A famed speciality clinic.


Suggestions: If you will notice in the last sentence above, In the word specialty, there is an after (i)the (l), which is incorrect.

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Item Title: Sunny(Entry#1)

Author: Tanya Bose

type: non fiction

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


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First Impression: Hello tanya, I came across this little item about your life on writing.com's read and review items list this evening.
I think that you did a really good job creating this biography. I do hope you will come back and finish it. I was really starting to get into it for sure.
the title is appropriate for the item you wrote and I think the item description is helpful and a bit sad, I hate to hear that anyone is lonely.


Suggestions: I saw no mistakes with your writing, I have no suggestions for improvements.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Seize Cruise

Author: Words Whirling 'Round

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Words Whirling 'Round , I just came across this little poem on writing.com's
read and review items list this evening. I found your poem to be written in a very formal tone I thought. I liked it though.
Your title is very appropriate for your poem and the item description is somewhat helpful to the reader.



Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and I have no suggestions for you.


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Item Title: Jelly

Author: Jacky

type: poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Jacky , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list this evening. I really enjoyed your little work of fiction, I thought that it was really cute. I felt that the title was appropriate and I also thought the idea for the subject was unique. Who would have thought to write about jelly.

Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and have no suggestions for improvements.
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Item Title: of no use

Author: Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and read poetry. and review items list. I think you show real talent for writing poetry. I thought the poem was very deep and really explored the dark side of what humanity can feel about themselves. The title was appropriate for the item and the iten description is very helpful as well.


EXCERPT:
He was given away
Tossed into the deepest grave
The entire world was placed
Right down upon his chest
Since that day all that he has done
All that has made any sense
Has been a continual effort towards escape


Suggestions: I thought this person experienced hell. I saw no mistakes,
and have no suggestions for improvements.


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Item Title: The evening edition

Author: ~ Brian K Compton ~

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Legend unborn, I'm the judge of

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I see you had a last minute entry sorry it took a while to get back to you. I
am just about to judge the contest and it's not going to be easy,your entry was very good, I enjoyed reading it. there were so many good entries..

Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your entry and have no suggestions for its improvement.


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Item Title: Return of the doe

Author: Tinker

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~

Thank you for entering m littlecontest

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I really enjoyed readding your poem about the deer, I think they are so beautiful and peaceful as well. I had one come to my fence every day in the woods where I live. I loved to go out and sit and watch it eating. Your poem was delightful and esxactly what the story poem contest is all about. I am so glad you entered.

ySuggestions: I saw no mistakes and have no suggestionx for improvement.
good luck!


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Item Title: Consequences

Author: fyn ,

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello fyn , I came across this little item on writing.com's read and review items list. I think that it was a really well written piece of literature. I really enjoyed it very much. I like poetry about stars and clouds and such. yours was very original.



Suggestions: I have no suggestions for improvements and I saw no mistakes.


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